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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome continue soon even u scared us also ne eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your love and support dear friends. So Guys from today's update the wedding preparations of Maaneet would start it would be a grand celebration with all the rituals I have a SWEET SURPRISE FOR U ON THE WEDDING DAY. I am sure u will like it.
Pls help me to finish this thread guys I want Maaneet's marriage in the new thread
I dedicate this update to my friends Waheeda & Mona (maaneetlover1)
love-Piya
PART 55
Next Day
Savitri: Geet bete jaldi taiyaar ho jaaiye hume shadi k kapde kharedne jaana hai [ Geet we need to go for shopping to buy the wedding clothes get ready soon child]
Meera: Auntyji abhi se haal hai najaane shadi k din kitna waqt lagayegi taiyaar hone mein [ If Geet is taking such a long time to get ready today what will happen on the wedding day?]
Savitri: Meera bete aap kab aayi? [Meera when did you come?]
Yash: Mere aane se thik 1 minute 5 second pehle [ Just 1 minute 5 seconds before me]
Savitri: Dulha dulhan ko chodkar baaki sab log aa gaye hai lagta hai inn dono ko shadi nahi karni thik hai hum shadi ki date aage kheech dethe hai [Leaving the bride and the groom everyone is here I feel both of them don't want to get married we need to move their wedding date ahead]
Maan and Geet: Nahi [No]
Geet comes out of the room and Maan enters her house at the same time
Savitri: Wah kya pyar hai dono bhi ek saath aagaye lagtha hai ye dono pehle ek dusare ko hi dekhna chahthe the issliye itne der tak hum sabke saamne nahi aaye [Wow what a love both have arrived at the same time I feel they wanted to see each other's face first hence they were not coming out for so long]
Geet: Ma aap bhi na humesha chedne k mood mein rehthi ho [Mom u r always in a teasing mood]
Meera: Waise mujhe lagta hai k hume ab chalna chahiye Geet k liye shadi ka jodha toh main hi pasand karungi [I feel we should go now I want to select the bridal outfit for Geet myself]
Savitri: Sorry Meera ye department already kisine book kar rakha hai [Sorry Meera this department has already been booked by someone]
Meera (making a baby face) Kaun? [Who?]
Maan :Apni Mishty k liye shadi ka joda main khud apni pasand se khareedunga [I will select the bridal outfit for my Mishty personally]
Yash: Ek minute Geet ab tu yeh mat kehna k tu bhi Maan k liye sherwani khud pasand karegi [Geet now don't tell me that u would also be selecting the sherwani for Maan personally]
Geet blushed and nodded her head in approval
Yash: Toh hum yaha kya kar rahe hai main jaa raha hoon [So what are we doing here I am leaving]
Maan: Yash paagal mat bun chal shopping ko chalthe hai [Yash don't be stupid come let's go for shopping]
The entire family goes to a very famous shop which was popular for its bridal collections
Since the entire family was present Maaneet were finding it difficult to spend time with each other
Geet goes to the men's section and she selects a golden sherwani for Maan
She was very sure that Maan would look like a prince in it
Maan was unable to locate Geet he was trying to find her when he collided with a girl
Before that girl could fall Maan supported her with his strong arms
Geet comes out from the men's section she wanted to show Maan the sherwani that she had selected for him
But her excitement was lost as she saw some other girl in her Maan's arms
Maan was looking at that girl and smiling continously
Geet: Ek toh uss ladki ko apne baho mein liye kahde hai aur upar se uski taraf dekar muskurarahe hai [First of all he is holding a girl in his arms and now on top of it he is smiling at her]
The Girl returns the smile and hugs Maan
Geet: Iski ye himmat mere Maan ko gale laga rahi hai par isse dosh deke kya fayda signal toh saamne se aa raha hai [ How dare she? She hugged my Maan but this behaviour of hers is normal the signal is coming from Maan what's teh use blaming her?]
Geet: Abhi bhi becharmo ki tarah chipke hue hai main Maan ko nahi chodungi [They are still lost in each other's embrace I won't leave Maan now]
Geet starts moving towards Maan.
The entire family was busy noticing Geet's behaviour
Geet: Maan ye kya chal raha hai? [Maan what's going on?]
They come out of their hug
Maan: Are Geet jaanti ho ye kaun hai? [Geet do you know who she is?]
Geet: Haan jaanti hoon ye wo ladki hai jisse aap fevicol ki tarah chipke hue khade ho [Yes I know this is the girl with whom u are standing as if u both have been sticked together with fevicol]
Maan: Geet ye Pari hai [She is Pari]
Geet: Aww...pari haan kyun nahi ab toh ye aapko Pari hi nazar aayegi thik hai karlo shadi apni Pari se main jaa rahi hoon [Yes why not now she will appear like a fairy to u fine I think you should marry your Fairy I am going from here]
