SS: Dear Diary... Part 14 Upd 11/30 Pg 66

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richiiiii

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Posted: 13 years ago

#491

i so loved the update hasini

once again i bow down to your awesomeness...

you made their journey so beautiful, engaging, and enthralling...this is one of the ff which i know i will come back to time and again...

waiting for you to start another ff...

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ninand

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Posted: 13 years ago

#492

I have been trying so hard to get some words out from the past 3 updates.. to no avail.

Comment , I will, cause I genuinely wouldn't be able to 'not' comment. But taking in those drunk words so so beautifully strung together like teasing verses, I am unable to formulate my experience into anything intelligible.

have been reading and re-reading to feel their smoothness warm my ears as they glide through them... beautiful language.

Love your work, Hasini.

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Hima

@Ramhari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#493

Their confessions were so beautiful Hasini.
My mind instantly went back to confessions on the rock in Sohra.
Cant get NYT out of my mind 😃.
Finally the walls of silence were broken.
The ending was beautiful as always.
Hope Channi finds somebody good too.

Now waiting for the next FF or SS or OS

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 13 years ago

#494

Hey read both parts 13 & 14 together... & i'm glad i did that as i couldn't have lasted to know what happens next...

after reading part 13... i was so eagerly waiting to read part 14... loved it...

PART 13... beautiful potrayal of thier restlessness, feelings, agony... & the best was Geet's realisation of her shortcoming in the relation that HE has no one for him whereas channin has the whole family... you put forward it very well...

loved his insistence on telling her he wants to get her home...

PART 14... aww the last part.. didn't want this to end soon.. but i guess it was a timely, beautiful & awesome ending...

loved the update... his feeling of emptiness on returning home... ( the bed being too big for him... too good a realization since his wedding) ...

wow she was already on her way back... the effort she took... stating his birhtday ..

loved her confession & how she opened up to him... & his understanding of it all...

the line.. where he feels that she is good with her secrets to be slowly revealed (i suppose) i liked it the way you wrote it.

what took my heart was the line where you mentoined was "one person's madness understood & accepted by just one another person they fall in love with "...loved it seriously...

you really start putting symbols to the things used in your ffs... first i couldn't help remembering NYT while having a cup of Hot Chocolate.. and nwo Burbon cookie with milk will always remind me of Dear DIary...

loved this whole SS... ESPECIALLY your writng transports me to a different world... i keep waiitng for your updates...

would eagerly wait for your next.. whenever its gonna be...

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Antares

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Posted: 13 years ago

#495

Fabulous update, Hasini!

The duologue, her confessions, their reconciliation... it was all so beautiful. The last bit was splendidly penned... subtly sensual. A perfect closure.

This has ended... hope you come up with the new one real soon. I love what you write... can't get enough of it.

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504887

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Posted: 13 years ago

#496

awesome ending
just luvd it
it all started & ended with the dear diary aww
finally confession 4m geets side
bechara maan was tarsofying 4 it
finally they r one & together & very much in luv wid each other
n d biscuit is not ordinary any longer
can we expect an epilogue?

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preetianand21

@preetianand21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#497

Hi read your SS in one go. Was just browsing through the fanfics column and saw or SS. Its a beautiful story. My moth was watering just thinking about the bourbon biscuit and milk.
Please do let me know when u start a new FF or SS.

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rania786

@rania786

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Posted: 13 years ago

#498

""That's perhaps why - at any given time - they have one person's madness understood and accepted by just one other person they fall in love with."" 👏 ...

perfectly said! This one sentence for me describes what love is ... not flowers/hearts or any other trapping or admiration - its just this... to be understood in all your madness and accepted with all your demons...

brilliant story from start to finished... please add me to your PM list for any future FFs SSs OSs whatever...

p.s. I started reading NY Times...So glad I discovered it after you had finished it!

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rania786

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Posted: 13 years ago

#499

I was just skimming through the comments ... Noli Me Tangere sounds fascinating ... I say don't worry about serial characterizations ... in any case 'goody two shoes' and 'self-sacrificing hero' sounds boring... :). On the other hand Wyatt's Whoso list .. now a story based on that is really something to look forward to... a deer hunted by a royal ... please start soon... I am already looking forward to it ...do PM me whenever you start this.