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tina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

u made my heart stop for a second but then it was fine...really really fab job:)

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Mahi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

wowww👏... great update dear⭐️.. you always write so addicting👏👏..

loved the way ASR asked khushi not to leave him and go to her parents😭😭

i seriously felt like crying as i could imagine him doing that😭😭

that was the best part ever..⭐️

thanks a lot for the pm hun😃.. n please keep updating soon n sooner😉 hehe😆

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

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Posted: 13 years ago

#143

Nice one Z!!

My own heartbeat became erratic for a moment there!!!

It's all under control now...😆

Looking forward to the next one.

Thanks for the PM!!

😊

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music1

@music1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#144

Loved it dear.Reminds me of a novel I read long time ago.I guess the name was Abigail's journey,wherein the hero almost dies after an accident and she will be waiting outside his hospital room,him comming in her dreams and she reluctently telling him that he can leave her if he wants(coz she knows he is in pain),but should wait for him in heaven.Hero recovers and later when Abi visits him he tells her that he could'nt go.Just that and she knows he had actually died during their conversation and was back only for her. I am not good at expressing but ur story took me back to their confrontation.😊Well done dear.

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..Damsel..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

great update...thanks for the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#146

i nearlly had a heart attack!! bloody brilliant!

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.Sandal.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#147

loved it, i wish in epi's we get to see same arnav soon.

thankx for pm

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monsi08

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Posted: 13 years ago

#148

FINALLY i read all the part. Thanks for the PMs 😊

Aha ha... it is like a movie... full of drama, action, emotion and what not 😃
You build up the tension very well... But yaar kitna tension... bachche ki jaan logi kya 😆

towards the end of part 5 , i thought Khushi's heart beats stopped and Docs are going to give her those "electric shocks" and nothing working.. then ARNAV will go to her Devi Maiyya .. and say...
"Maine aaj tak tumse kuch nahin ,maanga" (*Amitabh like dialougs*)
Ha ha... 😆 Good that you brought me back from my *masala movie* thoughts and Khushi is fine now..
Hope to see some light and lovey-dovey moments from now on 😉

Cheers,
Monsi

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