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Posted: 13 years ago



PART 4



i loved maneet interaction.





for the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
'he came,he saw and he conquered'Geet's plan failed to gift him cosmetics thinking him Behan G typeAll girls gathered auditorium for his Welcome like he is some Honorable guest not a student
Geet caught his attention and he actually noticed her pouting and making faces thats really she was shouting to make him confuse and he was giving her back with confidence
Wow what a welcome speech Out of this world em Speechless after reading the Welcome song the LATEST one Olllaa llaaa Ollla llaa This is the X factor of this update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Sorry for not updating today. I have to go somewhere and its an emergency.😭 I will be updating soon...

Edited by madhubala123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 5

Juliet: Geet, this is my last warning. Get out!

Geet stepped out of the room rolling her eyes.

Pinky:oye Geet kya hua? Hum to dar gaye the.
Geet:itni jaldi kaun nikalega mujhe. After all mere dad bhi to yeha ke ek trustee he.
Mira:hmm. Watever,but ur final stroke was great! Warna mujhe to laga wo ladka baazi jeet jayega.
Geet: aise kaise janey dungi. Mera naam bhi Geet Handa!

Just when she said that, Maan who was just passing by them took a step back. The girls stopped their conversation and stared at him.
Maan: Ms.Geet Handa! Actually waha bheed me theek se intro nhe hui.socha abhi mil lete he.
Geet crossing her hands over her chest,' apko nhe lagta ki 3000 ladkiyo se intro karte kuch zyada time nikal jayega
Maan(smirks): i just want U!
Geet: kyu re? Hmm? Agar is ground me apna game kheloge na to baat bigad jani he!
Maan: bilkul (moving closer to her) agar is ground me mene dhang se game kheli to tum 10mahine baad hi free hogi!

Geet stood there her jaw dropped.Wat did he just say? How dare he? And to spice her anger, NT and gang were giggling making fun of her. She took a long breath and stomped to the MIT park.
Geet:ye Maan.. dushtdanav! Apne apko samajta kya he! Uski to..
Mira's phone rang.
Mira(on phone): arey apko samaj me nhe ata? Kitni baar samjhaya? I am not interested.
Geet: ab kya?Kaun tha phone pe?
Pinky:aur kaun wahi Lovely Singh!
Mira: Pinky, lovely nhe Yash wo designer.Kitni baar keh chuki hu ki mujhe model nhe banna!
Geet:phir se peeche pada he? Chalo aj to uska sara bhut utar dungi. Tu usey wapas phone kar aur keh de ki tu interested he aur hum abhi break-time me usey milne jayenge
Mira:lekin wo kaise?
Pinky:aur permission?
Geet: humne kabhi li he?
Mira:to?
Geet:arey paar kar in musibat ke chatano ko! Jump ahead

Yash's boutique:
Yash: wow Mira! I am so happy that u finally said YES.
Mira: kya?
Yash: i mean show ke liye
Geet: par isney abhi ha nhe kiya
Yash:ap kaun he? Inki bodyguard?
Pinky:aise hi samaj le
Geet: aj ke baad aas paas bhi dikhe to babaji ki kasam naani yaad dila dungi. Chal Mira!
As they left,
Yash: ye ladki he ki don?

Back at MIT Maan was goin to his class thinking about wat he just did.He would never speak like that to any girl but she... He closed his eyes ,' Maan either u r gettin carried away among so many girls or she is really special. Cmon!wats so special! She is just like any other girl!

After the break hour,
Pinky: Geet,itne sarey bhaag daud ke baad class karne ka mann nhe kar rha!
Geet: to chal tujhe matinee show dikha du
Mira: bakwaas mat kar Geet. Yeha kaise
Geet:bakwas nhe sach. Abhi honewala he MArch class me real drama!
Mira: kehna kya chahti he?
Geet:wo apni hostel me rehti he na MArch wali Nitya,uskey hato humne ek sandesh bhijwaya he!

Geet and Co. slowly peeped into the MArch. class through the window.
The prof. was xplaining some complex aspects of designing. Maan sat at the centre of the class wondering what he was doin among these girls. This place luks so girly.Ofcourse many of them were staring back at him also.Some way or other,almost all girls were trying to get his attention.Frustrated,he kept his gaze down staring at the ground.From the corner of his eye,he found Nitya grinning and then winked at him.Thats when he lukd straight. The girl sitting right in front of him was wearing a low waist jeans and Nitya mistook him staring at her.

Geet was almost rolling on the floor laughing at his plight.
Pinky:oye Geet,ye dikhane yeha layi thi
Geet:nhe asli game ab shuru hoga.

