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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
wow so well written

i love it :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
loved the second part of ur OS!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: nayika



You should write your own! It's a great way to force characters to do what you want :P

ive written one for the first time...do read it..it is very silly..ive nevr written one..so pls tell me how is it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
gr8. loved it😊.waiting eagerly 4 the next part.who knows??maybe this might cme true...i hope arnav atleast hears shyams name and undrstands dat some other guy is involved with khushi. its high time dat he finds out abt shyam😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Nayika ..Awesum update ... I wish Monday ko aisa hi ho !!! wat a hug in ur OS n d precap .. I ve watchd d precap countless no of times ... cant wait for d next part n Monday 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Arhi-Sarun

awesome update...loved how Arnav answered back to buaji...great job



Thanks!

Originally posted by: Barbie3143

wow baby.. you are too good hugsss



Thank you!

Originally posted by: appy2011

so loved it dear...wish something like this happens...thanks for such a nice OS.



Me too, thanks.

Originally posted by: desigirl_18

Loved the second part!! Great going!!!



Thank you.

Originally posted by: pri12

very very niceee...w8ing for next...:D



You'll only have to wait a couple of hours hopefully :P

Originally posted by: mahi0809

Awww read the both parts in one go!!

Mindblowing work!!... Zabardast... superbly written!!



Aww thank you!

Originally posted by: NaDzGirl

u'v gotta continue this darlin cz im hooked to da first part! this is a brilliant os and wanna read more & more until monday comes...



Haha, thank you! Reading things definitely does make the weekend go faster.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: kiran255

wow so well written


i love it :D



Thanks!

Originally posted by: moon_mine

loved the second part of ur OS!!!!



Yay :)

Originally posted by: ipkknd8

gr8. loved it😊.waiting eagerly 4 the next part.who knows??maybe this might cme true...i hope arnav atleast hears shyams name and undrstands dat some other guy is involved with khushi. its high time dat he finds out abt shyam😕



I definitely hope so, I'd prefer him to find out like this than have Shyam twist his mind.

Originally posted by: shaheerdiwani

Hey Nayika ..Awesum update ... I wish Monday ko aisa hi ho !!! wat a hug in ur OS n d precap .. I ve watchd d precap countless no of times ... cant wait for d next part n Monday 😃



Thank you so much, I've probably watched the precap 100 times now imagine how many times we'll all watch the actual scene!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
Really Good!!!! I can't wait to read more and I wish this happens on Monday!!!!
PLZZ PM!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
REALLY GOOD!! PLZZZ carry on, I can't wait to read more, so PLEASE update soon!! I wish this happens in Monday's Episode!!!
P.S. PM me!!!
👏👏⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sorry this part is short and no PM's since I'm going out now so spread the word amongst yourselves :P

Part 3


Arnav made Khushi sit on the bed by her father's feet and he watched as she put one hand on them and he saw her eyes begin to well up again.


'Khushi, look at me. There's no use in crying, you'll just make yourself feel worse.'


She sniffed her nose and Arnav briefly thought about offering her a napkin if only he had one until he remembered with a small smile that she already had her dupatta. He lifted one end and offered it to her with a smile and a raised eyebrow hoping to make her laugh. He didn't receive a laugh for his efforts but she did reward him with a small watery smile which made his heart leap.


'Khushi, can I ask you something? This Shyam, do you...'


Khushi interrupted him before he could finish, 'no! No, I don't know what Buaji's talking about I don't want to marry him, I don't love him.'


'Khushi, you don't have to explain anything.' He put a hand out covering hers to stop her fervent denial although it pleased him to hear her say it. 'I just want to ask you some questions about him. What's his name?'


'Name? Shyamji, you just said it.'


Arnav shook his head almost smiling at her response. 'Okay, let's try this again. What's my name, Khushi Kumari Gupta?'


'Your name? Arnav Singh Raizada. Why? Have you forgotten it?


'Okay so your name is Khushi Kumari Gupta, mine is Arnav Singh Raizada and his name is Shyam...' He indicated with his hands that she should continue.


'Oh! Shyam Manohar Jha.'


Arnav stiffened but he had to be sure, this seemed like such a ridiculous possibility but he had to ask just to eradicate the possibility in his mind. 'What's his job?'


'He's a lawyer, why are you asking all these questions about him? Do you think I should marry him too?!'


Arnav had been frozen in shock at her reply but when Khushi took her hands from his and stood up and started muttering to herself he registered what she had said. 'No! No, of course not!' Arnav couldn't believe what was happening. How could his Jiju, whom he had trusted above anyone else with his Di's safety and happiness, be planning to marry Khushi? How did he even know Khushi?


Arnav saw Khushi looking at him worriedly, he wanted to reassure her but no words came. How could he be somebody else's strength when it felt like his own world had just fallen apart. How could he tell her that he would never let her marry Shyam, he would never let Shyam hurt her when he had already let Shyam hurt his Di, the one person he had always strived to protect from pain and heartache.


He didn't want to make false promises he couldn't keep so instead he did the only thing that seemed natural and took Khushi into his arms. He felt her hesitate under his touch and recalled his own reluctance to hug her earlier. But this hug was more for him than her. He was the one that needed reassurance that everything would be okay, that Di would be okay.


Slowly he felt her raise her hands and bring them to his back but her touch was so light, putting no pressure on his body at all. It wasn't enough, Arnav needed more than what she was offering and he pulled her closer to him, burying his face in the scent of her hair and trying to forget what he'd just learned. Only when he felt her hands hold onto him harder and her face press into his chest did he feel better.


Part 4

Edited by nayika - 13 years ago

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