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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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each emotion in d update was truly adorable...sahi bataoon i didn't guess what his demand for dowry wud be but as he told savitri 'mujhe ghuma phira ke baat karni nahin aati' i was like "oh he is going to ask savitri to be wid dem after marriage" n bang on! i was right...:-D yipppeee...
neways each dialogue while asking for dowry was sooo deep effective yaar i was in awe d whole while i was reading...maan is such a darling...n u r brilliant who has made such an adorable character...
ye geet bhi na pata nahin kya kya soojhta hai ise aur jab apni hi baat mein phans jati hai to Babaji ko pareshan karti hai...aur ye maan geet ko baahon me lena to iski favourite hobby hai...ek mauqa nahin chhodta...lol
80000 :O for a bicycle just because uspe MG likha hai...m sooo jealous of geet...so cute yaar...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wowww loved it
the dahej he asked was the best dahej anyone can ask
n wah romantic sawaari kya naam hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
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[☺️hai itna romatic update... mar dala dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazydevil87


each emotion in d update was truly adorable...sahi bataoon i didn't guess what his demand for dowry wud be but as he told savitri 'mujhe ghuma phira ke baat karni nahin aati' i was like "oh he is going to ask savitri to be wid dem after marriage" n bang on! i was right...:-D yipppeee...
neways each dialogue while asking for dowry was sooo deep effective yaar i was in awe d whole while i was reading...maan is such a darling...n u r brilliant who has made such an adorable character...
ye geet bhi na pata nahin kya kya soojhta hai ise aur jab apni hi baat mein phans jati hai to Babaji ko pareshan karti hai...aur ye maan geet ko baahon me lena to iski favourite hobby hai...ek mauqa nahin chhodta...lol
80000 :O for a bicycle just because uspe MG likha hai...m sooo jealous of geet...so cute yaar...

Yes my maan is a darling hai i so wish k main geet k jagah hothi😳 Cycle romance to abhi shuru hua hai aage dekho kya hotha hai.Love u dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: hinal_maaneet

wowww loved it

the dahej he asked was the best dahej anyone can ask
n wah romantic sawaari kya naam hai

Yes this was the best Dahez kaash real life mein bhi aisa hotha...thanks dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: maansee

