NewFF Maaneet Tujhko jo Paaya Thrd1 Upd pt8 pg 133 - Page 60

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: preethia

loved the update...

atleast maan has started to get closer to her...
so adi gonna join college...
will he get to know abt dev and geet...
cant wait for the next
pl cont soon

Yes maan has already started affecting her regarding Adi we have to wait and watch. Thanks dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ammu5

superb update. but dev?? jst hate him

Thanks dear... Dev😡 ur hatred towards him will increase with time
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kahkashansakina

Awesome update

loved it
yaar yeh dev ka kay chakar hai
mujeh lag raha hai woh maan ko jalane ko dev ka istemal karegi.

Dev ka chakkar jald hi samaj mein aa jaayega ...well I don't think so that Geet will use Dev to make Maan jealous coz if she does that openly then Maan will realize that she is getting affected by him
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneet5

pia ek baat kahoo geet maan ko subha deki thi magar uska naam kaise pata use

ha uske baad mili tak nahi
ander dadi se mili bas adi hoga shayed maan ko bas takkar di maaneet eyelock huwa bas naam kaah se jaan thi hi maan ne police sirf yahi kaha hi ki geet meri mangetar hi ore wo wuse apni ghar ke paas deki
next dadi adi maan waha se jane wale thena geet ne maan ko usi ka ghar choda jise ghar me deka wo apne ghar ka hi ho wo kaise
next geet ko sab yaad hi

Remember Maan jab Geet se takraya tha toh wo KM se bahar aa raha tha aur phir Handa mansion ki taraf bad raha tha... Jab Geet k saamne sab ne Maan ki baat ki tab wo samaj gayi k bahar jisse wo takrai thi wo maan hi hai coz Adi is younger than maan aur kahi na kahi wo maan ko puri tarah se bhuli nahi hai😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your encouragement and support. I have replied to ur comments. Many of u did not like Dev's entry but he had to enter sooner or later coz he has a main role to play in Maaneet's life.
love-Piya
PART 7

Khurana Mansion

It was late night

Adi: Ofho ye paani bhi khatm ho gaya kitchen se jaakar lekar aata hoon

He takes the jug and goes to the kitchen

While returning back he notices that the lights were on in Maan's room

Adi: Bro abhi bhi jage hue hai par kyun?

He starts walking towards the room

Maan's room

Maan was busy making a portrait of Geet

He was so engrossed in his world that he did not realize Adi's presence

He was highlighting Geet's beauty perfectly in the sketch

Adi came and stood besides Maan

Maan was still lost in those magical eyes of Geet that he had just finished making

Adi: Wah Bro kitna khoobsurat sketch hai...totally out of this world

Maan: Kyun jhooth bol rahe ho Adi main kya, iss duniya ka sabse famous artist bhi agar Geet ki khoobsurati ko kazaz mein utarana chahe toh wo nakamiyaab ho jaayega.

Maan: Tajmahal ki khoobsurati ko phir bhi aasani se kazaz mein kaid kar sakthe hai par meri Geet ki ek bhi adaa ko kaid karna namumkin hai

Adi: Itna pyar karte hai bhabhi se?

Maan: Ye bhi koi puchne ki baat hai waise Adi tum ab tak sooye nahi?

Adi: Sooye toh aap bhi nahi Bro aaj tak maine aapko kabhi bhi der raat ko jagte hue nahi dekha toh phir aaj aisi kya baat ho gayi jo aap abtak jage hue ho?

Maan: Adi aaj barso baad Geet k zuban se maine apna naam suna...ek anjaana sa sukun mila aur itni khushi mil rahi hai k neend bhi aaj aakhon mein utarne k liye taiyaar nahi hai

Adi: Bus naam sunkar itni khushi k aap ye bhi bhool gaye k bhabhi ne hume pehchane se saaf inkaar kar diya mujhe toh laga tha k aapko badi thes pauchi hogi

Maan: Wo jhooth bol rahi hai Adi wo hum mein se kisi ko nahi bhuli bus khud ko dhokha de rahi hai... aaj bhi mujhe uski aakhon mein apne liye aur hum sab k liye ek pyar nazar aatha hai bus zarurat hai toh usse iss baat ka ehsaas dilane ki

Adi: Bro kya aapko wakai mein aisa lagta hai?

