Maaneet.. A New Beginning #3Part 57 page 73 oct 13

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Atiffa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#331

awesome

now from no where Dev came suddenly

Precap is dammm scary

Cont soon

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Hinal.94

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Posted: 13 years ago

#332

awesome part

but no something bad has happened to maan right

geet geting bad vibes n in her dream she getting married to dev

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sapna sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#333

thnx for the pm dear

awesome update

but precap is scary

hope maam is fine

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disha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#334

Wonderful update...
Waiting for next..

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Tyro

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Posted: 13 years ago

#335

what is dev doing there??

continue soon...

thnx for PM>...

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Kamalika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#336

Wonderful update Samra! Thanks for teh pm!

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love2_soma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#337

why dis precap...m confused...whts nw...

wonderful update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt update...

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Samra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#338

Originally posted by: megh_piyashi
waiting dear...

will update today

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Samra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#339

ahi everyone sorry for delay thabs this is your belated birthday gift
sorry guys i was trying to find a decent way of putting up what you are going to read now but i guess there is no other way around so i have finally decided to move on with the story...
Part 56:
geet woke up with a start. her heart was beating so fast it was as if she cdnt breath at all. she looked around for her cell phone all the while reasoning that maybe it was just cuz of her stress that she was dreaming like that. but somewhere it all felt so real . finally she got it meanwhile her family rushed in her room
geet baite tu theek to hai na tere cheekh ki awaz suni rano asked while sitting next to her on bed.
she kept on trying maan's no frantically tears streaming down her eyes.
geet baite ye kiya ker ri hai kiya hua hai
ma she choked on her tears
kia hua baite.
ma wo maan ma kuch hua hai ma maan phone nahi utha ra or wo khawab. geet managed in btw sobs.
geet tu bh na maan jungle paharo me pata nahi kaha hai phone coverage nahi hogi. tu bhi na aise hi pareshan hiri hai subah tak phone ajaega tu so ja. rano tried to comfort her
nahi ma maan.. she cdnt control anymore. geet paglo wali bat mat karo he is fine and he will call as soon as he gets coverage.
no she got up i am going to that dargah. maan beleives in it
geet tu bacho jiasi baat mat ker raat bohat hogai hai so ja tujhe aram ki zarorat hai
or maan ko mere she shouted. and as she walked her dupatta got stuck in the frame and it fell
she gasped so did others it was maan and geet's wedding picture. it hit the floor shattering into million of pieces
geet got closer picked up the picture and ran out of the room there was no stopping her now but it was only after she left that they saw blood stained foot prints.
i will go after her her brother said starting toward door
no use jane do wo kisi ki nahi sune gi rano said while wiping her tears in her heart she cd feel what geet was going through.
geet ran all the way to the dargah crying and praying for his life.
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She ran there bleeding both from her foot and her heart. she cried and cried and cried at the dargah finding peace and qualm to her raging heart and finally sank down at the stairs as the night progressed and exhaustion and desperation overwhelmed her. she was shaking head to toe weeping silently and then she saw it first. she cdnt believe it but on some instinct she got up and followed the shadow but there was nothing there.she ws standing near the wishing wall somebody gave her a thread and she walked toward the wall absentmindedly silently wishing God just give maan his life let his all desires come true let him live even if it costs me to be separated from him. let him live and she cried violently and the air blew away her thread she bent down to pick it up only to c him. she cdnt blv her eyes he was standing there looking at her he gave her her thread back she kept on standing there oogling at him too stunned to do anything when some lady realized she was in wrong seciton and took her toward the women section. she followed eyes still glued to him she was too numb to realize anything around her or to question his presence.
she looked for him everywhere and found him sitting there and then he came toward her helping her tie the thread and then vanished
she ran in a differnt direction where she thot he had gone and she was about to slip from the steep cliff when his voice called Geet bringing music to her ears. she stopped in her tracks and turned around there he was standing looking at her tenderly. he nodded and started walking toward outside she followed looking at him all the way he finally stopped at the deserted stairs and sat down geet followed too. he wiped her tears. you saved my life geet thankyou.
he smiled making geet forget her breathing. maan was all she cd utter.
geet just blv in me i have come back trust me i am not going to leave you.ever.he said with so much tenderness in his voice it ripped open her heart again. the morning light was just touching the sky now.
you love me na . he asked tear brimming in his eyes.
she nodded her own tear betrayed her by falling sown.
he wiped them again smiling i love you too. just blv me. you are my life. i will come back to get you. to be with you . dont blv what ppl tell you i will come back i love you.he said tears falling through his eyes now he made her stand up and showed her the distant horizon
look geet itne andhere k baad subah hori hai. a new beginning we will have a new beginning too. just keep my geet save for me. promise me you will keep yourself safe promise me you will wait for me. promise me. he had this urgency in his voice and geet cd do nothing more then nodding.
i will. she whispered he nodded in affirmative and smiled. he hugged her and they sat down and finally geet dozed off.
PRECAP:
he is alive.koi mere baaat sunta q nahi hai . vickey tum to blv karo mera geet was shouting now

Edited by ssch - 13 years ago