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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#511

Loved this story, glad u had happy ending!

-Sona

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ahenseven

@ahenseven

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#512

Hey! That was one brilliantly written update .. I enjoyed reading the entire fic .. Thanks a lot 😊 I loved the proposal .. Too cute it was !! I hope your planing on giving us an epilogue .. Take care and loads of love 🤗 Neha

Can I pls have a list of the other stories you write, would love to read them !

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667300

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#513

This was such a hilarious update!

Loved how Arnav was planning to propose and Khushi thought he wanted to have fun sexy times :P And Nani is soo inappropriate but still so funny! :P

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.Saraa.

@.Saraa.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#514

Lovd it.lvd it ended on happy note.

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priya

@pooh_91

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#515

a great ending toa great ff!!

sad that it had to end when i was away

missed reading the last few parts...

looks like u went te funny way

seriously nani giving sex talk...had me in splits :D

and i totally agree with kushi...friends and seinfeld...friends any day :p

asr a barney or a ted..id go with ted :p

loved how u ended it with the big bang!!

great ff muffin

looking for more...

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Juicee Sushie

@Juicee_Sushie

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#516

FANTASTIC FF!!!

Just read the whole story & I loved it!!!

Special mention to Nani Ji and her sex talk especially about G-spots and going down, my tears are still flowing from the laughter; every guy needs a Nani like her to tell them exactly what to do...BRILLIANT!!!

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karisma

@karisma

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#517

i kept laughing from chapter to chapter! nani made a smashing entry in the plot with her "wise" and very generous advice🤣 i found everyone crazy in this story!🤡 it was absolute madness!🤪

omg ur last chp-arnav waking up to nani n laxmi, with nani egging him on n worse, laxmi as nanaji!

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Richa :D

@Richie-Rich

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#518

Read your complete FF today!
And needless to say, it was stunning as always :D
I loved Khushi's characterisation in this!
She was till the one who had suffered much, but you didn't portray her as a bechari!! That's what i loved!
Arnav toh as usual was awesome only!! I can't get over him, whatever his characterisation maybe :D
And Nani's sex talk? That managed to both crack me up and disgust me at the same time :D
Overall! Beautifully written! :) :D