Maan: Geet ko mujhse behter koi nahi pehchan saktha Adi shayad wo khud bhi apne aap ko itna nahi jaanti jitna k main usse jaanta hoon

Adi: Ek baat puchu Bro aapne aaj pehli baar bhabhi ko dekha aur phir bhi aapne unki tasveer itni perfect banayi hai k koi keh bhi nahi sakta k aap aaj itne saalo baad unse mile ho...aapne itne perfection k saath ye sketch kaisa banaya?

Maan: Adi Geet mujhse kabhi dur thi hi nahi wo toh humesa se hi mere dil mein samayi hui thi haan aaj bus maine usse apni aakhon mein humesha k liye kaid kar diya hai

Maan: Ab jab meri aakhon aur meri dhadkano mein Geet samayi hui hai toh usski tasveer banana mere liye mushkil kaise ho saktha hai?

Adi: I hope k aapko aapka pyar dubara mil jaaye main aapko tuthe hue nahi dekh paaunga

Maan: Tum bhool rahe ho Adi main MSK hoon jo k mushkilo k saamne ghutne nahi thektha balki uska dat kar saamna karta hai aur ye toh mohabbat ki jung hai issmein jeet toh sachhe aashiq ki hi hogi

Adi: Bhabhi wakai mein lucky hai Bro k unhe aap jaisa pyar karnewala koi mila

Maan: Nahi Adi Agar Geet ne mujhe dubara apne zindagi mein shaamil kar diya to iss duniya ka sabse khushkismat insaan main bun jaaunga...

Maan: Main shayad Geet ko utni khushi kabhi bhi na de pau jitni khushi uske mehez saath rehne par mujhe miltha hai

Maan: bus abse uske saath bitaye hue har ek ache bure pal ko yuhi yaado mein sametkar rakhunga...uski yaado ko bhi kabhi apne aap se dur nahi jaane dunga

Adi: Par Bro aap bhabhi ko apne pyar ka ehsaas kaise dilwayoge kuch socha hai aapne?

Maan: Filhaal toh kuch nahi socha bus itna pata hai k main koi jaldbaazi nahi karunga aur saath hi saath usse akele bhi nahi chudunga

Adi: Bro par...

Maan: Bus Adi isse pehle k Dadima jag jaaye hume so jaana chahiye iss mamle mein hum kal subah baat karenge

Adi : Jaisa aap kahe. Good night

Maan : Good night

Adi leaves Maan gives the final touches to the sketch and writes I love U Geet on it and sleeps peacefully

Meanwhile,

Geet was totally restless she was trying to sleep but as soon as she closed her eyes Maan's face would come in front of her

His smiling face...the love that was reflecting in his eyes...his sweet talks... his patience his calmness and his down to earth personality everything was echoing in her mind

Geet gets up in frustration

Geet: Kyun baar baar mujhe uski yaad aa rahi hai aisi kaunsi baat hai jo mujhe uski taraf kheech rahi hai... main kyun apni soch par kaabu nahi kar paa rahi

She threw the pillow in annoyance

Geet: Usska shanth bartav mujhe kyun bechain kar raha hai? Usse toh mujhse ladna chahiye tha par bajaiye iske usne mujhse maafi maangi par kyun?

Geet: maafi usne mujhse maangi par najaane kyun mujhe ye apni haar aur uski jeet nazar aa rahi hai ... itne saalo mein kisine mujhse theek tareeke se baat tak nahi ki aur Maan mujshe itne shaanth tareeke se baat kar raha tha ... nahi mujhe usse rokhna hoga agar wobhi mujhse sabhi ki tarah batameezi se baat kare toh uska asar mujhpar kabhi nahi hoga

Geet: Mr. MSK Geet kabhi nahi badlegi kabhi nahi. Meri zindagi mein kabhi bhi kisi ki zarurat nahi thi aur aage bhi nahi hogi jeet meri hogi tumhari nahi

She once again tries to sleep but then again his words were echoing in her ears

" Subah Dadima ki wajah se tumhe kafipareshanni hui uske liye main tumse maafi maangta hoon..."

Geet takes the pillow and covers her ear

But she just could not remove Maan from her thoughts

After sometime she somehow managed to sleep

Next day

Khurana Mansion

Adi: Good Morning Dadima

Dadima: Good Morning bete

Adi: Bro nazar nahi aa rahe

Maan: Kya baat hai aaj apne bade bhai ki bahut yaad aa rahi hai tumhe

Adi: Mujhe toh apne Bro ki yaad humesha aathi hai par aapki yaado mein toh bus bhabhi ka hi kabsa hai

Maan started blushing

Dadima: Kyun tang kar rahe ho Adi...waise Maan aapne kuch socha hai k aage kya karna hai?

