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Posted: 13 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: lankan

it's great ! keep updating :) and I like ra-one too ! cause it released on my birthday, so all the countdowns shahruk khan had going for his movie somehow felt very special to me. But I seriously love the song chamak challo, it's so catchy... :)


Thank you!,i know chammak challo is such an amazing song haha ooh oooh oohh!

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Posted: 13 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: littlemoi

awesome update!!

arhi nok joks are a treat to read!!
continue soon!!
i liked the post on page 1.. but i didnt get a pm for the update..


Im so sorry about that,please add me as a buddy to get a pm,please don't hurt me!

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Posted: 13 years ago
#93

Part 4:

RECAP:"KHUSHI ARNAV RAIZADAH,NO KHUSHI KUMARI GUPTA,HAI DEVI MAIYYA,KHUSHI!,DO NOT TRUST ARNAVJI'S MAN PERIODS-YOU KNOW WHAT A RAKSHASH HE IS,FROM ONE MINUTE HE IS A HAPPY-GO-BYE LUCKY LAAD GOVERNER AND ANOTHER MINUTE HE IS A ANGRY RAKSHAS,WATCH IF YOU DO ANYTHING BAD HE WILL TAUNT YOU HMMPH.

Just than a door-bell disturbed Khushi's thought's,Om Prakash went to open the door and the voice she heard on the other end had tranquilised her thoughts,she stood there paralized,scared and confused,she silently chanted'

"Good day,yeah right" she mocked.

Khushi stood there perplexed,her face immediately fell and she was terrifed,

"Hey devi maiya,please protect me from this snake,please please protect me" just than Arnav came shoulder to shoulder with Khushi,Khushi felt Arnav was an angel right than and there in the form of her laad governer.

Arnav however was aware of her gaze and was inwardly smiling at himself,he was very aware of Khushi's reaction to seeing his brother-in-law and was NOT going to doubt Khushi,atleast until he was sure.

"Rani saiba,im right here for you" chirped Shyam coming in through the doors,Anjali was ecstatic but to Khushi's bewilderment,he was hugging Anjali and eyeing her,eyeing her in such a way that she felt naked,she felt the intense pair of eye's eyeing her,so many eye's.she felt disgusting.

"I'll just be back" Khushi quickly scurried off into the kitchen and without realising started to make her jalebi's.

Arnav came into the ktchen and what he saw made hi smirk.

Khushi's sari pallu was folded into her waist, her face had some flour on it (I HAVE NO IDEA F U ADD FLOUR IN JALEBI) and she was trying to put her strands of hair behind her.

Arnav subconsciously came behind her putting locks of her hair behind her ear and putting his arms around her waist,he whispered into her ears silently with his breath hitting Khushi's warm flesh.

"Khushi.."

Khushi closed her eye's,her heart-beat started going dhak dhak really fast and for some reason..acidity?

Arnav smirked at this reaction, Khushi opened her eye's when she realised what she was doing,he never loved her,he doesn't,she's acting stupid.

"Arnavji,you here,do you need something?"

Without thinking Arnav quickly said "Khushi,don't go near Shyam, stay away from him,be careful,I need to go to the office"

Khushi stared at Arnav bewildered,she was confused,did Arnav tell her to stay away from Shyam because he didn't want her to come between Anjaliji and Shyamji or is it because he was afraid Shyamji would do some..KHUSHI STOP IT!,Khushi thought to herself.

"Arnavji,so you believe me?"

Khushi's eye's were hopeful,if the one person she loved more than the world believed her than to hell with Shyam,she would face 1000 Shyam's a day if she had the trust of her Arnav.

Arnav wnced,her hopeful eye's were so..so sad and he just had to get away.

Khushi watched him leave,sighed and ate the sticky jalebi in her hand.

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"Khushiji,come lets go mandir,we haven't been in so long,challe?" Anjali pleaded.

"Anjali ji,you go with naniji,Im feeling a bit tired today, I'll come tomarrow,please!

Anjali accepted,she noticed Khushi was not herself for the past few days,she was always reserved,sad and not the happy,bubbly Khushi Kmari Gupta everyone knew,she seemed so unhappy and Anjali knew she would have to speak to chotte about this.

"Arre Rani sahiba,you,naniji and mamiji go mandir,im feeling very tired from my journey,I'll stay at home and rest

"Theek hai,we'll come back soon" with that Anjali smiled and made her way to the exit where nani and mami were standing waiting to leave to go to the mandir.

"Now Khushiji,who will save you from me,I missed you so much, I will defiantly get a kiss from you atleast" Shyam cackled at his plan and walked towards Khushi's room.

The weather immediately turned bad,it was windy and started to rain,Khushi got up to close the window's when suddenly she felt the air in the room go stiff and her world was slowly falling apart.

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Hope you guys liked this bit,if you want PM'S,please add me as a buddy,likes and comments please guys,they motivate me,i hope u guys are all enjoying my FF,i have lots of fun writing it.



Song of the update:


😛 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yc3JavmHTQU

I was thinking of this song for Khushi towards Arnav and that stupid Snake!,see tried to have as little as him as possible


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Edited by CHIKA784 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
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OMG😲.. what a beautiful Arhilicious moment you presented us with!!😳😳
so beautiful.. 👏👏
he did it unintentionally😉.. went upto her and hugged her by her waist😉
sooo dreamyyy sweetness!!😍
n eww i hate his presence😡... disgusting🤢
cheapooo😡
all the bad names of this world are just meant for him🤢
n i hope that she doesnt get raped or anything😭.. i will seriously feel heartbroken
but i trust you sweetness!!😳 i know you wont do anything unfair to khushi and arnav😉
thanks for the pm hunnie.. 😃
with love😳
Mahi😳
Edited by _mahi_ - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
woh awesome update hun one request could you add a recap next time? sorry! but thanks if you do!

i rele hope Khushi doesn't get rapped :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: AquaBluez17

woh awesome update hun one request could you add a recap next time? sorry! but thanks if you do!

i rele hope Khushi doesn't get rapped :(

Okay,sure will,i'll edit it in 5 mins and add recap ps i think you owe me another update of FF:Promise to never leave me

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Edited by CHIKA784 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
n the song is just rockng you know😃
love atif😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
NOOO! where is arnav when you need him?!?!?!?! hope she doesnt get raped! nooo!
xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99

nice update!!

loved the arhi moment.. it was soo damn cute!!
but plzz plzz make arnav come to khushi's rescue so she doesnt get raped!! continue soon!! thank you so much for the pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
I'll update tomarrow hopefully,everyone's reaction is so cute,it makes me smile,i'll keep you all in suspense till tomarrow,i know exactly what i'll doo!!!😉

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