Savage (AR) Chapter 1-17 Link#2 Page 153 - Page 86

Originally posted by: youth_showsfan

hey just saw u replied every one

but i guess u missed my comment :(

cos u replied every one from pg 114 except me

i want to noe if my guess s right or not :)

Originally posted by: gypsy

^Somebody was in writing mode yesterday..
You read and replied pretty fast actually...
I am impressed.. :P

Originally posted by: youth_showsfan

hey just caught up with ur ff

and i must say its amazing

infact words r less to describe it

in simple words i can say its mindblowing

nd fantastic

Thank you soo much :) and welcome to Savage thread :)
I am happy to know you are liking the fiction :)

the way u have shown riddhima's miseries confusion

it was too heart touching nd heart wrenching

Thanks once again for the words. 😳

the way u have shown armaan's side of story

it was quite emotional

n a minute d way u showed him an evil

nd then n next minute d way u showed him caring and concerning

is too cute i luved d contrasting nature f armaan

for me A's not the entirely positive character. He has shades of grey as well. Nobody is perfect and that's what I have tried showing through his character :)

nd armaan's father well a pure representation of evil

u definately made his character a quite strong one

LOL..He has the maximum fan-following when it comes to hating..
In this fiction for me not a single character is weak. They have weak moments but they are not weak. Every character is strong but Malik is strong and powerful.

btw coming to the current update

all i want to say s its superb

Thanks :)

btw abt ur note

i dont noe if iam right or not

but i feel R's life s going to change for good

lies which made her life ironic and she believed and trusted.

she always trusted him (father) /blue eyes (armaans father)/deadth (armaans) lies

and especially her lies which led her to suffer

and its due to blue eyes (armaan ) and she knew it

she knew its blue eyes (armaan) yet she lost hope

and gave up

R's life is definitely going to go through some major changes, now with her having idea about Tanya and her relationship with her. With A rescuing her and taking her away from father, her life is going to go through BIG and Major Changes in the upcoming Chapters :)
Also your mentioning about HIM as Father and other referring is slightly wrong here. I think many readers got confused with the referring and I'll clear it before posting the next Chapter.😊
but still her life was giving her indication

dt evil s some one else nd not armaan

I would like to disagree here, A's one character that is always evil in front of her till now..
she wanted help now but who can help her other than herself? Totally, if you are not going to made your mind to fight, no body can help you.

so now she needs to prepare herself to face it

and this is it

she has to fight and take a stand

and she knew it she has to

she has seen enough failure

and hurted herself a lot

due to some or d other lies f d blue eyes(armaans father)

Yup! and she has started preparing herself but trying to fight off the death. She wants to live and she has taken steps for it.

nd she will know it

wud b still soft and warm

Now I am a bit confused here. Can you please clear the above two statements because I am not able to make out what you are trying to say..😕

but not an easy target like before

wont take any more pains

for the first time she will face the deadth i.e armaan

whenever she has to she will face it for herself

by believing herself nd not lies

she knew it she can now

Definitely, she wants to fight and she is going to because Death is the ultimate end and she knows that no matter what, she'll die so why not die fighting. I won't say about the pain because pain is also a part of life just like happiness and sadness. By fighting doesn't mean there won't be pain, there would be but the zeal is there and she'll fight till her last breath, no matter what.

if i have to summarise it i would just say now riddhima wont remain week she will take a stand and she will come to know abt d truth of armaan and his father by confronting armaan and with the help of armaan she will free herself and armaan as well.

R's for me was never weak before and she won't be in the future too. Now after knowing about Tanya, she has a goal to achieve. She wants answers and this is what has played a major role in fighting off the feeling of alone and failure.
Definitely, she's going to find the truth one day.
and who is going to free who, that is something for which you'll have to wait..😉

its just my POV, this s what i have understood from the update

i dont know what change u r talking abt but i felt d change s this

I respect and appreciate your POV and I want to thank you for taking time out and replying to my question. I really..really appreciate your efforts...Thank you sooo much...😳

You are in sync with the change I was referring too when I asked the question.
anyways once again its an amazing story

and pls add me to ur pm list

would love to read it further also

Thanks so much for liking my work.
I'll PM you from next Chapter :)

Originally posted by: -Aliya-

Apologies for the delayed comment. Comment for Chapter 14:

This particular chapter may have seemed vague about the story in itself and i think you worked it out to be like that, Priyanka, so that we can focus on the detail you put into the psychological happenings and questions whirling around Riddhima's head instead...we have missed out on Riddhima's POV and though you could have chosen to progress more with the story in the chapter of Riddhima's POV, i like that you chose to explore whats going on in her mind (which is much needed after missing her POV for so long) rather than whats going on in the story really..