Maan: Adi tum college join kar rahe ho

Adi: Kya?

Maan: Haan aur wo bhi Geet ka college

Adi: Par Bro main college kyun join karu jabke meri padai complete ho chuki hai main toh soch raha tha k ab se aapka business mein haath bataunga

Maan: Adi kuch aur extra degree mil jaaye toh usmein koi nuksaan nahi hai aur waise bhi tum agar Geet k college mein rahoge toh mujhe tasali rahegi

Adi: O toh mujhe bhabhi k group mein gussna hoga

Maan: Bilkul bhi nahi ek baat toh mujhe samaj mein aa gayi hai k Geet ka friend circle achha nahi hai main bus yahi chahtha hoon k tum uske aas paas raho taaki jab bhi usse humari zarurat ho hum uske paas maujood ho

Maan: Aur waise bhi Geet khud ka khayal rakh sakthi hai wo ek kaval ki tarah hai jo kichad mein rehne par bhi apni khoobsurati banaye rakhta hai

Adi: Toh mujhe exactly karna kya hoga?

Maan: Padai aur kuch nahi wo jab bhi tumhe dekhegi usse kahina kahi ye ehsaas hoga k ajnabiyon ki beed mein wo akeli nahi hai

Adi :Par Bro aap bhabhi k kareeb kaise jaauge aap toh student bankar nahi join kar sakthena after all aap itne bade empire k maalik ho

Maan: Main jaanta hoon mujhe kya karna hai tum bus dekthe jau chalo tumhara admission karwa detha hoon

Adi and Maan leave for the college

College

Geet was still annoyed since she was unable to forget Maan

Dev: Hi beautiful

He tries to hug Geet but Geet pushes him away

Geet: Apne hadh mein raho Dev don't try to act smart

Dev: Common Geet main tumhara boyfriend hoon toh tumhe hug toh kar hi saktha hoon

Geet : Boyfriend aur tum give me a break Dev kaunse kayali pulav pakaa rahe ho tum mere saath bus iss liye ho kyunki tum wo pehle insaan the jisne meri taraf dosti ka haath badaya jab main akelepan mein tadap rahi thi

Geet: Par iska matlab ye nahi k tum kuch bhi sochne lago ek baat clearly sun lo main tumse pyar nahi karti aur naahi kabhi karungi kyunki mujhe pyar se nafrat hai issliye mere kareeb aane ki koshish mat karna warna meri dosti bhi kho baitoge samjhe tum

Saying so Geet leaves

Dev: Tumse pyar kartha bhi kaun hai Geet main toh bus tumhare saath ek raat bitana chahtha hoon...aur aaj nahi toh kal wo din zarura aayega

Dev: Ye jo roz roz tum meri bejati karti hona uska badla toh main ek din lekar hi rahunga ...tumhari ye berukhi mere junoon ko aur badhawa de rahi hai ek din tum meri sez zarur sajaogi

Dev: Kapdo mein jab tum itni delicious lagti ho to bina kapdo k toh...

He started smiling

Dev: Khair filhaal k liye kisi aur ko dhundna padega jo k meri pyas bujha sake par tum zyada din tak mujhse bach nahi paaugi...

PRECAP: Geet: "Maan tum apne aap ko samajthe kya ho mere college bhi aa gaye mera picha karte karte"
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PART 8 : PAGE 133
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
aweome update loved it
loved the depth of love maan has for geet
and loved the answer geet gave to dev
but dev is dangerous but not to worry maan is there na 😉
Edited by abinash079 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
am so late...lol...btw commented for both parts: 7 and 8 on page 138...
Edited by zahra15 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful updateee 😃 😃 😃
totally amazing 😳 😳 I love hw much maan care 4 geet par geet maane ke leye ready ho jaye toh waah maza aa jayega wooh i will give party
nd dis dev 🤢🤢🤢want to kill him idiot hate him uggghh 😡 😡
nd da bert part is that geet maan ke baare me toh sochte h 😍😍😍
wow i cnt wait 4da next😍 plz update soon di
Edited by gurtilover - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Maan made Geet's sketch.I rly feel like seeing it

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