MAYUR-FF *Loved U Till My Last Breath* 2ND update

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princess-mahum

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Posted: 13 years ago

HEY EVERYONe... em new here... ITS MY FIRST TRY HOPE U'LL LIKE IT... 😊

*CHARACTER*

NUPUR: A NURSE, WHOSE WORK IS NOT ONLY PASSION FOR HER BUT ALSO THE NEED OF HER FAMILY... SHE HAS A RESPONSBILITY OF HER MOTHER N SMALL SIS IN HER SHOULDERS, BCOZ HER FATHER HAS PASSED AWAY...!

MAYANK: A PATIENT, WHO IS SUFFERING FROM *CANCER*... N HE HAS NO WISH 2 LIVE HIS LIFE... N DONT WANT 2 GET TREATED COz HE FINDS NO INTEREST IN *life* N HAS NO REASON 2 LIVE AS HE IS ALL ALONE IN THIS WORLD... nO FAMILY, NOTHING...! UNTIL NUPUR COMES IN HIS LIFE...!

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ITS A SUNNY DAY...IN HOSPITAL, EVERYONE IS BIZI IN THEIR DUTIES...! NUPUR IS ALSO BIZI IN HER DUTY N TREATING HER PATIENTS...! PASSING THROUGH THE PATIENT'S BED,SHE HEARD... THERE TWO NURSES TALKING ABOUT A YOUNG NEW PATIENT...

1ST NURSE: HAVE U SEEN THAT NEW PATIENT?

2ND NURSE: WO MAYANK SHARMA... RITE?

1ST NURSE: HAN WOHI... HE IS SUFFERING FROM CANCER... N USMAI THEEK HONE KI ZARA BHI CHAH NAI ALTHOUGH HE IS SO YOUNG... IT SOUNDS WEIRD...

2ND NURSE: YEAH... COZ HE HAS NO FAMILY... ONE OF HIS FRIEND BROUGHT HIM...

1ST NURSE: YEAH NO 1 CAN HANDLE HIM YAR... STUBBORN... :/ POOR GUY

NUPUR FELT BAD FOR HIM... N INCIDENTLY HER DUTY IS TO TAKE CARE OF HIM IN THE MORNING...! SHE GOES 2 HIM...

NUPUR: GOOD MORNING MR. SHARMA... (SHE GREETS HIM WD A BEAUTIFUL SMILE...)

HE JUST TAKES A GLANCE... N THEN AGAIN LOOKS HER... N KEEP STARING HER...

SHE FEELS AWKWARD... THEN SUDDEN RECOVERED HER ANGER N ODDNESS...

NUPUR: AHEM... ? HELLO?

( HE CAME FROM HIS IMAGINARY WORLD )

MAYANK: AP KON? (WITH POLITE ACCENT)

NUPUR: APKO MERE KAPRON SE MAI POLICE WALI LAGRE HUN...???

MAYANK: 😊

NUPUR: KHAIR, PHR BHI MAI APKO APNA INTRO DEDETI HN... EM NUPUR... I'LL TAKE CARE OF U IN MORNING... OR FILHAAL MAI ABHI APKA B.P CHECK KARNE AYEE HN...

MAYANK: HMM.. OK

WHILE CHECKING HIS BP...

NUPUR: WESE EK BAAT POOCHUN?

MAYANK: HMM

NUPUR: AP ITNA CHUP CHUP KYUN REHTE HO?

MAYANK: MAI HOSPITAL MAI AYA HUN... SHOULD I SHOUT HERE?

NUPUR: (GIGGLES) HMM WAH APKO TOH HASANA B ATA HAI...

MAYANK: PEHLI BAAR KOI ITNI IMPORTANCE DEKER PUCHRA HAI MERE CHUP REHNE KI WAJA... SO MERE LIYE NAYEEE BAAT THI...I THINK DONT NEED 2 TELL U THIS.. BUT THANKS ANYWAY...

NUPUR: HMM... KOI BAT NAI...NA BTAO... BAS AB YEH MEDICINES LELO...

MAYANK: MEDICINES...??? I'LL RATHER PREFER 2 DIE... BUT MEDICINES...? NO WAY...

NUPUR: MEDICINES KA KIA HAI... THEEK HOJAOGE TOH NAI LENI PAREGI... OR AGAR THEEK NAI HUE TOH...

MAYANK: TOH MAR JAUNGA...RITE? I KNOW MUJHE CANCER HAI N I DONT EVEN CARE ABOUT IT...