Thank you so much Aliya. It would have been easy for me to just go with the flow and go forward. But what exactly is going through her mind was very much needed. It helps us to identify what exactly is she feeling like ATM. Her thoughts, her emotions, the mental pain she is suffering , helps me to connect with the character more. The inner battle that she is going through with herself is what I have tried to show.

I tag this chapter as the very philosophical chapter..it deals a lot with the big questions and philosophies, theories of emotions and life..death...destiny even. Destiny is a delicate one which i have personally deemed as too big and unknown for our brains to comprehend therefore i think its dangerous waters to be going into but i like how you have put in Riddhima's perspective and her thoughts on destiny.

I never thought of this Chapter as philosophical one. I mean I never saw it from this angle.For me it was about R and her inner thought process. Her constant battle with herself, be it on the intellectual level or emotional level, her agreements with herself and her disagreements with herself. It's like she was talking with another human being who is a carbon copy of her own self.
Destiny holds different meaning for everyone. Like I said in the Chapter, R's thoughts about destiny is what I have heard and learned from the surroundings. Don't we all hear people saying something on the same line like I have mentioned. Destiny can be self made or for some it's not self made. It's totally your perception and how you perceive your achievements and failures that forms a part of your Destiny.


Although it could be argued that her perceptions on the big questions of life are tainted by what other people have told her..she has admitted and we as readers have knowledge of how Riddhima's been told things all her life..its never been herself..her own thinking..this is a aspect of freedom that she has gained through being locked up with Armaan (isn't it ironic how being locked up with him has actually made her gain the freedom of thinking on her own while still not being literally free?)

R's life decisions were taken by others and I don't know whether you will agree or not. But for me she played a part as well. Her biggest mistake was her acceptance without asking "WHY?". She took each day as it came without pondering on "WHY?" But I would also like to add that her not asking "WHY?" was because of the punishment she got when she tried asking it. Maybe if she had fight back things would have turned out to be different.
The freedom that you are mentioning is because of the zeal that is back in her life. And we all need to thank Mr. Malik for that. If he had not mentioned about Tanya, she would have not fight back. Earlier she was able to fight off the emotional aspect of being alone, maybe her surroundings played an important part but now caged and tied, she wasn't able to fight off this aspect which ultimately forced her to take the step of killing herself. But the zeal to fight off is back in her. She has a mission or goal to achieve that is making her to fight back.

Anyway i think this fact of Riddhima seeing so much evil around her and these people telling her different things and different things to believe has had her utterly confused about what to believe..what to know...this is shown in how in the chapter she jumps from different views on the philosophies..she doesn't have one strong confirm belief or answer to the questionss. She's very uncertain which is why her views on destiny, life, death are constantly changing and very uncertain and confused. Almost as if she's scared to believe in what she wants to believe..she's scared to know that she can answer these questions herself without the bias of what other people have ordered her to believe...do you get me Priyanka?

Totally, Imagine being surrounded with people who have given you just one emotion- PAIN and not a single person to understand the emotional turmoil.
Her mind is jumping from one aspect to another, thinking about the pros and cons of everything yet not being able to stand at one decision. At this moment, her life is surrounded by so much evil that she's not able to think rationally and make a stand. She is scared to make a decision because somewhere she is scared to know the outcome. Her mind is showing her all the aspects yet she is scared to make any kind of decision. It can also be said that she was never asked about her opinion on anything before and this is an aspect that we can't ignore.

love how you used personification on 'Alone', 'Failure' as if they are actually beings..it emphasises how much these emotions have plagued Riddhima, enough for her to turn them into actual physical fears in her head, almost as if she is so lonely that they are her only companions-enemies/fears because they have been there throughout her whole life.

thank you soo much. I tried showing that how much scared R is from these two feelings because she wants to live and these are the biggest hindrance in achieving her goals.

I read that Dee mentioned Riddhima to be a teenager in her comment? Is Riddhima a teenager now in this time of the story, Priyanka? or was Dee refering to Riddhima as a teenager from the past?

R was kidnapped on her 18 birthday. So she wasn't an teenager at any point of time. 18 for me is an adult, isn't? Or it comes into teenager, I am not exactly sure.😕 But age wise she was kidnapped on her 18 birthday and right now she's 18 +.

