NewFF Maaneet Tujhko jo Paaya Thrd1 Upd pt8 pg 133 - Page 42

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your constant encouragement dear friends. I promise that Geet will change but it will take some time and I will give u loads of Maaneet moments in the future but right now u have to trust me.
Here is the next part I hope each one of u will enjoy reading it. Any kind of suggestions are always welcome
love-Piya
PART 5
Maan: Ek din toh aisa zarur aayega Geet jab tumhe yakeen ho jaayega k main hi tumhara Maan hoon wahi Maan jo pehle bhi tumhara tha aur aaj bhi sirf tumhara hai
Maan: Chaliye Dadima chalthe hai
Mohinder: Par bete abhi toh aap keh rahe the k aap Geet...
Maan: Main apni baat pe kayam hoon Uncle par ye sab ek din mein nahi hoga...aaj barso baad kisine Geet ko apna kehkar pukara hai iss waqt hume usse akele rehne dena chahiye kyunki wo bhale hi hum sab k saamne bejijak chali gayi par mujhe yakeen hai kuch pal k liye hi sahi wo iss baare mein sochegi zarur
Maan: Geet par koi zabardasti ka rishta thopna galat hoga hume milkar usse ye ehsaas dilana hai k wo kitni anmol hai...
Adi: I think Bro aap thik keh rahe ho filhaal hume yaha se chalna chahiye
Dadima: Rano fikr mat karo hum sab kahi na khai Geet k gunegaar hai iss liye iss galti ko hum sab milkar hi thik karenge...hum humari bachhi ko ab aur tadapne nahi denge
Rano: Aapke aane se phir se umeed ki kiran nazar aarahi hai Dadima shayad hume humari bachhi dubara mil jaaye
Maan: Zarur milegi Aunty par please aaj jo bhi hua uska zikr Geet se mat kijiyega ab main gaya hoon main dheere dheere Geet ki saari takleefe dur kar dunga
Dadima: To thik hai Rano ab hum chalthe hai
Mohinder: Ji Dadima
All three of them leave
Meanwhile,
Geet's room
Geet was lost in some thoughts
She opened her bag and her fingers automatically went towards a box
She wanted to open that box but for a moment she hesitated
Finally she made up her mind and opened the box
There was a key in it.
She placed that key near her heart as if it was something special
She took the key and started moving in a particular direction
She was going to open a lock when her mobile started ringing
She attended the call
Geet: Hello
Vicky: Geet main tujhse confirm karna chahtha tha tu paka apni baat apr kayam haina I mean wo subah wali bet
Geet: Geet kabhi bhi apni baat se peeche nahi hathi samjhe tum aaj raat ko hi tujhe wo papers mil jaayenge aur haan tum aur Shasha sahi time par location pe pauchh jana
Vicky: Sure hum pauchh jaayenge
The call ends
Geet realizes what she was going to do.
Geet: Ye main kya karne ja rahi thi...nahi main aisa nahi hone dungi
She takes the key and once again puts it in the box and throws her bag in one corner
Meanwhile,
Vicky: Shasha aaj ka plan set hai tu bhi sahi time par pauchh jana
Shasha: Haan haan pauchh jaayungi
Shasha: (thinking) Geet ye bet tumhe bahut mehnga padega...shayad tumhari zindagi ka aakhiri bet hi samajlo
After some time
Geet: Hmm...aaj ki bet jeetne k liye mujhe kuch dusara tareeka apnana hoga...
PLS LISTEN TO THIS SONG
Nashila nashila tera naina churaille humra chaina ab humre dil mein raina...
She gets an idea and starts smiling as if she has won the war even before entering the battlefield
Haan...Nashila nashila tera naina churaille humra chaina ab humre dil mein raina...
She takes her laptop and starts working on something as if executing her plan
Oh...Chaliya chaliya chaliya ruh churalu main hoon aisi chaliya
chaliya chaliya oh chaliya haath na aau main hoon aisi chaliya
