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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
sounds real fun to me...
do update soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: dheerajbhagat00

luvly movie JMDL!Msk ko Yuvraj ka Role dena!😳Cant w8!😍

hi dear i thing u alredy see this movies..plz kisi ko story mat batana.[plz dont tell the story to others]...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Jass.KN

Ya top punjabi singers Diljit Dosanjh, Gippy Grewal,n Neeru Bajwa 😃

hi dear u already watch this movies that's good..but plz dont saw the story to others plz...and i also add some scenes which r not in movies...hope u like and other also
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Part-1
She park the car in front of school building and goes to principal office.Principal welcomed her.

P: Mrs.khurana i m very thankful to u and Mr.khurana.U both get time for funtion between ur busy schedules.

Geet:No,sir its our pleasure.Between Ekam jyada tang ta nai karda?

P:Nahi mrs.khurana o ta sare teachers da fav student hai.B/w ajj tusi Ekam nu jaldi pick karn a gai.

Geet:Khas gal e a ki ajj meri wedding anniversery hai.So,me sochea ki me ekam nu jaldi ghar le java.

P: O that's great congratulation.

Geet:Thanks

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She coming with Ekam

E:Mom aj appa kithe jana

Geet:Ha Baby pehla appa shopping karage fir ghar jage tuhada fav chocklate cake banawage.OK

Ekam:But mom me tuhade to ek gal puchni a?

Geet:ha ekam pucho.

Ekam:mom tusi papa nu kina pyaar karde ho?

Geet:Me te tuhade papa ek duje nu bahot pyar karde a.

Ekam:Tusi dove ek duje nu kive te kithe mile c..tuhada viah kive hoea c.

Geet:Ekam eh bahot lambi kahaani a...me tenu hune kive sunava

Ekam:mom me hune suni a kahaani

Geet:ok jad tak app ghar puhcha ge me tenu kahaani sunani a.Ok

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Eh kahaani shuru hundi e pind{village}Sayalpur to.Jitho de 2 sardaar bahot mashoor c.Kise wale eh dove Bhai c... par hun eh ek duje de paake dushman ban chuke san.Sara pind ehna di dushmani to tang a chukea c.Jo gal ek ne keh diti 2 je ne usda ult karna.Dono koi moka nahi chote thi ek dusre se ladne ka. Holi holi eh dusmani uhna ne apne putta{sons} wich ve barni shuru kar deti.Ohna nu vi ek duje de dusman bana dita

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Ekam:Tusi eh kehri sardara wali kahani suna rahe ho..me ta tuhade wali kahaani suni a.

Geet:o fo rukta sahi suna ta rahi a..

Kuch saala baad Fir o bache bache nahi rahe.O ban gae college de handsome,dashing,rockstar

***************FB***********

SONg ends

MK and MSK sit on their jeeps in opposite sides with their friends

Romeo:Das MK hun kive nibadni a ehna nal?Kale kale nal ladna ya ekathe hi?

MK:Oye Jina de kut pani a uhna to puch kive karna?

Teji:O waad ke rakh diya ge...

MK and MSK seeing each other like they kill each other at a time...

MK to guy:La bi bari pehli a teri.Chib pade salea de buthea de wich.

MSK to his guy:La bai umar de hesab nal ta teri bari bandi a...chal fir chak de fate.

Both guys come from opposite direction and stand front of each other.

MK guy punch to other and he fell on the ground..Both come back.

MK shake hand with him.

MK:o wah bi mera javana

ROmeo:Bai mod hi dita doole te tato da mul.

MSK to other guys:chal bi is bar chati ch lata panea chahidia ne.

MK to Romeo:La vi romeo de kala sheri ehnu.Manu ehte wali umeed ta nahi par bejna ta panahia.

Romeo to guy:Le bai hun pailan paunda jayin'😆

Go going as peacock dancing[paila paunda]

MSK to teji -Le eh ta Kutt pen to pehla hi peran ch pe gaye😆

Mk guy try to punch but other guy punch him first.MK guys fall on ground.