NUPUR: BUT TMAARI FAMILY KO TOH ZAROOR CARE HOGI NA TMAARI.. SO PLZ UN K LIYE KHAA LO...(SHE WAS TRYING TO FORCE HIM COZ IF SHE HAD FAILED TO TREAT HER PATIENT NICELY, HER DR. WUD MUST HVE SCOLDED HER...SHE WAS FORCING HIM FOR THE SAKE OF HER DUTY)

MAYANK: MERI KOI FAMILY NAI HAI... N AGAR KAHIN HOGI BHI TOH I HATE THEM... NO THERE IS NO BODY 2 CARE ABOUT ME... GOT IT?

NUPUR: I DO CARE ABOUT U...

MAYANK: (LOOKING AT HER FACE SERIOUSLY)

NUPUR: I MEANT U R MY PATIENT... I DO CARE ABOUT U, ABOUT UR HEALTH... PLZ TAKE IT FOR MY SAKE... MERE LIYE... PLZ... (WITH INNOCENT FACE)

(HE WAS JUST LOOKING AT HER INNOCENT N BEAUTIFUL FACE, HOW MUCH ANGELIC PRESENCE SHE HAS... N SHE IS FORCING HIM... LIKE, HE GETS WINGS.. THERE IS SOMEONE WHO CARES ABOUT HIM...)

MAYANK: TMAARE LIYE...?

NUPUR: HAAN MERE LIYE... PLEEESHH 😊

MAYANK: 😊 LAO... KONSI KHANI HAI,.,,,?

NUPUR: HMM YEH LIJIYE...

NOW SOJAO... TAKE CARE...

MAYANK: TM KAHAN JARHI HO? (WITH SAD FACE)

NUPUR: UMMM... MUJHE BAAQI PATIENTS KO B TOH DEKHNA HAINA...

MAYANK: PAR... AGAR MUJHE KUCH CHAHIYE HO TOH...(HE JUST DONT WANT 2 LET HER GO)

NUPUR: AREY BABA,... MAI KOI AKELI NURSE NAI HUN YAHAN KAAFI SAARI HAIN... PHR B AGAR MUJHE BULAANA HO YA MUJHSE KOI KAAM HO TOH KISI OR NURSE KO B KEHDENA K NUPUR KO BULA DEN I'LL COME 😊

MAYANK: HMM... THEEK HAI...

HE WAKES UP IN AFTERNOON... SEARCHING THAT ANGEL WHO HAS COME IN HIS LIFE AS A NURSE...!

BUT COULDN'T FIND HER...INSTEAD OF HER, HE SAW ANOTHER NURSE BESIDES HIM...

NURSE: YEH LIJIYE.. APKI MEDICINE...

MAYANK: WO KAHAN HAIN?

NURSE: KON?

MAYANK: NUPUR...

NURSE: WO TOH GHAR JA CHUKI... WO MORNING SHIFT MAI HOTI HAIN... YEH AP MEDICINE LIJIYE...

MAYANK: NAI... I DON NEED... EM OK

NURSE: APKO LENI PAREGI...

MAYANK: MAINE KAHA NA EM FINE...

NURSE: DEKHIYE...ITS MY DUTY... TAKE IT...

MAYANK: NUPUR KO BULAYEE... WO MUJHE KHILAYEGI,,,,

OTHERWISE NO... N DATS FINAL...!

PRECAP:

MAYANK: TMHE PATA HAI TM MERI CARE KARTI HO TOH MUJHE BHT ACHA LAGTA HAI... TM MUJHE MEDICINE KHILAOGI TOH HI KAHUNGA... WARNA...

NUPUR: WARNA...?

MAYANK: WARNA AISE HI HAR NURSE KO TANG KARTA RHUNGA... 😉

here is the 1st update... will continue soom :)

needs ur feedback 😊

Edited by princess-mahum - 13 years ago

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Ritu

@cuteritz

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome start
felt bad 4 mayank
anyways cont soon !!! 👏

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

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Posted: 13 years ago

very nice cs ... very nice start.

i know, this ff is going to sad ending ...bt its ok.

m relly like ur writing.

i like mayur a lot.

plz update soon.

plz add me in ur pm list.

Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 13 years ago

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princess-mahum

@princess-mahum

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteritz
awesome start
felt bad 4 mayank
anyways cont soon !!! 👏

thank u... ws just a lil try😊,..wil cont soon 😊

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princess-mahum

@princess-mahum

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur
very nice cs ... very nice start.
i know, this ff is going to sad ending ...bt its ok.
m relly like ur writing.
i like mayur a lot.
plz update soon.
plz add me in ur pm list.

thankuuu 😊 i'll surely add u 😊

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ragini sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice concept but please pm me when you update.