There was a different kind of confidence on her face as if everything was a roller coaster ride for her
Oas leher hoon dhoop seher hoon
paak meher hoon bachke jaayega kaha
She was concentrating on her work and with every passing moment her smile was increasing
Na lada na lada tu aakh na lada don't look at me like that Maahi...
Na lada na lada tu aakh na lada don't look at me like that Boy
After some time her happiness new no bounds...she took a pendrive and stored something in it
Chaliya chaliya...chaliya
ruh churalu main hoon aisi chaliya
Her face was glowing as if reflecting her victory...
Geet: Ab bus raat hone ka intezaar hai
Night time
Geet dresses up and takes her bike keys and goes out
Rano: Geet bete aap kaha jaa rahi hai
Geet: Aapko isse matlab? Main kahi bhi jau ye meri marzi hai aapko issmein dhakalandaazi karne ka koi haq nahi hai samjhi aap?
Rano could not control her tears but Geet was least bothered
She simply walks out
After some time
Geet reaches the location
Shasha: Aa gayi tum mujhe toh laga tha k shayad tum darr gayi ho issliye nahi aayogi
Geet: Darna toh tumhe chahiye Shasha Geet ki zindagi ki kitab mein darr naam ki koi cheez nahi hai
Vicky: Toh plan kya hai?
Geet: Simple principal ki office jaakar papers churane hai
Vicky: par Geet hum waha pauchenge kaise I mean gate pe toh watchman hogana toh hum gate se kaise jaayenge?
Geet: Hum gate se nahi balki kisi aur raaste se jaayenge
Vicky: kaha se?
Geet: hai ek shortcut jo hume College k pichle hisse tak chod dega aur phir hum rassi ki madat se terrace tak pauch jaayenge aur phir seedha princi k cabin mein
While Geet was explaining her plan Shasha was busy sending a message trough her mobile
Vicky: Magar ye toh bada hi kahtarnaak plan hai ismein kafi khatra hai
Geet: Tum jaise darpok k liye khatra hai magar mere aur Shasha k liye ye aasan hai haina Shasha?
Shasha: Main issmein kaha se aa gayi?
Geet: Offcourse u r involved darling tumhi ne toh mujhse bet lagayi thi aur main apne aakhon k saamne uss insaan k chehre par haar dekhna pasand karti hoon jisne mujhe challenge kiya...so that means k tum bhi mere saath Princi k cabin mein chalogi
Vicky: Aur main?
Geet: Tum neeche khade rehkar pehra doge koi bhi gadbad lage toh hume ishara kar dena
Vicky: Ok
Geet: Toh chale
All of them leave
But Shasha was a bit scared
After some time they reach the college through the shortcut route
Shasha: Geet tum chalo main yahi rukhthi hoon
Geet: No Shasha tum bhi mere saath chalogi samjhi tum mujhe koi excuses nahi chahiye agar itna hi darr lag raha tha toh mujhe challenge hi kyun kiya?
Shasha: Par...
Geet: Par war kuch nahi tum mere saath chal rahi ho bus
Vicky: Par Geet tum log ye builiding k terrace tak kaise pauchoge?
Geet: Hindi movies nahi dekhtha kya jaise chor chadthe hai thik ussi tarah se
saying so she throws the rope on the terrace
Geet: Chalo shasha...
Shasha had no other option she did exactly what Geet wanted her to do
Raat hoon taaro mein mil jaau
Har mod pe main aaho ki baho mein khil jaau
Geet cross checks the rope
Chal hoon tujhpe main chal jaau tu na jaanega kab baazi main dhoke se maar jaau...
She gives a thumbs up and both of them start climbing
Bhikre dil ka main haal hoon
har gaalib ka main khayal hoon
Finally they reach the terrace. Geet signals Vicky to be alert and forcefully takes Shasha along with her
Main noor hoon main hoor hoon
Bachke jaayega kaha...
They walk down the stairs and reach the principal's office. The door was locked
Nalada na lada tu aakh na lada
Don't look at me like that maahi
Geet removes a hairclip from Shasha's hair and starts opening the lock
