Dhunki: A Magical Love Spell --AR-- *Part 5 update

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Posted: 13 years ago
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My Second FF...Yaay! 😆
This one is going to be a bit different.It's not going to be like a boy and a girl see each other and fall in lovee...Nope, not gonna happen 😉 So just read to find out what really happens👍🏼

Character Sketch 😃
Armaan - H:O:T...Armaan is the Hottest guy in this world, and he is quite a sweet heart! He loves his friends and hates hurting people. Hes Romantic, dashing, pretty much a guy in every girl's dream
Payal - Shes a sweet and simple girl, she was born in an abusive family, therefore she is very sensitive. One of the most important people in her life is Riddhima, her best friend and the other important person, you will find out soon
Riddhima - A girl with a big dream. Shes as dainty as a flower and cant hurt a fly.She has a bubbly personality and is very down to earth, she loves Payal a lot, and the other important person in her life, you will find that out soon as well 😆
Jai - He has a short temper, and is possesive. But he has a clean heart and is loving and sweet. He hates it when people are upset due to him.
4 me this is Payal:

Amrita Rao is my payal 😉 😆 But of course you can picture whoever you want 😉
And For me heres Jai 😃

Our Shahid kapoor 😆

Index :
Part 1 - Page 2
Part 2 - Page 3
Part 3 & 4 - Page 4
Part 5 - Page 5
Edited by x..Love_Rani..x - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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for jai u can use shahid if u want...amrita n shahid make a great couple if u r putting their love story in the future...just suggestion
but i love the characters
Start soon
thanxx for the pm n keep sending me the pm...thanxxx =D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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HEY SOUNDS REALLY INTERESTING PLEASE
PM ONCE U UPDATE =]
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hiii
Congrats on da new ff
Love da cs
Can't wait 4 da update
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: niki4life

for jai u can use shahid if u want...amrita n shahid make a great couple if u r putting their love story in the future...just suggestion
but i love the characters
Start soon
thanxx for the pm n keep sending me the pm...thanxxx =D


OMG...Brilliant Idea!
How did i not think of that? 😆
Thnxx for ur suggestion 😃
and thank you ❤️
Np and yes 4 sure 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Hiii
Congrats on da new ff
Love da cs
Can't wait 4 da update
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm


Awwhh thank you🤗
Yes 4 sure😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice character sketch!!!!!!!
please continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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seems interesting...

nice concept..

do pm me when u update,...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 1

Riddhima and Payal decided to hang out for a while after school has ended, they want to their school's soccor field and sat in the grass

Payal - God I'm so happy, I can't wait to see my Jaan

Riddhima - Me too! I'm soo excited, to meet Jiju ji (nudges Payal)

Payal - Aur mera Jiju kab araha hai?

Ridz - Woh bhi kal araha hai, Finally

Payal - What? Tumne bataya nahin

Ridz laughs - Sorry, Woh kal aayega, for the dance, so i guess hum dono aapne jiju saath saath dekhenge (winks)

Payal - Ab toh mein aur bhi khuush hoon! By the way, tum kal kya pehnogi Ridz?

Ridz - A Simple white dress



Payal - Good Choice, White tum per bohot suit karta hai

ridz - Thanks, Aur tum?

Payal - Mera bhi simple, per red



Ridz - Wow awesome, apna camera mat bhoolna

Payal - Fikar mat karo, mein apne joote ghar bhoool jaongi, per camera kabhi nahin bhoolongi

Riddhima and Payal continue their exciment in the car, whil payal drives Riddhima home, due to Riddhima's mom being out of town for a while.

When Riddhima gets home she takes out her white dress and stares at it.

It was full white with black straps, and a bit of black at the waist

Ridz - Im sure he will love it


NEXT DAY

Riddhima goes to her english class and sits next to Payal

Ridz - Research paper kiya?

Payal - Haan

Mrs. Kirti - Students please apne research papers mujhe lake de

Payal takes hers out of the folder and turns it in, while Ridz looks for it

Payal - Kya hua? You didn't do it?

Ridz - Kiya toh hai, per mil nahin raha

Ridz gets worried and looks harder and harder, flips through all her notebooks and files

Mrs. Kirti - Riddhima, kya hua? aapka paper kahaan hai

Riddhima stands up - Ma'am mujhe mil nahin raha

Mrs. Kirti - Not my problem, agar 10 minute mein nahin mile toh aapko 0 milenge as a test grade

Ridhima - Yes Ma'am (sits down)

Riddhima keeps looking, and Payal helps her find it 5 minutes later Riddhima finally finds it

Ridz - YES MIL GAYA!!

The whole class stares at her, as riddhima realizes she was yelling

Riddhima - Sorry, Ma'am paper mil gaya *goes and turns it in*

Payal - Kya karti ho Ridz?

Ridz -Sorry, dehan nahin raha

After Classes Payal goes to Riddhimas house, she brought her red dress and make up plus jewelry, Riddhima and Payal decide to Dress up and arrive together for Prom night

Payals dress was a Vinatage red Halter dress, it's simplicity made it beautiful

Riddhima puts in some curls, while Payal straightens them and puts them up like this -


Riddhima applies her make up on her eyes like this :


While Payal does hers like this :



Payal - You look absolutely Gorgeous

Ridz - And You look absolutely Stunning

Riddhima takes a deep breath

*Finally going to meet him*(guys every time i put a sentance between ** it means its a thought ;))

Payal - Okay Ready babe?

Ridz - Lets Go!


Hey Guyz
I know, this part isn't so great, but i promise this FF will get better
i wanted too keep the shocking part for the next part thats why this part isn't so great, and short
but next part will be long and interesting 😉
Hope you understand
😳

Edited by dreamguyarmaan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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mwaaahh ii love youu soo mucchh. youu got KaJen & ShaMrita. myy 2 favee couple evaaa <3 hayyyeee. imm lovinn this alreaaddyyy. by readinn your intoo ii wass like damnnn bina story ii alreadyy love it. hehehe. awesommee part. cannt waiit for the next part. alsoo ii love the banner <3 update supeer soonn with aa loonnng part.

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