Maaneet FF : My BrotherKeeDulhan precap 127

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Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#741

Originally posted by: Speechless

Haeeyyy

Over to you Sweetie...

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Magicia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#742

will comment ...lter i cant like because my todays quota on both of u finished ...50 likes ..lol

and ...hi hi ..

will comment with emos later ...

my cleverlady what i could say ...

u are awsome ...as always ..

Jobee Emos Tha Sab Speechless le Gaye ..

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Seher

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Posted: 13 years ago

#743

Geet slapped Maan she was in so much pain how could maan think so low about her Geet's Monologue is so intense and emotional very well written Rabz to you...

going back to haveli she saw dev Lo g agaai mere bechare dev ki kambakhti bechara sleeping peacefully and Geet shocked him Kiya bigara hai Dev ne tumhara GEET jokes apart you did Great

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Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#744

Originally posted by: mishti.muna
really great updates..
softly-spoken di,ur update was terribly awesome...in ur writing,just find the same thing what i felt...u make us feel that...
magicia di,thanks mere maan ka react se...mujhe to laga mere maan ka sattianash kardegi softy di...just love MSK'S attitude...
really great di..
so,cont soon...

Thank you so much muna for liking it...

m glad that i was somehow successful to ur expectations..

but still i know its less than what i wanted to write...

i was lost of words while writing...

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kahkashansakina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#745

yaar dev ko slap mara ha sahi kiya game khila dev ne na wonderful.

loved it

plscont

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Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#746

Originally posted by: harshdb
beautiful upates. awesome job softly spoken... loved it..

thanks for the pm. continue soon.

Thank you dear

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Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#747

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi
awesome one ... but where are the other 2 writers ????

well, i was so sad to see Geet like that but her instant change of mod made me go "dancing" ... well, her new avtar will surely tell Maan Singh Khurana that he is not the only one who is stubborn & "move on" type ... go for it Geet ... this is call tit for tat

do cont soon & do PM me

Thank you so much dear... for liking Geet...

and other two writer are ver much here... its just Geet's part going on thats why it was me... i think you've missed magicia just below mine update... she is always here

now you will see speechless jalwa😉

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Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#748

Originally posted by: anshra

i am very bad at commenting

so please bare with me

but my friends u all r doing fabbb job

magicia

i am ur fan yaar

and seher and rabs

u people simply surprised me

iread part i think its 27 by rabs

and i was like

hell this gal

have improved like helll

darling dont ever leave writing

why dont u write an OS??????????

plz do think about it gals

luv u all

haye Ainee... you used graphics for me... me flattered...

Yaar... if ever i got some totally new concept... which was never been discussed previously... may be i will write some OS... but when that day will come... is a big question mark

thanks for such a wonderful comment

love you...

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Seher

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Posted: 13 years ago

#749

Part 30:

Dev was sleeping on a bench a bit restless when some one shocked him badly he opened his eyes and saw Geet standing there and staring him with lots of emotions in her enchanting hazel eyes. He was confuse and anxious about what was she thinking .Dev gave her puzzle smile

Dev [ST]: i knew bro's anger. i knew he will behave harshly with Geet after all this drama then why the hell i left her alone with bro to face his anger, arrogance and rage 😡 OH GOD i know bro he can never hurt someone intentionally but he can't even control his anger too

Dev was thinking n thinking when he saw geet who just took a step towards him n he skipped a heartbeat❤️. he was looking at her coming towards him n he just open his mouth to ask her what's wrong

Dev: "Oh Geet you.. tum aa gaen.. I was waiting for you to come back.. wo"

when Geet raised her hand and Slaped him hard on his face "THHAAA" his eyes popped out 😲 poor him put his hand on his cheek where he just received a Slap from the most gorgeous lady 😳but he was still in dilemma why she slapped him?

Because he didn't tell her about her fake marriage with Maan or why he left her alone with him in that cottage 😕 In both cases he is the only one who is guilty and should be sorry so he without giving a second thought just start apologizing 😭

Dev: "I know geet its all my mistake n i deserve that slap too but believe me i didn't want to do this. i know i should have told u all before and i know about bro's anger too mujhy ese wahan tumhien Bro k sath akela chor k nahi anna chahiye tha i'm so sorry Geet. Extremely very sorry its all my Fault. only i m the one who is wrong i convinced bro for this Engagement or tum se pocha bhi nahi... u too involved in this i should had asked u too 😭 em sorry Geet please mujhy Maaf kar do Please Geet😳"

His voice was shaking with so much emotions and Geet who was listening him patiently was feeling bad for him. The way he was Apologizing again and again. She was standing there and looking at him like a statue. Dev saw her standing still so he touch her shoulder to gain her attention when she jerked his hand and ran away into the haveli leaving dev all shocked and confused😲

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