Comment for Chapter 15 coming soon
Waiting..😊

Originally posted by: -Dee-

Reserved

*Edited*

Lies, sometimes make up someone's who life and Riddhima's are made up of bitter lies.
Although you've used the word ironic, I find that the whole chapter is an irony and everything that is going on in Riddhima's mind too is irony.

R's life is surrounded by lies. And all of them for her bitter :(
See you know what actually is A's motive behind all this but R has no idea, so her thinking is justified at this point..isn't??

Riddhima has been so used to lies that she cannot differentiate between truth and false or may be she has never known what truth is. Her foster father fed her lies and she has grown up on them - it seems.

Right from the day she was born she was surrounded with lies. First her supposedly father lied to her now everything she is going through, for her it seems everything a lie. Though she came to know about it after she was sold. But her whole life is surrounded around these bitter lies.

Believe and Trust. They are the roots of a relationship. These need to be quite firm. The fact that she differentiates between believe and trust show how life has been to her. She has grown up to believe lies but yet she cannot trust anyone. And I think Riddhima is a quite submissive girl to trust a father who treats her badly.

You can believe anybody but it's the trust that strengthen your believe. R always believed her father and trusted him because there was no point in not believing your own Father. R, believed the lies everyone else told her but she never trusted them. That's where the difference occurs. Though after knowing the truth she's not going to trust her father anymore.

I like it how you've personified adjectives.. HiM, Blue Eyes and Death. They almost define the characters. HIM - I canot deduce anything - he seems to be just a faceless man who plays an important role, important enough to have his "name" capitalised. Blue eyes - I don't why, may be because I know it's Armaan or may be it is "eyes" I find hope - just a tini-tiny bit but they tell me that the character's eyes are so important. And Death - this makes me tremble, giving evil vibes. I don't know why even Death is peaceful but my hatred towards the character makes me so biased.. LOL! I think Riddhima has named them aptly but has not thought why.

I have not given them the names in case of R. There's a reason for it. R identifies them through her emotions. For R, blue eyes would always be Armaan. His eyes were the first things she saw when they met for the first time. She is able to connect to that guy with the mention of blue eyes. The same way she identifies A's father as DEATH because that's what his father represents to her. I don't think I am able to successfully convey what exactly I am trying but are you getting even a little bit of what I am trying to say?😕
The day she'll be able to call BLUE EYES with his name without any pressure and because she wants to with all her heart is the day, she'll start trusting him..😉

One more thing, I find ironic is she has named the devil 'Death' yet she expects blue eyes to deliver her death.

Because it wasn't his father (DEATH) who is going to kill her. He told her that his son (Death) is going to kill her and that's the reason why she calls blue eyes as Death ATM.

She talks about her being the sufferer all along - that's true, but this time my heart goes out to Armaan. I think the burden of lies - Riddhima's lies - her inability to trust is going to make him the sufferer.

Point taken but we can't ignore the fact that R has no idea about A's past and his reason behind his doings. She is making assumptions as per her knowledge.

In the previous chapter, Live and hope, both the words seemed so optimistic and yet here they give me a bad feeling. The way they have been related to lies gives them an eerie context. Riddhima's stand is justified. The way Malik has made her believe that Armaan is going to murder her slowly has made her defensive. Although she is defenseless, she is going to do everything to prolong her 'death' and 'live' and in turn making it hard for Armaan to protect her.

you are right here. Mr. Malik is a clever man. He told her about A killing her so as to make it difficult for her to trust him. Though it wouldn't have changed the fact that under R's circumstances, trusting her own self at times were unfruitful for her (suicide attempt). And by telling her that A's going to kill her, he has made it hard for A as well as for R.

She believes the knife-act was Armaan's but I guess, it was either someone else who used the knife and Armaan 'protected' her or it was a ruse for the benefit of Malik.

For the time being, she think it was A. But it wasn't A but someone else..

There are so many places, she has been transferred to and from. Tinge of Darkness to Light.

Was it giving me some sort of indication? I didn't know.

Is it an indication??😉

Maybe...😉

Failure, again?? She needs a dose of triumph and I guess, she is going to get it soon.
I find her anticipation of death funny - like she finds everything else funny.

Her thoughts were going to vague places because she believes that A's going to kill her and he saved her just to give her more pain. If death is standing in front of you, you'll behave without thinking much and for her , the death was too close to think rationally.

Ssshhh...Stop crying." His fingers touched my skin like a bird's feather. Soft and Warm

There's hope..So much of it. The fact that she has been manipulated enough to put up a fight against a person who tells her she will live and yet she finds something different in it. It gives me so much hope.

