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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Keyama...thanks 4 d apm for parts 14-19! read part 14 n 15 n already commented! Just read part 16-19 nw.Superb updates! Maanet 's realationship progressing, feeling for Maan! Geet cooking 4 Maan! Update soon n pm wen u do!
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today is Sunday.. No chance of update...keym u have to study complete one weeks reports:-)
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Mahsoos PART 20




She called out all the name, one by one, meantime maan quickly changed and freshen up, wondering where was she! The whole haveli was empty... He slowly walked down after about an hour smelling the pasta! Odd! His mom always cooked India, as most people preferred... He slowly steps down, folding the sleeve up his long strong bicep.. He already presumed geet probably have left as she have collage...
"mom!" maan calls out, two of the chef instantly ran out, rather petrified... While another helping geet...

"oh mam cooking!"
"yes I know!"
"no.. She cooked lots!"
"I know she always does!"
"no sir... " they fumbled, rather scared as how geet prepared 7 different types of pasta with sides.
Geet ran out with tray full of different flavored pasta while other chef with side...
"sorry! Sorry... Sorry..." she mumbled with the tray...


Maan shockingly faced towards the voice direction. That was geet! What she is doing in the kitchen!
"geet?"
"sorry, I took some extra time. Actually I wasn't sure which flavor you like!" she made a baby face, the dress covered with mess...
"but why did you make lunch? What happen to the chef?"
"I wanted to make it!"
She made a face, putting all different type of dish on the table, then pulled him to sit down. "ok! Umm... Try this... She licked her lips with the smell while maan confusingly still faced at his wife...
"no eat this!"

She takes another plate... Putting the fork on the side... He took a spoonful and quickly tastes it...
"how is it?" he couldn't even taste the food when her supper questions arrives... And rather very, extremely surprised with her twist personality. Whole day, she just have been little to understanding...
"now?"
"let me taste it geet!"
Obviously he will say nice, even if it's one of the wars flavor of the month! But his hungry tummy was more then happy to got some food and it oddly tasted amazing... He took another spoon..

Geet was about to open her mouth again when maan rests his index finger on her soft lips, there were mere inch apart, geet gazing upon him while he looked, god knows where, only black...
"this is good..." he replied.
Geet backed way from his index finger, blinked several time to get her self back to the reality, it was enough guilt how she is behaving and now even careless...
It took her few second to gather her self and grave another flavor. Maan was rather enjoying that flavor before she shoves In another plate... He made a face and ate silently...
"how is that?"
He was about to be sick with so many different flavor, it was getting rid of his taste buds!
"I think I had enough!"
"NO!" she snaps, quickly grabbed the desert, she became over exited with the cooking, and worried how hungry he may be. Maan could clearly mahsoos that, but she really have to control the over excitement...
"geet.."
She panicked trying to bring everything for him...
"Geet"
"how about this..."
He couldn't take it anymore and held her hand and with a small pull she lands on his lap...
"why you behaving like this?"
He questioned, while his stone face looked way from her face.
"you did not eat anything last night, I don't want to feel guilty!"
"I don't want you to feel guilty. I did not eat because I didn't want to."

He helped her up to stand, while geet looked down. Her heart skipped more beats, feeling shame sitting on his lap at the first place.

Geet had no regret of helping him to eat, she didn't want anyone to be hungry for her nor his hunger mattered but she felt guilty, very guilty...
"umm..."
"I don't want you to do anything with guilt... Nothing!"

He claimed, "get ready, I will drop you to collage." one thing maan hated the most was sympathy, no one should symptomatic him. He is a capable man, capable of doing anything. Maans ear could gather the payel as she quietly walked behind him. He could also feel how upset she may be, how low she must be feeling but it was necessary.
She thought it's better not to talk, better not to bother him but...

Maan stops the limo, they were 20 minute late. It didn't matter to geet but maan cared. He instructed one of his guard to walk in and explain. Geet silently walked off.

Maans unconscious brain, covered with some unknown becainey. Her every abnormal reaction couldn't get any more confusing. He walks in to the room, quietly sitting down on a arm chair, facing up in to the darkness, unable to clearly think through for geet. He worried about her but there is always a unexplained attraction between them...

Maan slowly stands up and walks towards his study desk, trying to distracts his mind way, trying to ignore his own little pleat that constantly hunting him. He opens one of the book, slowly gliding his hand yet the brain recalled nothing.

Pari knocks, who suppose to analyze maan, "may I come in maan"
Maan sits up, facing towards the door, "yes you may..."
She walked in with a smile, pepping on maans file while he observed.
"may I read some maan?"
"yes sure."

She took her sit on the opposite, closing her eyes, gliding her hand over Brail like maan. "may I ask you some question?"
"yes!"
"it's for my file!"
"yes go on!"
"do you have any trouble like,... as you cant see, what's different between your life and your wife?"

Maan always had answers, but for the first time he couldn't analyze whats different between him and his wife. Perhaps there wedding only 2 weeks old, which surly is not enough time to know anyone.
"umm..."
"like the way she sees the world compare to you sir.."
Maan again became quit, unable to put his words in to a sentence, actually did he have any at all... Maan nodes slightly for a no... While pari moves to another set of question...

Maan didn't make his way to pick geet up, while she again waited. Driver came and picked her up while she hide her beautiful face in guilt. Somewhere thanking he didn't show up.

As she arrived home,
Found pari sitting opposite with close eyes analyzing files. Her eyes looked here and there, surprised. "ummm..." she wondered what pari was doing! Reading maans file! That can't be right! Who would bother reading Brail language..
"hello mam!" she instantly stands up, leaving the book to the side!
"you read his language?" she did not mean to ask such a question, or in a way that sounded oddly rude. It was her surprise that a normal person would take the pain to learn blind language.
"sorry?" pari founded her language rather offensive.
"I mean that.."
"it's Brail mam."
Maan stands up. He surly didn't want a third person know about him and his wife details.
"she does not know pari. I think you should leave!"
Pari uncomfortably smiled and walked out. Maan faces feet then also walks off, and goes back to his study, leaving geet there all standing. She hated how he thought she is not worthy enough to learn anything about her blind husband.

Geet went back in to her room, quickly changed and showered, quietly without a single noise came back and sat in front of him. Thinking he have not noticed... Then carefully without making a single noise she picked one of his folder and open it. She observed maan, specially how he slides his hand over so quickly. She did the same, only thing she felt was dots! Nothing els. She did it again, couldn't find single difference from one dot to another. One line with few then many! Geet managed to slide through one line while maan in super speed with so many! She made a face. Murmuring "show off!"
"umm..."
Geet widens her eyes, thing oops he knew again she was here all along.
"do you need anything?"



geet nodes a no with confusion, she wanted to ask something but she also equally scared. "I..."


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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 13 years ago

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