MK to romeo- Ah le paawa tiya tere mor diya paila.Sale hoa payala de.Chal hun bari teri a.

MSk shake hand with his guy and congrates him.

MSK-La bai teji bari hun tari a.

Romeo-o me keha bai mera sawa[nature] thoda garm a matho banda bunda na mar jave koi😆

MK-Sale je banda badkae bina mudea ta ehdar na ayi sida hi lang ji.

Romeo take his goggles,wear them.They both reach.

Romeo-Saala danasore jeha.Salea meri wari tuhi auna c.😆

Teji going to punch but romeo stop him

romeo-O ek minute ehni v kahdi kali a tanu kut khan di..aanka ta lah lande 2200 Rs. dea ne je tut gaya ta paise tera bap baro.😆

Teji againg try to punch but Romeo enterept

Romeo-Wase tere jahe kamjoor bande nu dekh ke manu gussa hi bahot aoda😆.Wase yaar ek gal a mere tere yahi nu kon puchda ladai ta uhna doha di a.Par fir vi ye tu ladna chaoda ta ek baar apne sardar to puch la.

Teji turn his face towards MSK.At a time Romeo kick him on his stomach and come back sing ''Hud Hud dabaang dabangg''

Romeo-Kida jachi ni gal?

MK-Salea jidi gal kar aya ode umedd hai ni c tere to.

Teji go back to his place.

MSK-Fite muh teri dabangg de.Saleo kade dookhe nal mar deo de kadi ave hi pari pai jande o.Sida hi kehdo haar gai.

Romeo-Bai dekh es group ch bus appa dove bande daler a ya tu ya ma😆.Vekh hun me ta ja aya hun ta tanu hi jana pana ja fir chak de gade to kola.

He get up from his jeep.

MSk-Lai vi teji hun ehna ehne kani chati ch lata.Teji eh sala umar ch vi metho wada 2min kut kanda vi chnaga ni lagna.

MK-Lai romeo aj eh gulabo vi kutna pana.Ah wekh Gulabu jeha, aye lagda jiwe ghardea ne kacha e tod leya howe.

MSk also get up.They both start coming towards each other.

Precap-MSK -Dosti ove kudi de nal?😲

Note: username JASS.KN and dherajbhagat00...i reply to u bath comment plz check it out. its imp...

@Silky di...di MK and MSK both r sikh but one have cutting and other r not...ok...dont get confuse

Next part-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1915674&PID=48743105&#48743105
Edited by -knirwal- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
nice update khushi
m loving it
kya dushmani thi dono ki
please continue asap khushi
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
Khushi really sorry jaan i cannot understand punjabi that well pls ho sake toh hindi mein likhna
I sorry but majority of the words were very difficult for me i couldn't understand
love-Piya
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
Hi buddy,
fab update.
Pls add me to pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part-2
MSk-Lai vi teji hun ehna ehne kani chati ch lata.Teji eh sala umar ch vi metho wada 2min kut kanda vi chnaga ni lagna.

MK-Lai romeo aj eh gulabo vi kutna pana.Ah wekh Gulabu jeha, aye lagda jiwe ghardea ne kacha e tod leya howe.

MSk also get up.They both start coming towards each other.THey come face to face.Both seeing each other wirh their full anger.Both try to punch ech other but before they do it.Security gaurd comes and stop them.

Romeo-Yaar eh sale chan nal ladan bi ni dinde[Yaar ye log hume chain se ladne bi nahi dete]

Both left from their with their friends

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Jugnu walking on road and see..

Jugnu-Enni wadi limoousine sade pind vich, te jugnu jasoos nu hi ni pata' chal bai Putra Whisky hune pata karde a..[etni badi gadi humare gao me te jugnoo jassoos nu hi pata nahi.Beta vicky abi pata lagte hai chal]

He take his scooter and make his son to sit back.

Whisky-Oye bapu.. kithe oh Limousine, te kithe tera eh scooter.. rehan de apne to ni faddi jani[dad kithe o limousin te kithe tuhada scooter..rehene dejea humse unka pecha nahi hoga.]

