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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#171

Geet is opening up wid maan...but who was she talking abt... I believe she wasn't talking abt channi...

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568124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: Audiwalia
Geet is opening up wid maan...but who was she talking abt... I believe she wasn't talking abt channi...

Ok...I thought it was obvious. It's her mom. I have changed one of her references to 'Ma', so that should take care of it.

Thanks for stopping by :)

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pushpi

@pushpi

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: 6thElement

Had you not added the frown at the end, I would have asked you if its out of kushi ya gham...😊

Eitherways, it doesn't tell me if you feel about the update 😉? Accha tha ki nahi?

Haha I needed that laugh :-)

Update to acha hi tha na. As always, I look forward to the last paragraph of your update more than anything. Simplicity is a charm in itself. Sharing a moment with things as simple as milk and cookies changed the feel of MG relationship. Lovely!

It's heartbreaking that such simplicity is not found or cherished so often in our time and age.

Chaddo!

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568124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: pushpi

Haha I needed that laugh :-)

Update to acha hi tha na. As always, I look forward to the last paragraph of your update more than anything. Simplicity is a charm in itself. Sharing a moment with things as simple as milk and cookies changed the feel of MG relationship. Lovely!

It's heartbreaking that such simplicity is not found or cherished so often in our time and age.

Chaddo!

Do you want me to start taking for granted that the update was good?. Maana...I prefer silence to words, but not from readers ;)

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pushpi

@pushpi

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: 6thElement

Do you want me to start taking for granted that the update was good?. Maana...I prefer silence to words, but not from readers ;)

Honestly woman you've known me for a year and you still don't know me. Your updates are almost always great and flawless. I have told you in the past on which updates were more powerful than others in emotions and content. You have gotta give me more credit girl!😎 I DO give feedback on your writing. Uh-huh. Which reminds me, when am I getting feedback for my writing that I sent you days ago?

Aur itna acha comment to abhi likha...uspe to kuch bhi nahi kaha

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#176

POOR MAAN

GEET WAS ATTRACTED TO HIM SINCE THE BEGINING AND SHE ACTED ON HER FEELING

BUT NOW SHE IS FEELING GUILTY AND IS NOT READY TO ACCEPT MAAN AS HER HUSBAND

WONDER HOW THEY SOLVE THE SITUATION

CHANNI HAS TO GET MARRIED FIRST BEFORE ANYTHING

LOVED THE WAY YOU HAVE WRITTEN

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516645

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Posted: 13 years ago

#177

This is beautiful. One word.. You know I prefer silence to words just like you and sometimes when you are appalled we say "am Dumbstuck!" isn't it? Some of the great things don't need a feedback and I won't believe in stating the obvious. But as this is my first comment here, i should stop talking like my professors who teach a lot and which i dont get a head or tail of; and talk normally. I've bittersweet memories with This story. I was reading this the otherday; as per the reccomendation of my sister and at many places i was shocked. It is surprising that i felt connected at various places. Mainly Geet's diariy entries and to be specific: "Whatever whatever whatever! I want to say whatever to Daarji. I want that Jean" Although I didnt write the exact same words in my diary.. I write similarly. In fact i write diary as agressive as Geet does when she's angry. My diary is the scapegoat for everything. Since am through mobile I cudnt comment much eventhough i want to.. A lot infact. I'd complete my comment when am through PC. Till then let me say it's a beautiful story and one of my favorites

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#178

Atlast they spoke

Waiting to read more

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Hima

@Ramhari

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#179

Maaneet's first meeting was awesome.
So the attraction was mutual.
Geet suppressed it with her guilt
Good that Maan realized it atleast at the last moment.
Looks like Maan's patience paid off.
Geet being guilt free took the first step towards building their relatiuon.
Her opening up definitely came as a pleasent surprise to Maan.
Wonder what more surprises would be entered in her dear diary
Waiting for the next part

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Onir

@Onir

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#180

Oh ho!!! oh another good update... how do manage always to write so welll... i know i must always be boring you off ...with the same compliment...but can't help😆😆

so finally after facing & making peace atleast somewhat with her inner desires & feelings Geet is opening up to him...

Maan was suprised with it... but at same time didn't let go of the oppurtunity..

loved their first entry they made in "THEIR" diary... waiting for more such entries...

continue soon...