FF-Mahsoos. Maan & GEET.- THREAD 3- (note pg 142) - Page 65

Originally posted by: Tammana_Maaneet

Read all the parts of this thread now...
All were awesome...lovely n nice update...
So now Geet trying yo get comfy with maan...
Trip tym was really very nice...
How much they missed each other...
Now I guess they shud open up to each other...
I mean not that way as u think...Tht way they r already close...
I mean they shud openup verbally now...
As in maan talking to her a Little freely...
Or may I say Geet getting to know more abt him...
She has already started her efforts with taking up learning brail..
Rest is up to u...as u plzz to write,we r pleased to read...
Continue soon...wud be waiting...
Thnkx a lot n keep writing...!!! Muahhh..!!

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

amazing parts

i really liked the way u showed how geet was getting jealous due to pari and when she finally asked maan if they can share the bed it showed how comfartable she was getting with him.The way u showed how geet and maan were missing each other was really cute and when they met each other after 5 days it seemed they didnt know how to talk to each other,im glad they told each other how much they missed each other.cant wait 2 read da next parts.

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Originally posted by: kuhu18

awesome ...
still they did not have each other ph-no ... are you planning to do something with this track whatever you do... i am just loving this ff
i am sorry to say this but Maan is little bit dumbo in a sweet way in this ff

Originally posted by: fullyfaltu

well well well..

at first i was not very into this FF..
but as time and updates are revealing the real story i m falling for it...
its a sweet story with a strong point...
we say love is blind.. but none of us knows how it feels to be in love with someone blind...
i m eager to know the relationship development and its deapth between maaneet..

and about ppl having problem wid ur adult content...
i have a perfect idea for u only if u take it...ask ppl who wants to read this kind of stuff in the story and pm them the link only... dont put it in the open... in this way wired ppl who are at 1st enjoying the stuff and then going to mod nd complaining will get a slap.. as they wont get to know about the update and will definitely miss some real fun of ur story..


personally i dont think writing adult stuff should be discouraged in IF... cos its a way of learning... its far more better than the stuff available in net.. atleast u guys have the emotional angel attached to it... if someone is complaining against it... it shows their childessness