Jugnu-Oye Whisky putar, es scooter ne ta rocket fad laye, eh limousine ki cheej a' tu piche ho aapan chaliye..[oye puttar's ye scooter to rocket ko bi pakad le ye to fir bi limousine hai]

Car stop before a beautiful banglow.

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Jugnu also park his scooter.Arnav comes out from car.Jugnu go to him.

Jugnu-Jai mata di.Ji tusi lai a eh hawali.[Jai mata di.ji apne karedi hai ye mansion]

Arnav-G ha daso[Yes g ap batayi kon]

Jugnu-My self Jugnu..I m property dealer.Unj me betheri koshish kiti es hawali nu bechan di.Par koi 50 crore dean nu tyar hi nahi c.Tusi ta ni la lae kite 50crore ch.[My self Jugnu..I m property dealer.Mene ye mansion bechne ki baho koshish ki par koi bi iska 50 crore dene ko tyaar hi nahi tha.Par tusi ta ni le li ye mansion 50 crore ka]

Arnav-Me eh haweli 70 crore ch lai a[Mene ye mansion 70 crore me kareda hai]

Jugnu-70 crore ruppees wich.

Arnav-Shonk di koi kimat nahi hundi Jugnu Ji.MEri kudi nu eh pasand a gai te me kared lai.[Hobby ki koi kimaat nahi hoti MR.Jugnu.Meri beti ko ye pasand a gai aur mane kared li.]

Arnav-Tusi dasea c ke tusi property dealer ho.Me bi Fertilizer Plant waaste koi zameen lab reha ha.Koi hai tuhadi najar ch.[Apne bataya tha ke ap property dealer hai.Me Fertilizer Plant waaste ek zamin doond raha ho apki najar me koi hai]

Jugnu-Crore to crore di ta ready pai a sir[Crore to crore di to ready hai sir]

Arnav-Par me is Plant te 70 million pound invest karna chauna.Tuhadi najar ch hove ta dasna.[But me is plant par 70 million pound invest karna chata hu.Apki najar me ho to batana]

Arnav left while talking on his mobile.Left Jugnu in shocked state.

Pritpal mansion

Pritpal-70 million pound.Ha rakam ta wadi a.Par tu kyu puchda?[70 million pounds.Ha rakam to badi hai .par tum kyu puch rahe ho?]

Jugnu-O jehdi khali pai c na haweli.Chad de wale pase.O chad gai a.NRI aye ko london to bahot ameer.Uhne karedi a 70 crore ruppaya ch.[Wo jo Haweli thi na jo khali padi thi vo ab bik chuki hai.Koi NRI aya hai london se Bahot hi paise wala hai.Usne kared li hai vo 70 crore me]

Pritpal-70 crore ch ohde waste ta koi 45 crore vi nai de reha c[70crore me uske lia to koi 45 crore bi nahi de raha tha]

Jugnu-Hor suno agla 70 million pound da fertilizer plant lon nu firda[aur suneye vo 70 million pound ka plant lagane chata hai]

Pritpal[shocking]-70 million pound da

Jugnu-Age suno agle de ek kudi a sohni apne MSK de han di.Me ta chuhna ke doha da rishta ho jae.Appa nal de sardar to ute uth jawage.[Hor sunia unke ek ladki bi hai sohni jehi.Humare MSK ki umaar ki.Me to chata hu ke dono ka rishta ho jae.Isnal appa naal wale sardar to wad paise wale ho jawage]

Pritpal-Jugnu sakem ta teri changi a par eh kabar us pase na ponche.Jugnu idea to tumhara bahot acha hai magar ek baat ka deyan rakna ye baat us taraf nahi jani chia]

JUgnu-Ki gal karde o sardar ji jugnu Palta ta kade pee k nahi palteya, sofi ki paltu. Mein te utthe, Kaddde v nahi.[Kya baat kar di apne me to kabi pee kar na waha jao sofi to door ki baat hai.Nale me waha kabi bi nahi]

Pritpal-Jugnu chai peo ge?

