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baisakh45

@baisakh45

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#641

yaaayyy geet is trying to learn brail language.plzzz keep pari.i know she'll be cupid for them.anyways awesome update.it's getting interesting day by day.plzzz update more plzzz as diwali gift :P

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Sumaiyah

@summikhan

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#642

This story is realllyyy amazinggg!!!!!!!!!! BUUTTT... as a critical and loyal reader... i just want to say that this story is very slow... idk if it's on purpose or what... but i don't like the way geet treats maan... and i want maan to take the first step... make geet fall in love with him... without doing it intentionally

PLEASE CONTINUE SOON!!

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gunjar

@gunjar

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#643

Loved the update...

Geet totally in dilemma...

continue soon...

waiting for ur next update...:)

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Hima

@Ramhari

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#644

Nice part
The title poster is beautiful.
Unknowingly Geet is slowly accepting the relation.
She is like a typical possessive wife not able to bear another woman's presence around.
Now she is bent upon getting to know how Pari and maan are communicating so well.
May be thats why the brail classes.
Probably after the classes she may come to know that blind people are also humans.
Her claim at the end was ultimate
Even Maan was shocked at the way she just accepted the relation claiming herself to be his wife.
Wonder what will happen further
Continue soon

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sumusumu

@sumusumu

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#645

awww MRS MSK in brail school ...

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FireSafireFire (Marvelousfire)

@FireSafireFiree

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#646

Originally posted by: summikhan
This story is realllyyy amazinggg!!!!!!!!!! BUUTTT... as a critical and loyal reader... i just want to say that this story is very slow... idk if it's on purpose or what... but i don't like the way geet treats maan... and i want maan to take the first step... make geet fall in love with him... without doing it intentionally

PLEASE CONTINUE SOON!!

thats because its only been 2 weeks.. unless you expect a girl to completly forget what she have been through within few weeks... which is most unlikely in real life...😕

and its a slow ff... ><

and thanks for the lovely coment😊