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princess-mahum

@princess-mahum

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Posted: 13 years ago

2nd update:

MAyANK IS NT AGREED 2 TAKE MEDICINES FRM SOME OTHER NURSE...

HE DOESN'T EVEN WANT 2

BE FINE... N GET TREATED...! HE HAD NO REASON 2 LIVE... HE JUST GOT

SOME REASON 2 LIVE, 2 BE FINE FOR SOME1

WHO REALLy CARES FOR HIM... DAT ONE CONVERSATION WAS DIFFERENT

FROM OTHERS, DAT FACE, DAT WAy OF TALKING,

THAT SIMPLICITy, DAT INNOCENCE, DAT ADORABLE VOICE... HUH... JUST OUT

OF HIS IMAGINATIONS... IT WS LIKE, LIFE JUST COME 2 HIM

N ASK HIM 2 BE FINE FOR HER...! HE HAS NOT BEEN TREATED SO MUCH NICELy

BEFORE... HE ALTHOUGH DINT GET MUCH CHANCE 2 HVE A CONVERSATION WD HER. DON

EVEN KNOWS HER VERy MUCH... BUT

yEAH..HE IS STARTED 2 IMAGINE HIS LIFE WITH HER... WHO REALLy CARES FOR HIM... WHO

REALIZED HIM DAT HE EXISTS IN THIS SELFISH WORLD...!!!

ANyWAyS... HE DINT TAKE MEDICINE...! MANy DR. CAME N FORCED HIM BUT ALL IN VEIN...

NEXT DAy, IN THE MORNING... NUPUR COMES IN HOSPITAL... HER FELLOW NURSE TELL HER ABOUT

MAyANK DAT HE WAS SEARCHING U N DINT TAKE MED. COZ OF U...

nupur goes 2 him:

NUPUR: GOOD MORNING MR. SHARMA... 😊

MAyANK'S SAD N SERIOUS FACE STARTS GLOWING... N THERE IS A BRIGHTNESS COMES IN HIS EyES...!

BUT DINT REPLy,...

NUPUR: MAyANK... ? KIA HUA? TAByAT THEEK HAI?

MAyANK: :) HAN AB TOH THEEK HI HAI...

NUPUR: KIUN AB KIA HGAyA HAI?

MAyANK: HMMM...NOTHING...( WHILE LOOKING DOWN)

NUPUR: U KNOW AJ TAK AISE PATIENT SE KABHI PAALA NAI PARHA 😆

MAyANK: KIA MATLAB? (TAKING HER JOKE SERIOUSLy) TM BHI TANG AARHI HO MUJHSE? HMM ITS NOT SMTHNG

WHICH IS NEW FOR ME...SAB HI AJATE HAIN EK OR SAHI...

NUPUR: AREy... TM AISE KIUN BEHAVE KARHE HO... WELL EM JUST A NURSE HERE... N TM MUJHE KUCH ZyADA IMPORTANCE

NAI DERHE...?

MAyANK: AISA KIS NE KAHA K MAI TMHE IMPORTANCE DERHA HN... (HE SAID THIS 2 MAINTAIN HIS ATTITUDE)

NUPUR: I KNOW... TMNE MEDICINE NAI KHAyEE THI,... COZ...

MAyANK: COZ...??? (THERE WAS A LIL SMILE IN MAyANK'S FACE)

NUPUR: COZ... MAINE NAI KHILAyEE THI...

MAyANK: :) AHEM... LOGON KI KHUSH FEHMIyAAN... 😃

NUPUR: AWWW... (WID FAKE SADNESS, BUT WID CUTE N INNOCENT FACE) KIA MATLAB KHUSH FEHMI?

MAyANK:MATLAB... MAINE AISE HI NAI KHAEE... MUJHE TOH PASAND HI NAI HAI MEDICINE... DATS y... (WD NAUGHTy FACE, TRyNG

TO TEASE HER)

(SHE CAME 2 KNOW DAT HE WAS JUS TRyNG TO TEASE HER, SHE ALSO STARTS TEASING HIM)

NUPUR: FINE..! TOH MAI CHALI JAATI HN...

KISI OR NURSE KO BHEJDUNGI... TAKE CARE MR. SHARMA

MAyANK: (GETS SERIOUS N THE HAPPINESS OF HIS FACE SUDDENLy GONE) NAI..PLZ... MAI TOH MAZAK KARHA THA... EM SORRy

MUJHE TOH MAZAAK B NAI KARNA AATA... KABHI KISI SE AISE MAZAAAK HI NAI KIA... EM REALLy SORRIE ABHI TM CHALI JAATI

COZ OF My STUPIDITy N MAI BAS KHUD KO CURSE HI KARTA REHTA... KAHAN DHUNDTA TMHE PURE HOSPITAL MAI... EM SORRy

PLZ DONT GO...

