ARHI hug my imagination Pt 5 in pg 12

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Guy its my 1st attempt to write a story do help and support😃 me and tell if I need to do any change.😊

Part 1 :

Arnav comforts Khushi and asks to go and sit and that he will talk with the doctor. Khushi obeyed him and went to the washroom. Here Shyam not knowing that Arnav is in the hospital was just going to the reception where in his way he faces Arnav. Arnav is fully shocked to see him. He asks "Jija ji aap yaha ?" , Shyam feels awkward and thinks what the hell is Arnav doing here and then he replies ' "Who sale sahib hum toh yaha humare ek client se milne aaye the unki tabiyat bahut kharap thi toh par aap yaha kya kar rahe hai ?" Arnav hesitates and then replies "Din e mujhse kaha ki Khushi ke bauji bimar hai toh aa kar dekhne ke liye ki unhe aagar koi madd ki jarurat hai " Shyam "Thik hai sale sahib aab hum chalet hai raat ko ghar me milenge." Shyam departs. Arnav goes to the doctor who was inside her father's cabin. Doctor "Aare Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada aap yaha ? Koi kaam tha kya ?" That was the moment Khushi's dad was regaining his consiousness by listening to the doctor he slightly opened his eyes. Arnav "Doctor yeh aab kaise hai ? Kya heart attack massive tha ?" Doctor surprised to hear this and asks "Aap inhe jaante hai ?" Arnav thinks what to tell and answers "Ha! Yeh mere relative hai." Doctor "Sir aap pehle bata te . " Arnav "Aap bataiye inki tabiyat kaisi hai ?" Doctor "Yeh aab thik hai stable condition hai par aagar mai thik time par nahi aata toh kuch massive ho sakta tha." Arnav "Kyu kya hua ?" Doctor "Kisi ne inka oxygen marks me oxygen level kam kar diya tha par aab yeh thik hai. Ok aab main chalta hu aap se baad me milunga." Doctor goes out Arnav also turns around to exit when he listens Shashi calling him "Babua !" Arnav turs towards him to hear this Shashi by his hand movement asking him to sit near him. Arnav goes and sits beside him. Shashi "Betwa tum wohi ho na jis k ghar Khushi kaam karti hai ?" Arnav tells "Yes " Shashi "Betwa who tumhare e saath thi na kal ?" Arnav "Ha ! who mera gaari kharap ho gaya tha par aab chinta maat kijiye woh bilkul thik hai ." Shashi "Tum toh sarif ghar ke lagte ho . Betwa tum se ek baat kahu ? " Arnav "Ji" Shashi "Pata nahi hum zinda rehenge bhi ya nahi par tum humse itna vada karo kit um humari khushi ka uss Shyam ke saath biha hone nahi doge . Hum abhi kisi aur pe bharosa nahi kar sakte tumhe dekh kar aisa laga kit um humare baat manoge isiliye keh raha hu" Arnav is shocked to know about Khushi's marriage and the name of Shyam. He answers "Par yeh Shyam hai kaun ?" Shashi "Who ek dhokebaaj hai uske saath Khushi ki shaadi nahi honi chahiye. Tum hum se vada karo tum Khushi betiya ko uss Badmaash ke haatho se bachayoge." Arnav "Ji mai aap se vada karta hu aab aap shanty se thoda rest lijiye mai bahar jata hu aur bata ta hu ki aapko hosh aa gaya hai. " Shashi "Bhagwan tumhara bhala kare aur beta meri behen aur Garima ji ko iss vade ke bare me mat batana." Arnav "Ok!" Shashi closes his eyes to sleep and Arnav comes out and tells everyone that he is conscious now but wants to take rest. Then he searches for Khushi but is unable to find her then he walks to the reception and sees Khushi talking with the receptionist and pleading to make some discount in her father's treatment . But the receptionist refuses then he moves by his side and asks "Kitna hai amount and aapko chinta karni ki jarurat nahi hai we will pay the amount just treatment thik se honi chahiye." Hearing this Khushi looks at Arnav and gets a little confidence that now when Arnav is here her Bauji might get well soon but she is just about to speak when Arnav looks at her and then asks the receptionist to give the required form that had to be filled and gives his credit card and asks to cut out the amount from it .The receptionist gives him the form and he passes it to Khushi just then the receptionist says that it is the rule of the hospital that who pays he or she only have to fill the form. Khushi hands Arnav the form . He starts filling it up and leaves the relationship space empty and returns it. The receptionist asks him that its compulsory to fill up that column. He thinks for 1 min and starts writing.

Ok If you liked my story do like it . And tell me what you think about it and if 10 people does comment then only I will get my confidence😊 and continue with it.

With regads ' Ishi (Miku)😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was nice😊.
continue pls
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ya,plz cntinue..
I'm luvin d way ur story is shapin up!
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Thanksss dr fr ur support will update soon

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Awesome!! Please continue and add me to the PM list! Thanks xxx
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gud work...

ur updt was very nice...
please do continue... and pm me when u do so..
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Continue!!! Pretty plz with cherries on top
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Awww...I like the caring Arnav in this story!
PLZ CONTINUTE! 👍🏼
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sweet , please do continue
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Thank you all see actually i am new so dont know how to make pm.. u tell me the process i will make who wants to get added in my pm list and you guys have to wait for Part 2 as m starting typing now and its a long one so will take a bit time...

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