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Posted: 13 years ago
muahhh...loved the update...
poor geet she herself is so confused .she is falling for him unknowingly...
n even Maan is now loving her being around...
so sweet of vicky to make her mingle wid family
i love this Maan how he cares for her n paid for her trip
me waiting to know Geet,s reaction
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely part
awesome waiting for next part
Zohamaaneet thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesoem dear
loved it
continue soon
thanx for update
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update...
loved it
m dying 2 read more...
update sooonnn...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome ff...loved the concept...waiting waiting plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mahsoos.. part 22



Geet couldn't believe her self. How did he know that she her self have completely forgot. Oh she cursed him. Blind my foot. He so can see!

Geet annoyingly waited impatiently outside of the parking lot. Her eyes gazed the black limo, entering through the long dark gate, she steps in without a word, observing maan. He had black sun glasses on, facing outside and god knows where. She twisted her lips, there was so many question she wanted to ask.
"umm..."
"do..." maan was about to open his mouth when geet snaps, "SHUT UP!"... "don't you dare ask me do you need anything, like I only show up in front of you when I need something!" she made a face. Frustrated.
Maan kept quit. He was very shocked, only reason other comes to when when he needs something, not when yet want to... Like anny playing piano, vicky for something, dev to talk about business, mom with worries! Then what els he suppose to expect!
"you are so annoying." she holds her hand, tight in a fist digging her nail in the palm, gently and then snaps to walk out. Flowed by maan with confusion. Geet quickly touches avantikas feet, then walks up. Maan gives a gentle kiss to his mother then Flows his wife.

"what happen? Was collage alright?" he locks the door and geet turns around from the cupboard... Twisting her lips to think what to say! He have changes his question and actually maan have asked her something!
"umm.. Au... Did you pay for the trip?" maan nodes, leaving to his room, while geet flowed with a towel.
"ku?"
"don't you want to go? Didn't you come to me yesterday to talk about this?"
Geet twisted her legs, thinking how did he know. "nahi!"
"don't you want to go?"
"I do! But I didn't want... Umm..."
Maan wasn't sure what she was trying to say. Or what she wanted to, he made an appointment in the bank. "get ready, we have appointment!"

Geet didn't listen, she just nodes her head, lost in her thought. He alwYs leaves her in confusion in everything.

As they arrived at the bank, 3 people formally greeted them. Painterly waiting. It's been long he have cane here, Usually they will come home, but that's because he don't visit outside shopping world. For geet, it's good that every member knows her by face, she is new family member of the khurana.

Geet just observed as they went through list of contracts, she signed after maan, before she was confused then realised what was maan up to... "umm..."
"you don't have to use your mother and father card any more. This is our cards." he hands her 4 different cards, 3 gold plated while 1 silver. "they are royal family cards!"
He was talking like he knew what are the coulees. Only geet can see his hand, how he was feeling reach to tell her what was what... But she wanted to earn money, not use her husband money.

Once they steeped out, geet securely places the cards in her purse, she was hesitating to say she want to do jobs, just incase the family reaction. Geet surprisingly looked at her self then outside, when did she start to worry about other member of the family, or him. She ignored the whole thought then looked back at maan.
"thank you..."
"this is our money, you don't have to say thank you..." a small smile formed on her cheek, something she her self couldn't explain. Her eyes again gazed upon maan, observing him carefully, then looked down with sighness... Then up.
"umm.. Au... Trip, I have to leave next week, will mama mind? I mean it's for a week!"
"she shouldn't do! And you can go where ever you feel like. No one will mind." another smile formed in geets cheek. This is the first time she will go somewhere by her self, Usually her family would never let her go anywhere by her self. They simply did not trust her.

They ate dinner in silent, geet playing thinking about everything that have happen to her today then looked at maan, he was reading a book while eating. She didn't like it. How his one hand gliding on the the book while another feeding him self. And Brail, oh that's bothering her big time, how little dots can be so meaning full to him and a simply dot to her.

Pari walks in, she just looked at the book once and she knew what it is, "owo maan, that's one of my favourite book to."
Geet pulled a face, when sir went to maan?"
"thanks!"
Geet looked at maan in shock. He can say other words then "do you need anything to!"
"I read it over 4 times, but still coulnt get enough."
"I like the music... " maan suggested.
"the oprah is mind-blowing with so much pain." pari sat down, looking at maan with delight.
Geet pulled another face, ... Just beside he is blind that's not mean you just look at him all the time! Specially when his wife sitting down just right at the opposite!.." she mumbled to her self, hating how they had so much to talk and she dint. Even a conversation will start either of them will put end to it.

Maan on the other hand could hear how his wife was talking anger out in to the poor spoon, not that he understood why exactly maybe it's because of pari inter-fearing with there silent dinner.
"I am finished." geet gave out a big smile, and the spoon noise instantly stopped. Maan shakes his head with a small smile. He walked off, while geet told the servant to clear the plates... She ran after maan and locked there bedroom door in hurry...



no colour code and lots of mistake.. little bit in hurry :(

part 21


part 23


Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesoem u rock with ur update
cant resist for next update
continue soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it dear
ossum part
really
so she is falling for him
hope we can see her learn the braile dear
and that too her own pls dear
make her to do that dear
plzzz
i just loved it to see in the ff dear
pls dear
a humble request
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg geet is so possessive abt maan nw tht she instantly locked d door of their room
helll if this continues
i wonder hw many times geet will call whn she is at the trip for d whole week
just 2 keep maan away frm pari
heheheee🤣

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