(SHE DINT EXPECT SUCH WORDS FROM HIM, SHE WAS JUS KIDDING, N HE WAS TOO... SHE WSN'T EXPECTING DAT

HE GOT SO MUCH SERIOUS By HER WORDS)

NUPUR: MAyANK...MAyANK...MAyANK... CALM DOWN... I WAS JUST KIDDING NA... TM AISE KIUN BEHAVE KARNE LAG GAE...

(MAyANK OVERCOMES HIS EMOTIONS...N REALIZED, WHT HE HAS SAID... BUT GIVES HER NO REPLy)

NUPUR: KHER... MAI yEHIN HN... AISE NAI KARO BATEIN... yEH MEDICINES KHAOGEy yAAA... USI NURSE KO BULAUN? 😆

MAyANK: HAN KHAUNGA NA... TM KHILAOGI TOH... (WD A CUTE SMILE)

(WHILE TAKING MEDICINES)

MAYANK: TMHE PATA HAI TM MERI CARE KARTI HO TOH MUJHE BHT ACHA LAGTA HAI... TM MUJHE MEDICINE KHILAOGI TOH HI KAHUNGA... WARNA...

NUPUR: WARNA...?

MAYANK: WARNA AISE HI HAR NURSE KO TANG KARTA RHUNGA... 😉

NUPUR: AWWW... GANDAy BACHAyyy (WD CUTE FACE)

(A HUGE SMILE COMES IN HIS FACE)

MAyANK: HAIN...KIA BOLA MUJHE...??? (JUST WANTED 2 HEAR DAT AGAIN, HE FINDS DAT SO ADORABLE)

NUPUR: MAINE KUCH NAIII BOLA... TM SOJAO AB

MAyANK: NAI... NAI... PEHLE DOBARA BOLO WESA... (IN A CHILDISH TONE)

NUPUR: HAHAHA... U R CUTE 😊 AB SHO JAO PLEEESSHHH...

HE SMILES... (N THINKING DAT HOW CAN SOMEONE ADORES HIM SO MUCH... NO ONE EVER TALKED 2 HIM LIKE THIS)

AAHHH HOW BEAUTIFUL LIFE IS THIS... COLOURFUL... (HE WAS THINKNG) HE DOESNT EVEN NOTICE DAT NUPUR HAS GONE

FRM HIS BED... BUT STILL SHE WAS THERE IN HIS MIND... HE CUDN'T SLEEP... BUT KEEP ON THNKING ABOUT HER, HE WS WAITING WHEN SHE I'LL

CME BACK... DATS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL TIME WHEN SHE COMES BUT ITS JUST TOO MUCH LIL... )

COZ SHE HAS 2 LOOKAFTER MANy OTHER PATIENTS TOO... HE DOESN'T WANT HER 2 LOOKAFTER SOMEONE ELSE..)

MAyANK 2 HIMSELF: I WISH... WO HAMESHA MERE PAAS BETHKER MUJHSE BATEIN KARTI RAHE, MERI CARE KARE... KITNI ACHI

LIFE HOGAI HAI MERI... MAINE KABHI USE AISA JIA HI NAI BACHPAN SE AAJ TK BAS AKELA THA.. IS DUNIA MAI MERA KOI WAJOOD

HI NAI THA...AHH EM IN LOVE !!! IN LOVE WID THAT ANGEL...!!!

Kuch Khushbuyen
Yaadon Ke Jungal Se Beh Chali
Kuch Khidkiyan
Lamhon Ke Dastak Pe Khul Gayi
Kuch Geeth Purane Rakhe The Sirhaane
Kuch Sur Kahin Khoye The Bandish Mil Gaye

Jeene Ke Ishare Mil Gaye
Bichde The Kinare Mil Gaye

Meri Zindagi Main Teri Baarish Kya Hui
Mere Raste Darya Bane Behne Lage
Meri Karvaton Ko Tune Aake Kya Chhua
Kahin Khwab Neendon Ki Gali Rehne Lage

Jeene Ke...Kinare Mil Gaye

Meri Loh Havaaon Se Jhagadkar Lee Uthi
Mere Har Andhere Ko Ujale Pee Gaye
Tune Hasken Mujhse Muskurane Ko Kaha
Mere Man Ke Mausam Gulmohar Se Ho Gaye

Jeene Ke...Kinare Mil GayeWILL CONTINUE SOON :)