Na lada na lada tu aakh na lada
Don't look at me like that boy
After few minute Geet was successful in opening the door. Shasha was totally surprised Geet was just too perfect
Chaliya chaliya chaliya ...ruh churalu main hoon aisi chaliya
They entered the cabin and Geet closed the door with her foot
Naashela nashella tera naina
churaile humra chaina ab humre dil mein rehna...
By that time Principal had reached the college along with some police officials. In order to trap Geet Shasha had laid this plan
Nasheela nasheela tera naina
churaile humra chaina ab humre dil mein rehna...
Shasha was really nervous since she was aware that the principal might come anytime but Geet was relaxed
Hmm...Raaz hoon hotho ko sil jaau...terehaatho se main reth banke phisal jaau
Geet once again opened the cupboard where all the documents were kept. She started going through some files
Bhoond hoon tujhpe baras jaau..jo na bhujegi wo pyaas banke main tarsau..
Vicky noticed the principal and immediately messaged Geet about his arrival
Chalki pehli chaal hoon main suljha uljha jaal hoon
Geet started smiling on reading the message she handed a file to Shasha
I am the noor I am the hoor tu jaayega kaha...
Without giving a warning to Shasha she opened the window and jumped out from there
Nalada na lada tu aakh na lada
Don't look at me like that maahi
Shasha could not register these sudden events in her mind. It was just too fast.
Na lada na lada tu aakh na lada
Don't look at me like that boy
Before she could understand anything the principal opened the door. Shasha was caught in her own trap. By that time Geet safely landed on the ground and gave a victorious smile
Vicky: Geet Shasha kaha hai?
Geet: Tum yaha se chalo phir batathi hoon
Both of them start their bike and go away
Here Shasha was totally trapped
Principal: O toh tum ho jo exam papers churane aayi thi officer arrest her right now
Shasha: Nahi Sir aapko galatfaimi ho rahi hai main toh yaha...
Principal: Kya itne raat ko yaha dance karne aayi ho...exam k question papers tumhare haath mein hai aur kehthi ho k main yaha chori karne nahi aayi
Shasha :Pls try an understand sir
Officer: Dekhiye Mam aapko jo kuch bhi kehna hai police station mein aakar khaiye
Shasha: Par Sir...
The officials take her away
Meanwhile,
Vicky: Geet tumne bataya nahi Shasha kaha hai?
Geet: Ab tak toh police station pauch chuki hogi
Vicky: Police station?
Geet: Haan wo kya samajthi thi k Geet koi bevakuf ladki hai maine subah hi usko kisise phone pe baat karte hue sun liya tha k jab main papers chori karne jaaungi toh wo principal ko inform kar degi...
Geet: Mere saath chalaki karne ki koshish...bahut bhari padega
Vicky: Par iss sab chakar mein toh question papers mile hi nahi...matlab tum bet haar gayi
Geet: Main kabhi haarthi nahi question papers toh maine subah hi principal k computer se hack kar liye the
Vicky: Kya?
Geet: Haan maine ghar baithe baithe principal k computer ka password hack kar liya aur question paper ki soft copy iss pendrive mein hai...ye sab drama toh maine Shasha ko sabak shikane k liye kiya tha...
Vicky: Wow Geet u r a genious ab pls mujhe ye papers de dho
Geet: Ek sharth par tumhe mere saath bike racing karni hogi wo bhi abhi
Vicky: Kya?
Geet: manzoor hai toh bolo warna main chali
Vicky: Manzoor hai
Geet: That's like a good boy
Chaliya chaliya chaliya ruh churalu main hoon aisi chaliya
PRECAP: Maaneet and Police
PLS PRESS D LIKE BUTTON N DO COMMENT
Love-Piya
PART 6: PAGE 9
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

