SURROGATE RELATIONS #5 part 39 updated(20/11)

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wala66

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Posted: 14 years ago

#411

hailaaa phully satisphied...wooow...this just keeps on getting better and more better..im still waiting for labor and then phull oon...ahem ahem😳...you kow what iam after...

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anupamachem

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Posted: 14 years ago

#412

Wow! Perfect. Emotions laid down so beautifully that I dont have words in admiration. So he did move from cheeks to lips! Sooo... sweet!
Continue soon!

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Shimmerr

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Posted: 14 years ago

#413

haaaiii!!!!
marjawaaan!!!!
this update is so sweet and romantic!!
i hope you know that you rescued me from dying!!
so the both are getting closer and closer and its impossible for both to stay away from each other.
baby also wants her/his parents to be close und as one.
geet still thinks about leaving him later on, but with each day her will to leave him goes till one day it wont exist any more.
even if she wants to leave, maan will never let that happen in this lifetime and the coming ones.
continue sooon dear!!
love you!!<3<3<3

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Dilsay

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Posted: 14 years ago

#414

very well written the first kiss and the first kick...

lovely description

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mysteriousmilli

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Posted: 14 years ago

#415

Awesome update...totally maaneet...😛
please update soon...

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Cathy25

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Posted: 14 years ago

#416

Aah, I freaking loved it. From the scene were maan leans in in the office, to the choice of song( its one that I absolutely love btw) to the d ending kick and kiss scene. Now that Geet has started to feel for maan, the updates are only gonna get better, lol.

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meravigiliso

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Posted: 14 years ago

#417

lovely description . u made me think ,how does relation nurture and blooms into strong and beautiful . relation of maaneet is lyk that ,maan nurtured the security ,the unconditional love into geet made her to accept the relation they share . transformation is beautifully depicted . awesome update . loved the shona first kick and 😉 nothing more to say.

Edited by acjanfeb1 - 14 years ago

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ninand

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Posted: 14 years ago

#418

Bindu this part was wonderful ! You have a knack of being able to tug at our heartstrings using the simplest words and the simplest gestures... I adored maan's 'pillow' quip..! It was so spontaneous and sweet !

and the kiss and kick scene was brought about most naturally.. it was absolutely lovely ! The story and the words are flowing beautifully..

So eager to read more.. Please Continue soon !