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kathie_berns

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Posted: 13 years ago

#181

awesome... i am sure as hell turned on... please do continue soon...:)

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basicquestion1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: PaintedSky
I thought he love her... Does he ??

Luv her??? Oh he adores her but thinks that he only deserves hatred.

that's my understanding... So u can't take it as it is. But just thought
To respond to ur question.
I think it's an amazing story. Not just maan but I think geet too has always harbored
feelings for him but she can't seem to agree with his renegade ways of defying society's norms.

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#183

Hey guys,

I hate tormenting you guys...so I have decided to give you guys a little teaser. Also, I will reveal the WHOLE past of Maan in next two parts...After that I will focus on Geet and Maan in the present and see where this takes😳

Also, someone had asked me to turn this into a FF instead of a SS so I have decided to do just that...lets see how long I can take this story until you guys get bored of it😳😆

Now, this teaser is mixed..there is a teaser of the past and present...so enjoy!

TEASER:

Maan: mama I am going to name my sister Pari (Savitri smiles as Maan rubs her belly. He puts his head on her belly to listen to the baby's movement. She strokes his head)

Savitri: I like the name.

Maan (looks at her) You know I have everything planned. I will be the best big brother.

Savitri: I know you will be. (she holds his shoulder) Promise me you will always take care of her

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Geet: I have had enough...you have to tell me the truth...TELL ME! (Maan looks at her with anger...) I DON'T CARE ANYMORE ABOUT YOUR ANGER! I WANT ANSWERS! (Maan jerks her near him...he puts his arm around her waist..)

Maan: You got the answers in my diary. (She looks at him..) You want to know right how I knew? I had kept my diary closed on the desk. When I came back it was open. (He holds her hair...) Why you need to hear it from me when you got your answers already.

Enjoy!

Update will be on Monday! 😆

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362035

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Posted: 13 years ago

#184

awesoome...

loved the teaser...

eagerly waiting for the part...

plzzz do send me a pm too...

Edited by priti11 - 13 years ago

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#185

teaser
interesting...
seems like Maan has faced hell and so much hurt and pain...
par is behavior towards Geet makes me to wonder is it love or solace sure it is obsession and possessiveness...
cont soon...

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: priti11
awesoome...
loved the teaser...
eagerly waiting for the part...
plzzz do send me a pm too...

Thank you!

Will updaet by Monday and will def. pm you😳

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: pushpi
But Monday is so far away :-(

I know Pushpi..but I promise to update first thing on Monday 😆

still have to write hte part and until then I am replying back to everyone😳

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: lovelycutietedy
awsome...
update soon

Originally posted by: abinash079
lovely teaser

Thank you!

Will update by Monday

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: spvd
teaser
interesting...
seems like Maan has faced hell and so much hurt and pain...
par is behavior towards Geet makes me to wonder is it love or solace sure it is obsession and possessiveness...
cont soon...

Thank you Deepa!

His past will be revealed soon so I will leave my comment about that for later😆

The reason for his behavior is sure different but htere is a reason behind it

Am not sure if I helped you or confused you more 😆

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: basicquestion1
so maan calls himself shaitan...i guess he thinks that he is a bad guy that doesn't have any good left in him.
he purposely wants to hurt geet so she sees him as a bad soul ...i'm not sure if i'm getting this right or not...but he becomes mean to her coz he thinks this is the real him. ...and in his way he is sharing his real side with her.
now the question is ...why does he believe that he is pure evil?????? wud luvvv to read it whn u disclose it.

aww so that little part of him that nvr got any friends was longing for geet to tell him that she has read the diary. he was waiting for her to communicate, to confine in him but she didn't...and he was hurt thus the pity luv statement by him :(

Good question and a very lovely comment!

Good insiight and unfortunentaly I cannot say anything about it until I do disclose his past soon...I figured there is no point in dragging his past..it is better to rip the band-aid off fast 😆 and I tormented you guys enough already with their previous past of hte marriage 😆😆

He is hurting himself and Geet with his behavior and I guess as a "shetan) he cant help it😭

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