This was one of the best scenes for me if I look at all the previous chapters. This scene holds so much emotions for me. The feelings that she always craved for, she is getting it from the person who she thinks is going to kill her at any point of time... Oh how I loved writing this one.

And enough for me to strengthen my belief in his Lies. It was all a lie and I knew it.

Is she falling for him?? Believing in Armaan's 'lies' yet knowing they were 'lies'

No she is not falling. The sentence meant that all the stuff, like saving and telling her to not move because she could hurt herself, everything that A was doing for her was a BIG lie for her. And she knows it and believes that all this is a lie and not a good act on his part.

Love,
Dee.

P.S. - Have you heard Britney Spears' Criminal. The first thing that came to my mind was Savage. I don't know why. Nothing matches absolutely nothing yet I don't know why the line "I'm in love with a Criminal" got to me.
The latest song? Which involves the robbery..that one?? If yes than I have heard and watched it too but not much, maybe 2-3 times.. I suck at remembering the song titles..😆
Ah..I am happy now..Britney Spears..Criminal..Savage..Oh I love it 😃

P.P.S - I really didn't mean to blabber..!!
P.P.S- Oh you don't blabber and if you feel like you are blabbering than I want to say just one thing- I love your blabbering..😆 so keep going and don't stop..

Originally posted by: ParaDiseMb

Comment for Chapter 12:

And Game it is...The title reflects a great deal of authority...a lot of power...it somewhat excited me...the game A's father is planning playing with A reflects that of a chase...chase as in, Armaan trying to free himself from his father's clutches as well as from himself...he is trying to fight his inner demons...the father knows he has the balls in his court, hence he is in empowerment. The little game that the father has in plan gives him pure enjoyment, he is teasing A. The act is playful from the father's perspectives. He is taking pleasure in knowing the fact that his son cannot do anything, his got him trapped? Or is he wrong to assume this? You never know what can happen. He wants him dancing around to his tunes again by tormenting/prolonging him pain. Seriously the father needs to get shot. He lives in a world of sadism. His personality reminds me of a character from a fiction book I read the other day...The book was called 'Adored' one of the main protagonist's character was very similar to that of A's father.

Ah..this Chapter. It was the first from Malik's POV and I wanted to show this character as the most powerful one. He's one character that can go to any extent to win..not caring about human relationship at all. The game he's playing is a deadly one because, first he is playing for and against his own blood, SON. And second, losing meant losing his own son that he believes he loves in his own way. Some may perceive it as not love but he do love his son, it's just that his way is different.

About him taking pleasures, I would differ here. He's not taking pleasure by playing this game. He only motive is to get his SON back at whatever cost. He's taking this as a game. A game of death and live. Death for him would be losing his own son and live for his would be getting his son back. Again I would like to say that he knows his son his stronger than him. Malik knows this and being a experienced man, he knows when and how to play his cards right.. He is not an easy man to defeat.

I have zero idea about the novel so can't comment anything :)

'He was waiting for the arrival of his grandson and on 23th January 1987, his wish got fulfilled.'

The proudest moment for any parent is definitely when they see their child for the very first time and when they hold their little fragile newborn in their arms...in the Armaan's father case, all he can do is feel proud nothing else...he didn't give him the love he was entitled to when he was a child...all he could give him were a list rules which he had to follow without a second option...he was kept hostage...his...life...emotions...perspectives...they never meant anything...because whatever the father wants he gets...even if it's by inflicting pain to his most proudest possession.

I agree with you but also try thinking from Malik's POV. Don't you think his upbringing played the major role of what he's NOW. He's doing the same what he was taught by his father. Now I am not saying that all the fault was of his Grandad. Because a parent can only provide you the base and will be with you till a particular point. After that you are on your own. Also I am not trying to justify his points because I, myself am not a fan of this ideologies but when you'll think from HIS pov, maybe ..if not all you'll be able to connect to this character. As a parent, majority of them make plans about the future of their child even before they are brought into this world. They start planning right from the day they get to know about them being parents in few months time. The same way, Malik wanted a child that can take the Malik empire forward, just like the way he took it when he was given the rein of the business.

