one shot:The fun begins..;)Imp note:pg123 by kathi - Page 17

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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it awesome, update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hope to see maan following geet instead of spending time with sasha.continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww marvelous part simi
waiting next
thnx
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Posted: 13 years ago
Okay guys sorry for the delay...

Part 20

Even though Geet was at the body her mind was thinking about the moments she spent with Maan at the office. She could still feel his lips on her neck fanning with his hot breath. She blushed as if Maan was standing right in front of her. She puts her hand on her heart to control her beating. Her eyes were glued to the door waiting for him to come. She was missing him more then she did when they were staying separately for a week. Ohh how much she wanted to kiss him and feel him...

"Control Geet...remember you have a plan to think about...but where is that Dhust Dhanav? He should've been here by now..." She was about to go to call him when Raj came in front of her.

Raj: Geet where are you going?

Geet (looks at him): huh? umm Raj...I...have...to...(her words stopped in her tracks when she saw Maan entering the party. She closed her fists in anger when she saw Sasha-that chipkoo ladki with Maan. The fact that she was with him didn't anger her but the fact that HE...Mr. I-am-so-hot-and-sexy had his arm around her waist got her mad.

"How dare he!!?" She thought. Maan looks her way and winks at her. Geet mouth feel open. "so that is how he wants to play then fine." She turns her back to him showing him her bare back. This time her blouse was held up by just a string in the middle that tied into a knot.

Maan gulped seeing her bare back and seeing one string that was holding her blouse. "ohh he wanted to take her right there and untie that knot with his teeth..." He digs his nail into Sasha's waist in anger, causing her to scream in pain and trying to get his arm off her waist but Maan ignored her.😆, when he saw Raj holding her hand dragging her to the dance floor.

Geet takes his one hand and puts it on her waist while looking at Maan. She winks at him and purposely closes on him. Maan drags Sasha to the dance floor in anger😆

Okay guys I could go on and on but I will let someone else to take over 😆
Btw Mr.i-am-so-hot-and-sexy is my new nickname for Maan😆
Edited by mrs.msk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
fab yaar

all of you have done a great work👏 ... btw, nadia had turned the table but glad that you all are making me hang on cliff each time😡😆
now, stop your teasing part soon as it is making me go wild with dirty thoughts ... i mean if the teasing are this hawt than what will happen when they really eat each other ???
love the nick names, taunting, "x-rated" thoughts, those censored dreams & seductive looks part ... keep your be-sharam side on as me one of that

remember, at the end of the day we all are be-sharam MANEETians ... don't we ????
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Posted: 13 years ago


😆

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

fab yaar

all of you have done a great work👏 ... btw, nadia had turned the table but glad that you all are making me hang on cliff each time😡😆
now, stop your teasing part soon as it is making me go wild with dirty thoughts ... i mean if the teasing are this hawt than what will happen when they really eat each other ???
love the nick names, taunting, "x-rated" thoughts, those censored dreams & seductive looks part ... keep your be-sharam side on as me one of that

remember, at the end of the day we all are be-sharam MANEETians ... don't we ????


Thanks!
hahaa what is the fun if we can't tease the readers? We are not suppose to give everything away all at once or else how will everyone look foward to next part?😆😆
I just can't believe I am actually writing these teasing parts since I never done this before 😆😆

We ALL are besharam..that is why Kathie made this thread...it is only for people that have no shame 😆😆😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updates loved it
plz someone continue with part 21😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
Mr-I-M-So-Sexy-Nd-Hot...lol...
I like d name...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome...u all r awesome writer cont soon
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loved it ..
some one plzzz continue . ...
I want big J Maan ... he started all this mess and now let Geet finish this ...

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