[☺️hai itna romatic update... mar dala dear

Thanks dear romance toh abhi shuru hua hai😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
Thank you for your love and support I have replied to your comments.
PART 48
Maan: Chaliye Mrs.Khurana aaj aapko ek romantic si ride par le chaltha hoon humari romantic si sawari mein
Geet: Mujhe nahi jaana kahi bhi aapke saath aisa bhi koi karta hai kya bhala aapki harkatho se toh aapko maza aa raha tha par main toh sharam se pani pani hue jaa rahi thina?
Maan: Achhaji toh tumhare kehne ka matlab hai k tumhe mera andaaz pasand nahi aaya ya phir tumhare lafzo mein kahu toh shayad ye romantic nahi tha right?
Geet: Aisa maine kab kaha...
Maan: Wah ji wah kya baat hai yun toh meri shararathe tumhe pasand hai aur phir bhi mujhe khamkha nakre dikhathi ho
Geet: Nakre main nahi dikha rahi thi jaayiye ab toh main bilkul bhi aapke saath nahi jaaungi...agar aap apni galti nahi maante toh main bhi aapke saath nahi chalungi
Maan: Soch lo Mrs. Khurana kahi tumhe iski saza bughatni na pade wo bhi yahi sabke saamne..waise nuksaan tumhara bhi nahi hai kahi tum mujhe indirectly green signal toh nahi de rahi
Geet: Maan aap bhi na hatiye mujhe baitne dijiye
Maan: Jab baitna hi tha toh itne nakre kyun dikha rahi thi Mishty ab iski saza toh tumhe mein dekar hi rahunga
Geet: Saza toh aapko milegi Mr. Khurana kyunki ab aapkik Mrs aapse naaraz hai aur aapse baat nahi karegi
Maan: Meri Mrs. aur mujhse naaraz ho hi nahi saktha unhe toh main yun mana lunga
Geet: Main bhi dekthi hoon aap mujhe kaise manathe ho..iss baar itna aasan nahi hoga ye aapke liye
Maan: Achhaji hume challenge diya jaa raha hai achha ye toh bataiye Madam k agar hum aapka challenge jeet gaye toh hume kya milega
Geet: Khub samajhthi hoon main aapki shararatho ko par iss baar aapka koi bhi daav pesh kaam nahi karega...
Maan: Dekh lethe hai
Maan starts riding the cycle
PLS LISTEN TO THIS SONG
MUSIC
(Geet turns her face to the other side)
Elo Elo...Elo Elo...
(Maan gets an idea and starts his mission to pacify Geet)
Elo ji sanam hum aa gaye aaj phir dil leke...
(Geet was surprised she never expected Maan to sing a song for her and that too on the road)
Ello ji sanam hum aa gaye aaj phir dil leke
(She looks at him and Maan just winks at her)
Ab itna bhi gussa karo nahi jaani...
(Geet turns her face as if trying to express her anger)
Ye khoya khoya mausam pavan deewani
(Maan places his head on her shoulder)
Ab itna bhi gussa karo nahi jaani ye khoya khoya mausam pavan deewani...o kahi uda le na yaara tujhe..dildaara tujhe
(Geet tries to protest but Maan is too smart he places a kiss on her shoulder and forces Geet to look at him)
Ello Ello...ello ji sanam hum aa gaye aaj phir dil leke
(As soon as she turns around Maan gives her a naughty smile and pouts his lips...Geet hits him on his lips)
Ello ji sanam hum aa gaye aaj phir dil leke...
(maan catches her hand and places a kiss on her palm)
Music
( Geet is still pretending to be in an angry mood. Maan takes her to a beautiful beach)
Kaise jaadugar hai bahar k ye din jaan hi na le le khumar ke ye din
(Maan starts caressing her face with his face...Geet was loving his sweet torture)
Hai mar jaaunga...jeene nahi paaunga..
Aise na maaro nazara mujhe dildaara mujhe...
Ello ello ji...
(Geet starts blushing)
Ello ello ji sanam hum aa gaye aaj phir dil leke...
Music
(Maaneet r enjoying their cycle ride when they come across a marriage ceremony)
Mathe pe toh bal hai labho pe muskaan...
(Geet starts thinking about her wedding and automatically a smile comes on her face)
Chab hai gajab ki main tere kurban..main tere kurbaan balle balle meri jaan..meri jaan meri jaan..
(This doesn't go unnoticed by Maan he understands what geet might be thinking)
Mathe pe toh bhal hai labho pe muskaan chab hai jazab ki main tere kurbaan...
Dekho jaanejaana ..behek na jaana...
(he looks at her lips with naughty expressions and starts approaching it. Geet is constantly blushing)
Aaja main de du sahara tujhe dildara tujhe
(Geet feels shy and immediately hugs Maan)
Ello Elo ello ji sanam hum aa gaye aaj phir dil leke
(They again continue their cycle ride)
Music
(Maan stops the cycle at a beautiful place... no one was there except the two of them... But then Geet notices that Maan is not talking to her and now he is pretending to be angry)
Chalo ji chaloji main...
(Maan is going away but Geet holds his hand and stops him)
Chaloji main gussa na aur karungi teri shikayat pe gaur karungi
Kya hai meri manzil...
Samaj gaya Dil
Kya hai meri manzil samaj gaya dil
Jyana karo na isharaa mujhe
Dildaara mujhe
Ello ello...
Ello ji sanam hum aa gaye..
Ello ji sanam hum aa gaye aaj phir dil leke...
(She turns around and faces Maan...slowly their lips starts reducing their distance)
Aa..aa...o..oo...aa aa..aaa..ooo...oo..oo..oo
PRECAP: Maan visits Geet's college😆😆😆
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Love -Piya
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago

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