'Maria and me weren't that close. Was I connected with her emotionally? I won't say NO but the attachment wasn't that strong' Why am I not surprised. They say love can change a sadist into a saint...but this term seems to amuse me when it comes to the Father...he is a man who cannot divulge in any relationships..he has no emotions'except for the few which keeps him running...ignorance...his hatred for lose...he is a very sour looser...In armaan's case...being in love allowed him to see the world better...the love he craved from his dad...from life...he got that love from tanya...although his emotions drove him to the extent of committing a murder...it brought in changes to him...he felt a lot happier...

Malik's way of showing love is different. He is a man who thinks from his mind. He is a thinker. And he is not much of an emotional person. His emotional side is only limited to his Son which he rarely shows or hasn't shown at all. A's story is entirely different. If Tanya had not entered his life, maybe things would have gone the same way Malik wanted but LOVE, it's a strong emotion. And the clear example of this is A who changed because of LOVE.

'And I wasn't strong like my Son' this quote is very powerful and has a lot of depth to it. It shows that Mr. Malik is somewhat scared of his son...scared of what he was capable of...It might also show a glint of jealousy? He knows he doesn't have the will to leg of everything he has...the monster in him doesn't allow him to...it keeps his emotions intact, whereas armaan, he can...he can leave his father's empire without a blink and may not even regret...is Mr. Malik scared of being alone? Living alone for the rest of his life? Every person needs someone in their life...it's a simple law of life...is Malik scared of acknowledging this ugly truth?

OH this quote shows a LOT about Malik. He's a powerful man and stronger too but he knows he's not strong like A. A at this point is unaware of this side or maybe he's soo involved with his inner battle that he hasn't noticed it. But Malik knows it and he's using everything in his power to not let A win.

We can perceive it in this way. He wants his Son because he's scared of being Alone. And he knows that if he'll lose, he'll lose is son forever. I haven't gone to this side of his character as such but Thanks to you now, I am able to see another aspect of his character that even I unaware off.

As a parent I did everything in my power to not let son feel the absence of his mother. I won't say I tried playing the role of his mother. But I didn't let him think about her...MUCH' - By divulging him into the dark?

And I am not able to get what kind of darkness are you referring to here? Clear this out please..

I taught him the true meaning of power, the meaning of authority and the meaning of what the surname "Malik" stands for. The same things father taught me when I was growing. The same things father told me when I was growing' - and hence the result of going to the extent of killing someone to achieve what he truly believes is his (Tanya) Armaan and his father share a lot of similarities to the level that they both were thought same values, beliefs and were brought up with venom within their blood. Only difference was that A's principles were given to him by his father and Mr. Maliks principles were given by his father. But in Armaan's case, he was not a given a chance to explore the world around him, until he left home...and when he did leave, we experienced something he would have never experienced at home...Joy...he experienced joy...his whole life he was surrounded by darkness that...when the little rays of brightness echoed into his life...it arose new emotions inside of him...the essence of light took over the dark shades of life...and this was possible through one medium...Tanya...

I would love to know more about the grandfather...seems like an interesting character to read about...and also an integral part of the existence of the Malik Empire... You have mentioned his name is several parts of the story...Interesting...

Malik and A are more or less similar when it comes to the side Malik is unaware off. He wasn't with A when he met Tanya. He wasn't with A during the time he was with Tanya. And that's the side, the changed side that Malik is scared off. Before meeting Tanya, A was growing the way a Malik was suppose to and that's the reason why his father didn't had a issue with him killing Ryan.

About the exploration, even Malik got the chance the same way A got. And this is where the whole change/Difference took place. A met Tanya but Malik wasn't lucky here.

Grandad is an interesting character because the upbringing of Malik is done by him. His principles and beliefs is what Malik was taught and it's what he wants to impart to his son. I haven't thought much on his character exploration, maybe in future parts..

'The true identity of known as the 'Malik', the name only the lucky ones got. One of them being ..ME' - Oh Please don't pride yourself in anything 🤔

LOL..You so hate this guy..😆

'I was impressed with him because I was seeing Me in Him. He was turning out to be like me and how I wanted him to be. He reminded me of Me when I was of his age. And I was the proud father. Some may not agree with this statement. A father making his only son like him'

Who doesn't love freedom after being caged up...escaping a place where you had no authority is not the best of places to live in...hence the enjoyment/advantage Armaan and his father took from escaping that environment is very much understandable! I'm starting think that Mr. Malik was also a prey who was under the clutches of his father ...if It wasn't for the grandfather...maybe things would have been different? In real essence it's the grandfather who nurtured Mr.Malik into the demon that he is and now going by tradition...Mr Malik wants to do the same...he wants his son to be like him...

