1st ff on maaneet SIRF MERE LIYE THREAD 1 (link 2) - Page 57

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
hi di sorry for not commenting...
was lil busy...
but never missed the updates...
loved both of it...
plzzz update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Sirf mere liye


thanks a lot frnds,,, for all the lovely comments... keep pressing like n give some ur precious comment it really feels good... this story will end in few more update,, actually in 23 parts... so i hope till then u will be with me like this only... thanks a lottt


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part 47

The morning brightness was filled with their love,,,, geet was on top of maan,,, covered in red duvet'. Maan slowly open his droopy eyes,,, then his attention divert to the sleeping beauty,, her hair is all messed up'. Some skins are red in his passion as the bite marks are clearly visible'. He make her lied in the bed,, and takes the hair behind her ear' caressing her face along with her jaw'. The duvet was sliding off from her neck to her shoulder exposing her milky white skin,, he looked at her intently,, her face is glowing at the contact of the sun ray,, his hand didn't seem to stop, as his other hand took her in his embrace,, she cutely pouted at the continuous changing position, yet she is sleeping In his arms,, didn't want to move from there.. he remember the words he has said to her, her painful eyes, her tears, it still pricked his heart,, how could he say something like that,, still she loves him madly,, last night also, she forget her pain in his pain,, she was hurt but more in his hurt'. Maan kissed geet's forehead, waking her up,, she finaly open her eyes with a smile, but her smiled vanished when a single tear rolled down from his eyes and it drops on her cheeks'

Geet: maan kya huya?

Maan: I m sorry geet'. She could sense the words he had said earlier he could not put out of his mind' he is guilty and that is clearly visible in his eyes,, but she can't bear a single apprehension in him'. She pulled him on her,, and suck his lower lip, convincing him everything is fine'.. he has not the courage to take the charge but yet she made him at command,, she slipped her tongue in his mouth,, and twirled it with his tongue,,, his hardening was visible very much'.. she takes his hand and move it on her body making him groan,, she knew he can't control over her'.. then his hand knows what to do,, he pinned her to the bed and kisses her with equal fervor, till now she was at command but now he won't spare her.. she smiled in the kiss,, his hungry mouth want more access,, she happily gave in' both are breathless,, still didn't wanted to break the contact between their lips'. He comes to her neck, giving wet kisses' the kiss were hot and demanding, claiming her to ease the pain that she have to suffer,,, it was sweet tender as well as passionate'' she let out a moan that driven him crazy with desire'..

She knew his inner turmoil is slowly fading away,,, he wanted to show her how much he love her, how much he crave for her,,, and she let him do whatever he want to do to show his love'.. she hold his neck pulling hair, that was giving more power to his love,,, his claiming was going higher and higher with each passing moment,, he kisses her on the mark he has left on her last night, he lick the portion and gave wet kisses there trying to soothing the pain'. She let out a cry in passion and happiness,,, but the tear couldn't reach down as he drank it,, he looked at her in concern but her smile said it all,,, he took the juicy lips in a relishing kiss'. But his hand roam around her body endlessly,,, he cupped her curves his palm and squeeze it a little, she moan in his mouth,, then he took the charge of sucking that,, his one hand was constantly rubbing itt while his mouth sucks the other curve'.. it was not rough yet it was arousing her like never before,, she wanted to feel him inside her but he continue to shower his love on her mercilessly ignoring her plea,, he wanted to feel her special like never before,,, she bite his shoulder in anxiety and anticipation,, but he sucks her other curve aggressively..

Geet moan his name unaccountably: maan pls,, he comes to her lips and sealed it with his,, the next moment she find herself in ecstasy of passion and love that he filled in her'. He move in her in fast pace as they could hit the climax any moment,, she was moaning louder and louder,,, he came to her lips and sucks the lower lips,, she didn't feel any pain but only she want it more harder and he gave her all she want,,, he squeeze her curves and bite it in his passion making her scream but that was feeling heaven to her'.. at last they hit the final destination,, he collapse on her chest and then rolled down next to her taking her on his chest'.

She kissed his chest,, and drifted to sleep as she is very much tired with their nonstop claiming session,, he caresses her back and notice she is fast asleep'. He kissed her forehead and decided to catch some sleep'..

Armaan: I think he is not a good choice for her..

Riddhima: please armaan she loves him, and he loves her a lot'.

Armaan: yeah and that's why he has accuse her like that,,

Sid: wo gusse me tha yaar..

Armaan: so what, gusse me tha to kuch bhi keh dega, kal gusse me tha to ye sab kaha,, kal fir gussa hoga, to fir ye sab kahega''

Riddhima: u are overreacting armaan,,, they both love each other and whatever happen its between them so just let them decide what they want to do'

Armaan: geet abhi immature hain, she doesn't know what is good for her,,

Riddhima: and u are mature enough?

Sid: god please tum dono ladai mat karo,,, ye un dono ki bich ki baat hain..

Riddhima: exactly my point side,, armaan gave a threatening look to her,, but she ignore him'.

Sid: ok mujhe kuch kaam hain, main abhi aata hu' he leaves from there'.

Armaan: whats ur problem ha, tum janti ho maan uske liye thik nahi hain then why r u supporting him after hearing all his rubbish talk'.

Riddhima: tum uski shadi geet se is liye nahi rokna chahte k wo uske sahi ya galat hain,, u wanted this marriage to stop as U LOVE HER AND CAN'T TOLERATE ANYONE TAKING HER AWAY FROM U'' armaan instantly raise his hand to slap her'.

