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Posted: 13 years ago
it must be maan only..
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was cute...
waiting for next one😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updt
lovely
awww their bonding is so cute
geet is so lucky to hv such bros n too naive to think gud of maan always
so its maan
cont soon
thnx for d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: simm28

naima thank so 4 this

update.look like ur
lapy is good to go now.
awesome update .geet
& her brothers just one
word so šŸ˜Ž hope maan
will tell her why he did
that. now one thing
want to ask u as u
know geet is ending
news. hope u still
update.today i ask
this ? to everyone
so please tell me u
not gonna stop. naima
did u have face book
account ad me their
my name is simran
bains & dp is 2 kids
kissing them.

heyy Simran 😊 Thank you for liking my FF so much 😃 No i will not end it abhi tou start hai šŸ˜‰ asure i'll add you on facebook 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
THANK YOU FOR THE COMMENTS .. here's the next part ..
PART 20

She opened the door and was shocked to see the person standing infront of her was none other than MAAN .. As soon as her eyes fell on him she inched back in fear as if he would again hit her .. and man handle her .. Tears flew from her eyes as she almost jumped back in fear while maan closed his eyes in pain and regret …

Throughout the day at KC maan couldn't concentrate .. his concentration was getting divided either by peeping into geet's cabin again and again or wondering what she must be doing ?? she didn't know why but he wanted to see her .. hold her .. hug her .. check if she was alright .. if her wrist was fine .. he wanted to ask her if it pained her now ?? he wanted to apologize for his behavior .. He was pacing in his cabin restlessly .. thinking of ways To ask forgiveness .. house.. yes that's what he has to do … the first thing he will do is go to her house .. no I should call her .. but what if she doesn't like it … no no I'll go to handa mansion and see her .. after a lot of debating between his mind and heart he choose to listen to his heart and go to handa house only to see her opening the door .. a smile crept his lips but that vanished when he saw her jumping back in fear .. Oh how much he hated himself .. What had he done ?? She fears him ! how on earth will he try to bring everything back to normal ?? if only time could reverse and he could rectify his mistake but alas that is not possible .. He observed her expressions turning from shock to fear and then tears .. How much he hated these tears .. He raised his hand to wipe those tears away that use to haunt him .. that were not meant to be in those hazel almond eyes but only to be shocked ..

Geet was shocked to see maan there .. She immediately inched back in fear thinking he had come to accuse more .. she didn't want to see him after all he had done then why is he here ?? was there something left which was to be said by him that he is here to complete that she thought .. Then she felt him raising his hand .. she immediately jumped back and shouted ..

Nahi nahi .. maine kuch nahi kiya .. I am sorry .. I will never come tho your house .. never.. I didn't do anything .. I didn't know that was your house sachii .. promise .. please .. I will leave the office if you want but please don't hurt me ..

Maan was shocked oh my what had he done .. he wanted to wipe her tears and here she thought he will hurt her again ..

Geet .. he tried to say ..

Nahi nahi ..

Geet meri baat sunooo ..

Nahi .. she kept on chanting and crying not ready to listen to anything fearing he might accuse her of something new ..

She tried to run and was about to trip on the vase and fall when she heard maan yell her name and the next minute she was in his arms ..

Geet he yelled and ran to save her.. he hugged her crushing her in his embrace .. tightening his arms around her delicate waste each passing second.. Fearing that's he might leave him if he leaves her .. Assuring himself yes she was here .. in front of him safe and sound .. He couldn't let her get hurt anymore .. he wanted to keep hugging her and not leaving .. After which was like ages when his rapid heart beat was normal .. when he calmed a bit .. but he still couldn't let her go .. The fear of loosing her was too intense for him than to fell any other emotion .. Right now all mattered was that she was safe .. he then realized that she had not responded back ..

As soon as maan hugged her she had no idea what to do .. She had stiffened herself in his embrace .. a part of her wanted to hug him back but then a very large part of it said no he will think you are taking advantage of him .. in this fight the only reaction he body gave was that it got stiff .. The more his arms would tighten the more stiff she became ..

Finally when the hug broke he looked at her eyes only to find them cold .. No emotion was there except a tinge of fear and that was the last thing he wanted her to have .. he didn't want fear in her eyes .. Her eyes were meant to have twinkle not fear or tears they were just not meant for her ..

Geet please listen to me ..

No sir . .. I have already listened to you enough .. Now please if you could excuse me I need to go and don't worry I am not like you who would yell at anyone who comes to their house .. I have been taught that guests are a blessing .. so … Rajesh she yelled at the servant .. maan sahib ko juice aur snacks la kar do ..

Maan stood there gaping at her .. he had never seen geet talk to him so coldly .. yes he had done a mistake by saying all that to her .. he had done a mistake by letting his ego take it's toll … he had done a mistake by jumping to conclusions without finding or knowing the actually truth but then this hurt geet so much he couldn't imagine .. He was about to leave when his eyes fell on her hand ..

Geet your hand he said ..

Geet turned and looked at her hand which was now bleeding . because of the almost fall the pressure must have had increased and so the blood she thought .. Maan touched her wrist to see the wound when she jerked her hand away and said

I'll do it ..

Geet zid mat karoo maine kaha na …

No you please leave ..

But maan didn't listen he picked her up and took her to her room .. he found the first aid box lying and slowly very slowly started to clean up the wound .. he looked at the cut which was large and almost covering her wrist .. he was ashamed .. how could he do this ?? how could he hurt her .. he felt her flinch in pain and he blew the area softly .. after cleaning the wound he applied afresh bandage and murmured a sorry just before leaving .. he couldn't see her in pain and so he had to leave so he couldn't hurt her more ..

How was it ??? please do tell ! I hope it was not tha bad ..
PREACP : No idea 😭 please give some ideas 😃
Naima !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb...
so geet fears him...
but dat fear can b overcumed only by his constant care and luv...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
how about maan trying various method to ask forgiveness from geet
but after seeing no change in her and her fear raising whever he comes infront o her
he tries to not to show his face to her
hope this is helpful
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Posted: 13 years ago
Supeerb!!

My mind is working in super fast speed!!!lolzz

U can expect my pm anytime cos I'll cme online today night..

Lov
Amanda
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part..
plss geet maaf krdo maann ko...

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