Jugnu-Nahi g me thoda kahli ch a.Ek ta school walea ne bahot jaan kadi hoi a.O apna chota munda haga na ohda dakla a.School wale 25000 mangde ne.[Nahi vo me jaldi me ho.Vo school walo ne dukhi kar rakha hai.Vo apna beta hai na uska daakla hai school me School wale 25000 mang rahe hai.]

Pritpal-Jugnu g sangde kyu ho me de deaga paise.[Jugnu g sharmar kyu rahe hai me paise de doga]

Jugnu-Nahi sardar g tuhade ta pehla wale vi rehnde ne.[Nahi sardar sahib tuhade ta pehla wale bi rehte hai.]

Pritpal-Koi gal ni ekthe de dai[Koi baat nahi ek sath de dena].

Shamsher Mansion

--------------------[dont think much..pritpal and shamsher khurana ke pass bilkul ek jase ghar hai.Copy of each other😆]

Shamsher-Eh la jugnu 25000 Rs.Par ek gal da dyan rakhi eh NRI ate Viah wali gal duje pase ni jani chahidi.[Ye lo jugnu 25000 Rs. par ek baat ka dyaan rakna ke ye NRI &vivaah wali baat us dusri taraf nahi jani chia]

Jugnu- Me te oh vi una de ghare kade vi nahi.

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Geet comes down stairs.As arnav reading newspaper downstairs

Geet-Hi dad what's up?

She sees samoosa lying on table.

Geet-Dad samoosa is wich kini calories kundia ne.[Dad samoosa es me to kitni calories hoti ha]

Arnav-Beta eh colories da dar ta me england hi chad aya.Hun a me punjab wich zindagi nave sire to shuru karni chohna samose,aloo de poronthe.jalbia.[Beta ye colories ka dar to endland hi chod aya ho ab to punjab me reh kar zindagi nae tareke se shuru karni chahta hu...samose,poronthe,jlabia].

Geet-No way dad.

Arnav-Beta me tenu punjab le ta aya par mera mann ase chinta wich rehnda ke tera ore jee ta lag jayega na.[Beta me tumhe punjab le to aya par mue chinta rehti hai ke tumhara mann to lag jayega na yaha]

Geet-Dad hun tusi te mom ne ekade rehna nahi,te fir ki fark panda punjab hove ya london.Je la lona hi pana.[Dad ab apne aur mom neto ek saath rehna nahi hai to fir kya fark padta hai ke me punjab me raho ja london me.Mann to lagana hi padega]

Arnav-Chalo chodo beta ye batao ke tumhara koi dost bana?
Geet-Nahi dad abi tak to koi nahi bana but i think bahot jald ban jayega.
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In this convo. u all have to read names carefully bc in it mk msk convo with their dads at their mansions

Msk to his dad-Dosti o ve kudi de nal.DAd tusi bhul gaye tusi mere dad ho.Mundia nu ehjahe kaam karn to roki da ungal ni lai di.Kmal karda yaar.[Dosti vo bi ladki ke saath.Dad ap bhool rahe hai ap mere dad hai.Beteo ko issa kaam karne se rokna chahia naki use ise kaam me lagane ka kaam karna chaia]

MK to his dad-Me ki kmaal karda.yaar.Koi banda bunda kutana ta gal kar akhe kudi fasoni a koi sokhi gal a yaar[[Mene kya kmaal ki hai dad.Agar apko kisis ko pitwana hai to bato.Par ap to keh rahe ho ladki ko fasao ye koi asan kam hai kya?]

Pritpal to msk-Maino pata hai ke kaam sokha nahi.Par kad tak tu eh choti motia junga lada rahega time a gaya hun wadi jung ladn da.Oe yaar mera eh kaam karde[Muje maloom hai ke ye kaam asaan nahi par kab tak tum ye choti motti ladaiya karte rahoge.Ab waqt hai ek wadi ladai ladne ka.Oe yaar mera ye kaam karde]

MSk to his dad-Dad Aa ki gandiya gandiya galla kari jane o. Mein mummy nu das dana .[Dad ye ap kasi bate kar rahe hai.Me mom ko batadoga]

He call MUMMy but pritpal stoped him.

