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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: ambbiha

awesome update

maan has not seen her i am sure he will be bold off wen he did😆😆😆😆😆😆
waiting for the next one

You're rite😆😆😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: luckystar007

wow good start dear. thanks for pm me.

Its ok..
Whats ur name????
If u dont mind...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
thank u Shalini...
😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: priti11

awesooome...fab...superb...

loved the upd dear...

thank u didi!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: anna12

interesting very nice i like the concept egarly waiting for next part plz update soon

Thanks anna di!!
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#66
thank u so much!!!
What's ur name????
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#67

Originally posted by: angel_smily

interesting story

luvd it
add me in ur pm list

Thank u Angel di!!(If that's ur name😆😆😆)
luv,
Amanda..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: geetsweet

awesome part...

& am confused abt rags... is she dead... ??????
y geet don't wanna marry...???????
continue soon...

Hello tanu di!!
Hw r u???
I'll reveal abt Rags soon..
Don't worry and keep on reading..
love u,
Amanda...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69

PART 2..

He turned towards the source of the noise and was shocked to see a woman who he guessed maybe in her early twenties,was sitting in front of the dressing table trying to remove her earrings.

He couldn't make out her face cos she was facing her back towards him.He felt a strong pull like a magnetic pull towards her.He slowly but unconsciously made his way towards the "mystery woman"..

He went closer to her and put his arm on her shoulder(Guys..He didn't see her face yet!!) and looked into the mirror to see her face...

His mind literally stopped working on seeing her face with closed eyes.When his arm made contact with HER shoulder her eyes snapped open and she stood up instantly.

She turned to face him and saw him look at her confused.

When his eyes fell on her Sindoor,his over smart brain realised that she was his wife!!!!

He took his arm away and suddenly the lights went off...

Geet was hell scared of the darkness that she at once hugged Maan tight and chanted,"Please mujhe akela chodke mat jayiye!mujhe andhera se bahuth darr lagtha hai.."

Maan was shocked at her reaction.He didn't know whether to hug her back or not.He felt a wierd sensation when their bodies were in such close proximity..

On the other hand,Geet felt secure in his arms.She didn't care whether he reciprocated the hug or not,but all she cared was to be safe in his arms...

After a few moments the lights returned and Maan realised what he was doing.

The nation's most eligible bachelor was now hugging a girl!!!???

He was furious.How dare she touch him??

He grabbed her by her shoulders and pushed her forcefully on the wall.She looked at him shocked,frightened and confused at his sudden act.

"Tumhari himmat kaise hui meri kamre mein aane ke liye!"he sneered.

"Par.."she started off to say something.

"mujhe kuch nahi sunna hai...I want to make one thing clear to you.I was forced into this marriage and I don't have time to fulfil all your expectations..So mujhse aur meri zindagi se door raho..Aur haan..tumhe jo kuch bhi chahiye-money,jewels,luxury aur sab kuch I'll give you..but I don't want to see you ever again..kyunki mein tumse nafrat karta hoon..Samjhi tum?"he told her and pushed her on the bed and made his way to his study..

"Mujhe wo sab nahi chahiye Maan,mujhe sirf aap aur aapka pyar chahiye"she whispered before crying herself to sleep..

~*~

KHURANA MANSION

PRIVATE BASKET BALL COURT

Vicky was constantly scoring through the hoops of their private basketball court.Every time the ball scored his mind was always replaying back the times he spent with Ragini.

The first time she told him to take up basketball...

The first time she cheered when he scored multiple times to make his team win..

The times when she'd never miss any of his match...

He scored for one last time and not able to concentrate more he threw the ball aside saying,"Damn!"

He sat on the bench and took out his water bottle and emptied its contents.

Sweat was dripping from his well toned body.He removed his head band and shook his head..

He remembered how he used to do so in front of Ragini's face and how she used to hate it..

"kya hua Vicks babu,U gave up so easily?"A familiar voice said.

He turned around to see Ragini standing in her sweat shirt and track pants with her hair tied up in a pony tail.She threw the ball at him..

"You forgot what I taught you that easily?"she asked him.

"What do you think di?We all would be happy and peaceful after you left us?"he asked her throwing the ball back at her.

"Thats why you guys got a new Bhabi right?"She asked sitting beside him on the bench..

"Di did you ever think of bhai?You shud've seen his face and activities.He has become so gloomy and dejected"he said.

"Vicks babu"she said placing a comforting hand on his shoulder,"Why don't you give her a chance just like you gave me?"

"Di you're different and she's different..How can we give the same amount of love we gave you?"he questioned her..

"Vicky I'm not asking you to give her the same love you gave me..Infact I'm asking you to give more than that!!Just give her some means of making a difference in your lives..And I'm sure she'll bring great changes to ur lives"she said before disappearing..

Vicky sat there thinking for some time and then looked up at the stars and said,"We miss u di!"

~*~

It was a dark place..A godown and she was struggling to escape from her brother's hold..He placed her on a chair and brought his face close to her and the face slowly changed into...

"Nahin!!!"Geet screamed waking up from her dream...

-----------------------------------------------TO BE CONTINUED----------

Guys that was it!!

Hope you all wud've liked it..

If u liked it pls press 'Like' button and comment...

Positive/Negative criticism is welcome...So do comment dear silent readers...

Thank u fr the love nd Support...

Luv,

Amanda..

Edited by Gurmina-rks - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: 123pritha

nice ff

continue soon

thank u😃😃😃😃😃

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