SURROGATE RELATIONS #5 part 39 updated(20/11)

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#421

That was a lovely part...baby with mama n papa...chooo chweeet

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Aatiya

@PaintedSky

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#422

THe song perfectly fit with the situation. Mamma -baby-papa sharing a great bond. Loved today's update so much.

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crazydream

@crazydream

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#423

Wow
Superb... Mind-blowing
Awesome update
this part was well expressed
Keep writing...
Luved it..

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Monali

@monika1992

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#424

!!!!!!! Awesome

Superb...Thnks 4 pm

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reni

@leverne

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#425

. So Sorry ma like button doesn't work.. Loved the kick..and the kiss..maan wanted to cherish the moment ..so sweet..geet is real blessed to have maan for her..maan so sweet..to be with her gently making her comfortable in his presence.:) wow walks then office romance..love him holding her close during casual convo..then sleeping on her lap..awesome update..waiting for more..aash darling loved the song..

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shruthi2010

@shruthi2010

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#426

OMG it was beautiful, just the right update i was waiting for. bechare geet he will be soon got into maan's naughty web of love

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zunaiba5

@zunaiba5

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#427

thnx 4 pm

maan's very naughty

loved the update

do continue

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seemamary

@seemamary

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#428

Loved the song and it suited the most as geet was missing maan and also thinking about her feelings for him. I also liked the part where the baby kicked after hearing maan's voice and hope to see more kisses and romance between maaneet and also some parts which includes the conversation with their child too.

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libra25

@libra25

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#429

awesome..
just fabulous..
beautiful work with words and emotions...
loved it to core...
plz continue soon..
cant wait for the next part

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LuvScooby

@LuvScooby

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#430

All I can say after the update is big Awww.

Seriously, this update reflected the love and tenderness Maan was showing towards Geet. It portrayed very nicely the warmth that they are building in their relationship, the kiss just added a perfect touch...

Very nice update