MSK-Dad tuhanu pata khudiya fasonia kini akokhi hundia ne.Nakre deke ne kudia de apne to ni hunda eh kam.Hmmm par sharat te ho vi sakda.[Dad apko pata hai ladkia patana kitna mushkil kaam hai.Nakre dekhe hai ladkio ke,mujse nahi hoga ye kaam.but hmmm par ek sharat pe ho bi sakta hai]

Pritpal-Kehri sharat?[konsi sharat]

MSK-Mahine da 25000 lagu.[25000 per month for this work]

Shamsher-25000...Oye tu hun es kam lai bi meto paise mangega.O yaar kuch ta shram kar.Chal eh das koi bapu wala dicount ni milda? [25000..are yaar ab tum mujse es kaam ke lia bi paise magoge kuch to sharam kar.Chalo ye batao ke koi dad wala discount nahi hai kya?]

Mk-Bapu o jamane gae.Nale Tu ta fasaalia hona bebe nu mele ch choodiyan chada k, NRI kudi aa baapu NRI, Paste pizze khwaune penge.Kharcha hoo kharcha.[Dad ab vo jamana gaya.Wase apne to mom ko mele me se chudia chada kar pata lia hoga.Par eh ta NRI ladki hai dad,paste pizze kelane padge.Kharcha hoga kharcha]

Pritpal-Oye le lia paise.Par ek gal da dyan rakhi ke us kudia di doli es ghar ch hi aoni chahidi a.[Are le lena paise.Par ek baat ka dyaan rakna ke us ladki ki doli es ghar me hi ani chahia]

MSK-Lo daso agya kari bache da ta farjj hunda maa bap da kehna manna.Je eh gal a dad ta fir chapalo card MSK weds GEET.Saala eh ta sunnan ch vi wadia lagda.[Yelo dad ye bi koi baat hai, agya kari bacho ka to farz hota hai maa bap ka kehna manna.Agar ye baat hai dad to fir tusi chapa lo cards MSK weds GEET.Ye to sunne me bi acha lag raha hai]

Shamsher-Khush kita putra.[Khush kia hai beta tumne]

MK-Le fir bapu sikh la tu vi Angraji bolni NRI nuh ta aake hi hato ,Bave kad ke na le oni pave[Dad ab ap bi angraji bolna seek hi lijea NRI nuh[daughter-in-law] ta akar hi rahegi.Agar nikal kar bi lani padi na to bi koi baat nahi]

Precap-Geet first day at collage.

Note-Tell me how many of u read this story in punjabi.

And now plz press the like button and do comment if negative or positive. and ya me want double comments for double updates..😆

Edited by -knirwal- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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the concept itself is awesome...i mean it sounds crazy...n i just love it...geet is already the DIL of the family but still pata nahin wo kisse pyaar karti hain...i just love the concept...i mean a bit different...


ekam is her son...i just love this kid ever since i saw him in baabul...btw not only ekeam...but i also wanna know ur love story...so jaldi jaldi bataye na...


does this mean ke mk n msk hate each other...am guessing so...


omg...geet's bungalow is simply mesmerising n too too too beautiful...am in love with it...haha...


hihi...jaise bete ke shakal milti hain...waise hi both brothers have similar

houses...lol...waise...will both of them bring the same DIL as well...hihih...i mean both are planning to marry off their son with the rich geet...


hihi...both are being scared of talking n befriending a girl...hihi...aur elo...they are taking money from their dad per week to befriend geet...btw that dad wala discount part cracked me up...


i wonder who will get the catch...i mean who geet will really marry thpugh am guessing it to be msk...but then u never know...


i really love this...n thnk u for giving the update in hindi as well because i really dont understand punjabi that well...


continue soon... :)))

Edited by zahra15 - 13 years ago

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