I agree here. It's like a never ending cycle. Father teachings and beliefs is passed on from one generation to another. But like I mentioned before, ultimately it's your decision. Malik agreed and didn't thought of bringing any change. A is an example of the "CHANGE", who is not ready to follow his father footsteps just because his dad followed it.

Seeing a glimpse of Armaan's personality when he killed ryan, made Mr. Malik think that he had made a mistake? But how is that possible? Isn't this exactly what he wanted? Is this what he wanted his son to become...? Then why the hypocrisy? Mr. Malik thinks he should have confronted Armaan, and what exactly would he say to his son...that he shouldn't have taken that initiative and kill Ryan? If that was the case then armaan could have turned around and said 'but father, is this what you have taught me to do'?

Mistake in the sense that he let go of his son easily because the purpose for which he killed Ryan isn't the type/kind of reasons the Malik usually kills. Malik thought it would be a short phase or infatuation that will get over in some time but he was WRONG. His statement meant that maybe if he had talked to his son before, things would have been different. He could have stopped this love story long before and his son would have been with him.

'By the time I realized my mistake it was too late. He was turning out to be the man I didn't wished for. He was turning out to be the man I wanted to keep him away from...at least for the time being. His prioritise were changing and as a father I should have stopped him but I was LATE'

As a father, he should have stopped OTHER things as well...as a father...he was responsible in assuring his son lived a good life...and was HAPPY...but he failed in that category...so why the sudden concern?... because he's going against his father and doing what makes HIM happy?

Malik wanted to see his son like HIM but the change Tanya brought in his life is something Malik didn't wanted to see and that's what the above statement showed.

He wasn't against giving his son a good life. He always did what he believed was the best for his son. Since he's not connected with LOVE as such, like Tanya and Armaan were it's one of the reason why he wants his son to stay away from it. Every parent wants the good for their child and if they believe they are going in the wrong direction, they'll try to bring them back. The same way Malik believes that by keeping him away from LOVE and Tanya's promises, he's bringing his only son back.

Tanya is a very strong woman, being in the position she was, she fought very bravely and her sacrifice didn't go in vain. Her love for her sister was something which cannot be described in words. Her sacrifice...showed as to how much she loved riddhima...her little sister...she was an independent women...although she was aware of Mr. Malik's power she didn't flinch...she wasn't scared...and that makes me look up to her and smile...because that's a very hard thing to do...when a person knows death is near, there is fear present all over their body...but Tanya...she stood up against him...looked at him straight in the eye showing no fear or whatsoever...

In this fiction, every character for me is strong and Tanya is no exception. She was strong when she was alive and her presence is still felt by A and Malik when she's no more. On R, I won't say much because she's not aware of Tanya or how her life is connected with Tanya.

'How wrong was I? Killing her made him move further away from me. Why?' One can only get one thing...although the devil played a very cunning game, he couldn't achieve what he wanted...his aim in killing Tanya was to get his son back...but he failed in doing that...it just shows that no matter how powerful an individual is, they cannot always achieve what they want...with playing games...comes consequences...

Totally, It takes a matter of time and everything change. Malik believed that by killing Tanya his son would be back but the opposite happened and we know what the opposite is.

I'm curious as to where riddhima is...Will Armaan be successful in trying to find her? Or will his actions result in her death? Who will triumph victorious in this game of cat and mouse...

This I am sure you know the answer now...LOL..

Okay now that is my comment for chapter 12! LOL I think i have rambled enough! Dont you think? LOL. I did say i would come back and comment on all the chapters once i'm free didnt i...welll here i am... ;P

Nope..You have not rambled and I would have loved to hear more but we need to stop somewhere and that's what you have done...LOL..

Comment for chapter 13 might be posted 2mrw.

Adious for now! x.!

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Thanks once again for taking your precious time out because I know how busy you are and giving feedback. :)

Chapter 14 and 15 are replied in previous pages and I am sure you must have read it by now :D

Now waiting for the feedback on the latest Chapter :)

Originally posted by: gypsy

Hey I have not missed your. I am sorry if you felt this way. I do remember yours.
It's just that yesterday I was replying to older and smaller comments.
Yours need time and that's why I left it last night.
And I have left few others too.
Just to give you the hint I need to tell you that you are in the right direction. But I want to reply a proper one so give me some time and I'll get back to you :)
Sorry once again. It really isn't my intention to leave your comment. All my readers are precious to me and I loved reading yours because you are the few ones who actually gave the reply that I was looking forward from all the readers :)

Originally posted by: gypsy

nd iam happy i could predict the change