Armaan shouted: RIDDHIMA''. She looked at him shocked,, tears come up instantly in her eyes'

Riddhima: ruk kyun gaye armaan,, maro,,, sach karwa laga? Her voice was choked and broken'

Armaan closed his eyes and tried to say something but riddhima continue: main janti hu armaan tum usse pyar karte ho,, aur aaj se nahi tab se jabse usne mini ko bachaya tha,, tumne usse pehli baar dekhte pyar kar liya but kabhi keh nahi paaye, lekin isme uski kya galti hain, wo to bechari tumhe sirf accha dost manti hain' she loves only maan' armaan closed his eyes as he remember his first meeting with her''

Flashback''''

Doctor please isse jaldi se admit kar lijiye,, she is really very serious,,

Dr: aap hume mat sikhaiye, ye serious hain k hum, hum doctors hain sab jante hain, aap jaake pehle police station me FIR dijiye fir yaha ke formalities puri kijiye, fir hum inhe attend kar sakte'..

Aap doctor hain? he looked at her in confusion'. Aap to insaan kehne k bhi layek nahi hain,, ye yaha mar rahi hain aur aap keh rahe hain pehle FIR then formalities,,, tab tak ye mar jayegi,,, ye sab to hum baad me bhi kar sakte hain na'

Dr: dekhiye miss, ye to rule hain agar ye nahi maana gaya to I m sorry main kuch nahi kar sakta'

Aap sach me insaan nahi hosakte, ek janwar me bhi isse kahi jayada dard hota hain, she is a kid, she can die anymoment and u r saying aap kuch nahi kar sakte' aap jaise log is desh ka ye haal bana rakkha hain'.

Dr: mind ur tongue miss,, najaane kaha se chale aate hain, jaiye kisi govt hospital me jaiye, ye ek rutated hospital hain jaha rules and regulation mane jaate hain'

RULE N REGULATION TO AAB APKO SAMAJHNE HONE DR SHARMA'.. here came a deep voice with a sweet and charming look'

Dr: doctor ARMAAN'' aap ye'

Armaan: ye itni serious yaha padhi hain aur aap rules n regulation samjha rae hain, hamari rules logo ki jaan bachana hain,,, so just move,,, nurse iss OT me shift karo, main isse khud attend karunga' he is a senior doc of a well known hospital sanjeevani'.. its a great acchivement that at a age of 28 he is a senior doc in sanjeevni,, and a very good surgeon,, a heart specialist'. he goes to attend her and she waited outside'.. after half n hour he comes out from the OT'.

How is she doctor?

Armaan: she is fine,, not serious injuries,, waise aap inki kon lagti hain?

Jee koi nahi'

Armaan: matalb? Aap?

Hii,, I m GEET,,, I was just crossing the road and see the kid was running behind a bus to catch up but piche se ek dusre bus ne,,,,, she couldn't say after it as a tears were rolling down her cheeks, instantly armaan tried to wiped it but she backed off'

geet: usse kuch hoga to nahi na? she is so small' sayad 11 12 saal ki hogi,, she said while looking at the mirror where everyone cleaning her wound' main collage ja rahi thi,,, aur ye dekha to,,,

armaan: u r a college student, she looks like that only,,,

geet: yeah I m doing 2nd yr'.

armaan; that's great,, ok aap yehi baithiye main mere serior doc ko inform karke aata hu,,,

geet: umm doc,,, wo mera aaj exam hain, can I go? I'll be here after my college' he looked at her amused

armaan: apka exam hain aur aap yaha hospital me wo bhi kisi aur ke liye' hats off to u'

she smiled at him,,, a warm smile: ye meri duty thi agar uski jagah meri khud ki bahen hoti to bhi to main wohi karti'.okto main apse sham ko milti hu, aap pls iska dhyan rakkhiyega'.

Armaan: don't worry I'll'' she left from there'.

After some hrs the small kid gains her conscious and they ask her whereabouts and found her parents'. They are so great full to geet that can't praise her enough'.

Armaan: hii beautiful.. the kid smile at him'.. mini?

Mini: yes'.

Armaan: aap kuch hi din me bilkul thik hojaogi'.

Mini: wo kaha hain jisne mujhe yaha laya,, mummy ne kaha wo angel hain,, he smiled at her..

Armaan: yes wo angel hain aur us angel ka naam Geet hain'

Mini: wo mujhse dobara milne nahi ayegi'

Riddhima: sayad nahi'..

Armaan: ye tum kaise keh sakti ho?

Riddhima: common armaan, usne isse yaha tak laya yehi bohot badi baat hain abb insab jhalemo me kon padhna chahega'.armaan think at thoughtfully

Mini: to wo nahi ayegi? She looked sad,, and then someone patted her back

Geet comes from the back: kisne kaha milne nahi ayungi'.mini's face instantly glow up''


Okk guys this is it,, here its beginning of armaan geet riddhima trio but don't worry I'll not fetch it...
Edited by tich.1990mg - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome di...
loved geet's understanding...
uffo armaan loves geet...
plzzz no probs b/t maaneet
ll be waiting
update soon😃
Edited by mayapari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 47
nice part...
so Armaan loves Geet but Geet doesnt...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update..
awww armaan luvs geet..
liked their first meet...
awww maneet romance was really passionate..
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nw armaan s getting on my nerves..
I understand that he loves geet..
but that doesn't mean that he can tell and do anything to ridz..
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update..
and wats this armaan loves geet..
oye no more problem
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful update...
and this armaan... 😕...
waiting to know the next...
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Posted: 13 years ago

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