one shot:The fun begins..;)Imp note:pg123 by kathi - Page 41

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesomely hot update kathie ...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk


I am writing it...almost done😳


Hailllaaa jaldi jaldi jaldi😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG Kathie ☺️
waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ mrs.msk you are updating this not CYSF
me don't mind
lage raho on this thread 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
marvee ur turn after simi 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Okay guys...hopefully I did justice to this like Nadia and Kathie...😳😆 If not then someone else can re-write this part...I won't mind😆

Part 28 (wow)

Suddenly she was pushed against the pillar with her hands encirled around it and Maan tied her hands up with the broken piece of ribbon she had used for him.

She could still not comprehend what happened while Maan was standing in front of her smirking.

"Maan" She whispered..."what are you doing?"

"ssshhh" Maan pressed his fingers against her lips. Making her wild. He leans closer to her and bites her lips making moan..."you are not the only one who can have fun...its my turn now...Keep your eyes closed sweety...and just feel me..." (he whispers in her ear and bites her ear lobe before backing up a little bit...she looks at him...Maan takes out his shirt with a smirk.

She gulped seeing the desire and lustful eyes on her. He was checking her out from top to bottom. She tried to release her hands but it was tied too tightly. Maan puts his hands on both sides of her head fanning her with his cool breath. She closes her eyes feeling him...then again she was left alone. She opened her eyes to see Maan gone. She looks around the room it was empty.

"Maan..." she yelled...

"I am right here my love..." She looks at him and then at his hands. He was holding something in them..."don't worry I won't leave you alone...tonight..." He winks at her. He opens his hand to show Geet what he was holding.

"Maan...NO..." She leans all the way against the pillar to escape...like there was any. She gulps in fear as Maan stands in front of her.

"Didn't you say you were hot?...well let me cool you down..." He gets down on his knee while holding the ice cube in his hand. The sudden cold touch made her scream..."That is how I want you to be screaming all night...but first thing first...let me cool down my HOT wife..." He smirks at her and let his hands do all the talking...

His one hand slowly rubbed her stomach with the ice cube while his other hand removed the waist chain. "ohh Maan..." she moaned when she felt his lips biting her stomach. He gets up pressing his manhood against her, making her shiver, while putting the ice cube in his mouth. He drags his mouth around her neck...water dripped slowly down her cleavage making her chest look more prominent...

Maan's hands slowly went to her waist undoing her saree without her knowledge. When the ice cube had melted Maan kissed her lips, he entered her mouth with his tongue...he bit her tongue and lips making her moan and scream inside his mouth.

She opened her eyes and shirked when she felt his hands go inside her skirt again. She shook her head no while Maan shook his head yes; while still kissing. his hands held her behind cupping the cheeks. He pushed her body against his making her aware of how aroused and ready he was.

Okay guys I can't go any further then this..am at work and well...😳😳
Someone call take over now...I need to cool myself now 😆😆
Hopefully it was good😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
I dont know if anyone has tried this before, but anyways, this is a blockbuster hit already. congrats to all the writers. It is really heartening to see such talents.
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Posted: 13 years ago
OKAY LETS PASS TIME WHILE WE WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE😆

ANSWER THE FOLLOWING

1.What city are you currently in and what time is it?
2. What are you doing besides waiting for the hot update😉

My Answers
1. Toronto, Ontario, Canada---2:02pm
2. Writing an update for my ff, sitting in the common hall at university😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -memorable-

@ mrs.msk you are updating this not CYSF

me don't mind
lage raho on this thread 😆


hahah I know...I have to send out pms and everything and update cysf 😆😆
I can't get out of this thread😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
GUYS ITS UPDATED ON PAGE 61 😳😳😳

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