Maan: Are Geet suno toh [Geet listen to me once]
Geet starts walking
Maan :Pari main tumse baadmein baat karta hoon [Pari I will talk to u sometime later]
Adi: Maan sir Geet ko kaise manathe hai ye dekhne mein bada maza aayega [ It will be fun to watch how Maan Sir pacifies Geet]
Geet goes to the ladies section and starts looking at the outfits and goes on rejecting everything
PLS LISTEN TO THIS SONG
Dil ka yeh kya raaz hai jaane kya kar gaye jaise andhero mein tum chandni bhar gaye
Maan comes and stands next to Geet and starts selecting outfits for her. Geet tries to go away from there but Maan holds her waist and stops her
Dil ka ye kya raaz hai jaane kya kar gaye jaise andhero mein tum chandni bhar gaye
He starts brushing his face on her hair and pulls her more close touching her sensually
Hai chand taaro ko mashoor itna kyun kambaqt inse bhi khoobsurat hai tu...
He turns her and bends her slightly and looks at her intently
I LOVE U...
(tu ru ru..unnere yeah yeah...)
I LOVE U... I LOVE U...
Their lips were just an inch away. He goes on repeating these words (I LOVE U) Geet starts drowning in his love
Din bhar kare baatein hum phir bhi lage baate adhori aajkal
Mann ki dehleezo pe koi aane na bus tum zaruri aajkal
He holds her chin and locks his eyes with hers. Geet could clearly see the unconditional love that he had for her in those eyes
Abra main hoon tu aasman hai paas hai tu par kaha hai
Zidd meri nahi meri aadat hai tu...
Maan carries Geet in his arms and walks towards the ladies section to select a bridal outfit for her. Savitri, Yash, Meera, Pari and Adi follow them they were also lost to see Maan's love for Geet
I LOVE U... I LOVE U... I LOVE U...
yeah yeah
I LOVE U ...
Geet starts blushing and hides her face in Maan's chest
Kabhi kabhi main khud se hoon yeh puchtha main tere kaabil bhi hoon kya
Maan puts her down and starts selecting different costumes for her. He places a pink colored dupatta on her head and goes on admiring her
Itna toh mujhe hai maalum k milkar tujhse behtar main insaan bun gaya
He goes on repeating this he was just not satisfied with any of the dresses. He finally selected a silver colour lenga and placed the duppata of that lenga on her head
Thoda thoda tujhse seekha pyar karne ka taareka
Dil k khuda ki mujhpe inayat hai tu...
Maan sits on his leg and takes Geet's hand in his and places it on his forehead
I LOVE U... I LOVE U... I LOVE U...
I LOVE U... I LOVE U ... I LOVE U...
Maan kisses her hand. Geet had tears in her eyes she was indeed lucky to have someone like maan in her life
Dil ka yeh kya raaz hai jaane kya kar gaye jaise andhero mein tum chandni bhar gaye
Dil ka ye kya raaz hai jaane kya kar gaye jaise andhero mein tum chandni bhar gaye
Hai chand taaro ko mashoor itna kyun kambaqt inse bhi khoobsurat hai tu...
I LOVE U... I LOVE U... I LOVE U...
I LOVE U... I LOVE U ... I LOVE U...
Geet hugs Maan with all her love and once againboth of them get lost in their own world
Everyone starts applauding
Pari: I must say u r a very lucky girl
Maan: Geet ye meri college friend hai iska naam Pari hai [Geet meet my college friend Pari]
Geet: Pari tumhara naam hai? [Your name is Pari?]
Pari: Ji haan aur ek aur baat jaan lo meri shadi already ho chuki hai [ Yes and let me tell u I am already married]
Geet: (feeling embarrased) Sorry
Pari: Sorry nahi yaar mujhe toh tumhe thanks kehna chahiye mujhe nahi pata tha k MSK gaa bhi saktha hai [I should thank you yaar I never knew that MSK can also sing]
Savitri: Waise manna padega Geet aap wakai mein kafi lucky hai [Geet you really very lucky]
Meera: Waise aap dono ne ek dusare k liye outfits select kiye ya nahi? [Did you'll select outfits for each other]
Geet: Maine toh select kar liya hai [yes]
Maan: Maine bhi select kar liya hai [I am also done]
Yash: Toh hume bhi toh abtaiye aap dono ne kya select kiya hai [Show us your outfits guys]
Geet goes and gets the golden shervani that she had selected for Maan
This is the sherwani
Maan had selected a silver colored lehnga for Geetthis is how it appeared
Meera: Wow Golden and silver
Yash: Inn colours ka kya matlab hai? [What do these color signify?]
Geet: Golden colour suraj ki roshni ka prateek hai [Golden colour signifies the light of the sun]
Maan: Silver colour chand ki chandani ka prateek hai [Silver indicates the shine of the moon]
Maan and Geet together: Humari shadi mein pehli baar chand aur suraj ka milan hoga [For the first time in our marriage the world would witness the coming together of the sun and the moon]
Everyone starts applauding
PRECAP: THE 7 Promises of marriage😳😳😳
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Love-Piya
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow what a lovely update that was
savitri aunty maan or geet sabse pehle ek dusre ko hi dekhna chahte the...lagta hai ko phone pe baat ho rahi thi ki ek time pe entry marenge...😆