hey pihuuu...am here...lol...


defo this gonna be an awesome update...thats for sure...


really geet...n when u will realise ke maan is urs only n that too like the childhood one...am gonna b the happiest ever... :)))...uncle have no fear when maan is here...kyunki ek baar jo usne commitment karli to woh apne aap ki bhi nahi sunta...lol...i mean he will make sure he brings back the old geet in front of all...did u see uncle...how he knows ur daughter which, btw, u failed in...he knows geet much much more than u all...


am sure that key n whatever geet was going to open with that have, in a way, a connection with maaneet...how i wish that mobile hadnt rung...stupid phone...har baar galt time pe hi bajta hain...n now am sure u wont let us know about that particular thing so soon...right...hihi...


oh no that bet...am sure geet gonna succeed knowing ur hatred for sasha...lol...geet k dimaag mein kuch to zaroor hain...she seems so confident...i wonder what is it...


stupid sasha...maybe U r the freaking mouse who easily gets scared but not geet...ok???...vicky...dont u know there's no thrill without danger for geet...hihi...sasha gonna accompany geet...u r brilliant geet...


kyun sasha...are u already scared k u r asking her to go alone...am so happy k geet trapped u...u wanted to land her into trouble na...now u only suffer...i love u for this geet n Piya...


maaneet and police...i wonder what does this mean...but dont worry i will know it whhen u will update next...so plzzz continue soon n thnxxx for the pm...haha...

Edited by zahra15 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesme just amazing update 🤗 Geet ne kya phasaya shasha ko bare aaye the hamare geet ko phasane hahaha nd mughe ek baat abhi tak samag nhe aay in da begining geet was going to do smthng bt she stoped wat was that cnt wait 4 more plz update soon di
Edited by gurtilover - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago


are yaar kya dhamakedar update tha...simply mind blowing...
ye Geet to super genius hai yaar pehle hacking phir sasha ko phasane ka plan...wohoo...
aur madam piya apke dimag se sabkuch nikla to apki intelligence ki to daat deni hi paregi...brilliantly executed part yaar...HATS OFF DEAR!!!!!
waise is Geet ke dhamakedar avtar ke chakkar mein main apne sweet sweet maan ko to bhool hi gai...yaar sachchi is maan ki understanding aur pyar ka to koi jawab hi nahin...ise kehte hain sachcha jeevan sathi...:-)
are haan wo box mein key kya reveal karne wali thi...vicky bhi na tabhi call karna tha...i hope race mein achchi waat laga ke Geet isse mera badla le le...cuz i cursed him 100 times for calling at dat wrong moment n not letting us know us wardrobe mein kya tha...
koi nahin i trust my piya sahi waqt pe bata hi degi...:-D
Edited by crazydevil87 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
brilliant update
con soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely n amazing part

loved this daring geet...actually it will b boring to c geet same sweet...innocent or tortured one..its really refreshing dear

maintain tht same strength in her char till end even if she change her behaviour bcoz of maans lovebut she shud b same daring n never loosing n independent in solving her own probs unlike the poor heroin waiting for her knight in shining armor always to.save damsel in distress...

even if dev turns to harm her she herself shud teach him lesson n make his life living hell..

maan shud b her strength but she shud fight for herself like now but with love by her side


i prefer tht rather than weak geet

well done dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update piya
u executed everything so perfectly
superb work
hacking wala part was just mindblowing...this daring geet is just fab
kya plan banaye or shasha ko phasa dia
and yes u were successful in whet u wanted
loved maan...so supportive so caring...
geet ko kuch farq to padha na...par as u said she will change with time...
all in all a great update
hats off piya dear

bye for now...
muaahhh
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow di awesome just awesome.mein ne tho geet ko masoom samliya(matlab innocent who gets trapped easily like show) but geet tho chalak niklI hai.i just loved her attitude..❤️

again mein aapki likhi hui convo pe fida hoon jaise har bar hoti hoon...aapne tho kamal hi kar diya hai.aisa update likhi hai jaise o sab hamare saamne ho raha hai.u selected apt pics and and and...ab kya kahu di..?jitni tareef karu kam hai..

sorry for late reply di.,actually iam busy with college,exams and all...and sorry if i wrote any mistakes in my comments becoz iam little poor in hindi.
love u di..🤗
waiting for next part very very eagerly..

-MONA😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome!
geet is way too smart!
continue soon!

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