SS@MG-Was it my Mistake or Both Part-9/PG-28 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice pro n 1st part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for your likes & comments..


Sorry to keep you waiting...


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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 2


Everything was going well, Ameya was in fifth Std. & Aryaa was in second Std. It was routine Maan while going to office used to drop Ameya & Aryaa to school while Geet used to pick them.

On Sundays & holidays there outing was fixed.

Their vacation had started as per their fixed schedule, Geet along with Ameya & Aryaa used to spend some days with her Mom, Ajit (Brother) who is stays in Pune. However, two days before leaving to Pune Ameya was not keeping well so they postponed.

Maan as usual got ready for office & was having his breakfast; Geet & Aryaa were already there. Ameya was in his room, as he was not keeping well.

Maan: Geet how is Ameya now? At night I checked him fever was not there.

Geet: Yes but feeling dizzy. I will take him to doctor after 11.00am.

Maan : Ok & let me know what the doctor says.

Maan kisses his little princess & turns to go to Ameya's room.

Aryaa : Papa mamma's kiss

Maan lifting her in his arms came close to Geet.

Maan : Aryaa I kissed you , now you kiss Mamma.

Aryaa : No papa you kiss (pointing by her index finger on Geet's cheek)

Maan : Geet ab Aryaa ne bhi kaha hai & he kissed on her cheek at the same time he holds Geet near to him & whispers in her ears.

Maan : Ab bacho ko bhi pata hai ki Papa Mamma ko office jaate samay kiss dete hai..

Geet : Maan tum bhi na, kuch bhi bol dete ho baccho ke saamne.

Maan : Kyu maine kuch galat kaha.

Geet took Aryaa from Maan & they went to Ameya's room.


Aryaa & Ameya' s Room

Their room was painted with some cartoons as per the choice of Ameya & Aryaa.

Maan sat near Ameya, moved his hand on Ameya's head

Maan : How r y feeling now buddy?

Ameya : Ok buddy but not so fine.

Maan : Take the medicines properly, we will go to Nani's house day after tomorrow.

Maan kissed his forehead & left for Office.

The bonding between father & son was like friends.

After 2 days, they left for Pune. Ameya & Aryaa were very happy as they were going to meet Nani & Mama. Maan returned to Mumbai that very night.

After 1 week

Ameya & Aryaa wanted to stay with their Mama & Nani for some more days so Geet returned back to Mumbai after 1 week.

Maan was shocked to see Geet but at the same time he was happy to see her back and nervous coz Kids were not there.

Maan : U are back & what about do shaitans jo tum unhe waha chodkar aayi.

Geet : Maan, who dono khush hai & they wanted to stay for 2-3 days, we are going on Saturday that's what I have promised them.

Maan (took her in embrace) so I have 3days now which are totally mine, missed u a lot that too for 1 week dear and started kissing her.

Geet : Maan, I too missed U. Dinner is ready go change & come.

Maan : Mine half dinner is over Geet.

Geet : Half dinner? I didn't get you?

Maan : (hold her more closed) Its U & would like to have full if you don't stopped me haan Geet.

Geet too cannot control any more at last surrendered to Maan. He too was waiting for this.

Hope u all liked it.

Next update soon


Edited by Jyoti121 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely Update...👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome Update Dear 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice update... Extremely sweet

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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb!
wonder what went wrong!...
continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow amazing Jo 👍🏼


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