then dates aage karne wali baat or dono ek saath NOOO
loved that part

dress selection wala idea was good vo to hona hi tha maneet ek dusre ki dresses khud select karenge
grreat

pari ki entry was cool and geet ka jealous hona bhi
song sequence was superbly written
loved it

pari ne ekdum thik kaha ki geet is lucky waise maan is lucky too

all in all hats off to u for a brilliant update again

love u




Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago


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ye maaneet ko kitni jaldi h apni shaadi ki kaise nahin chillate we aaye jb savitri aunty ne date aage barhane ki baat ki lol...
ye meera aur yash bhi na 1 number k buddhu hain bhala aisa kaise ho sakta h ki maan ki geet ka dress aur geet ke maan ka dress koi aur select kare n wo bhi shaadi ka impossible lol...
lo ji aur chipkao pari ko ho gai na mishty khafa par ye bhi MSK h aur wo bhi nautankibaaz wala apni nautanki se apni mishty ka dil pighla hi lega...
it was highly romantic n cute song sequence Pihu...u really used d song beautifully...hats off for writing such a cutie sequence...it was amazing...luved it to d core sweetu...
itna pyara pyaar ka izhaar who wud not fall for it...aur geet to pehle se hi iski har ada p fida h...
oh i luved their choice n usse zyada i luved d dialogue dey said together bout choosing golden n silver...brilliant idea sweetu...c yehi pyare pyare ideas to chahiye humein geet season 2 k liye...U R OUR STAR WRITER PIHU...
luvya loadzzz...
Edited by crazydevil87 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
wow it was beautiful
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow
amznggg..😃
maanu is shooo romntic...😳
i lv himm...😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsome update piya
Loved it
Poor maan had to pacify her evertime lol
Love the song and their outfits were awsoe
Wowww chand and suraj superb yaar
Loved it
Do continue soon xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow loved song sequence
update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow di awesme superb update and thanx 4 dedicatng the update and 4 shwng jealous geet as i askd u..
Cmng to the update,hmm so maaneet's weddng dress shoppng is over and i lovd their selectn.bechare meera aur yash got no chance to select dresses as maaneet decided themselves..waitng 4 next update and 7 promises..
Love u di..
Mona
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow piggy...suraj aur chand ka milan...kya baat hai
i loved the whole update...it was so romantic. I loved the way Geet was J of Pari and the way Maan manaofied Geet.
Dress choices was wonderful. You words about sun and moon actually reminded me of a very old song -
taaron mein saj ke, apane sooraj se,
dekho dharatee chalee milane
jhankee paayal mach gayee halachal
ambar saaraa lagaa hilane

hai ghataaon kaa,
do nain mein kaajal
dhoop kaa mukh pe daale sunaharaa saa aanchal
yoo laharayee,
le angadai,
lagee jaise dhanak khilane

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