She msgd Nitya. Nitya quickly took a packet wrapped in a brown paper and passed it to the girl sitting next to her. The packet came to Maan after being passed by each and every girl in the class.Finally it reached him. A confused Maan was examing the wrapped packet when the prof called out his name,'Maan,wat r u doin? Wats that in your hand?'
Maan: i don't know ma'm. Think its bread.
Prof: bread?
With that he opened the paper and stood there with a brand new packet of 'whisper ultra'


The professor herself couldn't stop herself from laughing.A frustrated Maan closed his eyes. He turned to Nitya all ready to shout at her when he saw Geet laughing at him. As she saw him,she raised her eye-brow in a challenging manner.He forgot all about his anger. Infact he was almost blushing,just by the thot that it was 'she' who trapped him!! He stood their lost in her smile...he could do anything to see her smile like that...

Mahiii... Mahiii.. mahi...

He broke from the trance when the prof's voice fell on his ears.
Prof.: somebody plz get that packet from him. And girls,maintain the decorum of the class.

The bell rang ending the class. Geet was just about to leave when he came out and caught hold of her wrist.
Geet was hell-shocked! How dare he touch her?

Mira: wat r u doin Maan?
Maan: wait! I need to talk to your friend.

He pinned her to the wall.
Maan: U know wat Geet. This is really fun and of course i'm njoying your girly tactics!

It felt more like a slap! Geet Handa! The cow-boy,the gangster, the cool dude had been accused of being girly!!! How dare he?

Her astonishment was feast enough for his eyes. He left her with a smirk.

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It was almost the end of the eventful first day.Maan was goin to leave for home when he had to take a leak. Oh! Now wat would a student,the only male student,will do in a female university? He was roaming all around the campus to find a men's urinal. Time passed by yet he couldn't find one.No administrative people had thot about this basic necessity while ammending the rules. Well, Maan had no time to change the system now. What was he supposed to do? He is not at all in a state to drive back home.

NT saw Maan roaming around the corridor.She walked upto him.
NT: Hi Maan
Maan: hi NT
NT: Wat r u doin here?
Maan:oh..mm..nothin special
NT: Wat abt a coffee?
Maan: NOO! I mean..not now..i'm in a hurry.

He quickly moved away from her.NT left with disappointment.


Maan had just made his great escape when he bumped into Geet.She lost her balance and obivously was in his arms.It was a new sensation as he found her so close to him.Given a chance,any other time he would have taken her in his arms and just walked away from the whole world but now,
Maan: Geet, where is the washroom?
Geet's almond brown eyes widened in shock. Somehow,she landed in his arms and now wats he askin? Chi chi babaji wat a jerk!
Geet: wat do u mean?

Thats when Maan realised the awkwardness of the question.He quickly freed her.
Maan: no..actually not that..i want to go to washroom
Geet: oh!
Maan: tumne kya socha?
She glared at him as if she is goin to kill him! He followed her quietly.

Outside the washroom, Mira and Pinky came lukin for her.
Pinky: Kya hua Geet? Chalte he na
Geet: nhe! Abhi nhe abhi humare college ke is sherr.. Ko su su karna he!

The girls started to giggle.
Maan: Geeett!
Geet: don't be angry Mr.SuperHero,abhi agar hum help nhe karenge to ap washroom kaise jaoge? Isliye pyar se.

Maan quickly took her hand by wrist and kissed on her palm.
Maan: ho gaya pyar se. Ab jaldi andar jao aur sabse kaho ki abhi issi waqt bahar nikle,samjhi tum?
She didn't know how to react to his action.But Geet couldn't tease him anymore seeing his plight.After all,she is human.She quickly went in to shoo away other girls and solve his problem.

After he left,
Mira: kya baat he Geet? Tu to badi help kar rhe he!
Pinky: lagta he DD ka jaadu tujpe bhi chal gaya
Geet: DD?
Pinky:ha Maan ko sab yeha DD kehte he. Dhak dhak!
Geet: DD yani dusht danav! Tum dekti jao Mira, ye tufan se pehle ki khamoshi he. Kal ka din Maan Singh Khurana apni zindagi me kabhi nhe bhulega. Mujhe girly kehta he! Dikhati hu!Agar kal usey apni had me na layi to mera naam bhi Geet Handa nhe!
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PRECAP: RAGGING!! :Geet ragging MSK! 😲 😳


hope that u like this. I don't know if u ppl are losing interest as the numbr of LIKEs r falling from 120s to 80s. Plz tell me if its boring. Also give me ur suggestions too. I will definitely try to incorprate them! Plz DO TELL ME THE NEGATIVE POINTS TOO!!! 😳


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Edited by madhubala123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww that superb update dear...
haila bachara Maan kahan phas gaya...
waise moi loving Geet...
can't wait for the next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update loved it
wow this is awesome
geet ragging maan that's intresting
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVELY UPDATE DEAR WAITING FOR PRECAP
Edited by muraadlovesdd - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome
geet ragging maan interseting
cont soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsum update luvd it
poor maan lol
cnt w8 2 read more plzz cont soon
fanx 4 da pm x

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