My first SS:Jihne mera dil lutiya TEASER pg69 - Page 38

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: swetha10

Awesome update..

awww geet's so naughty..
luved it..
continue soon

Thanks swetha di for ur precious comment😛
Edited by -knirwal- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hilarious part dear
maanet convo was nice
continue asap

P.S sorry for short comments khushi...um running short of time these days
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: minnie_tweetie

hilarious part dear
maanet convo was nice
continue asap

P.S sorry for short comments khushi...um running short of time these days

First of all di plz dont be sorry...lenght of comment not matter,words of comment matter me more😛...and i know u like it...thanks u soo much ke apne apni busy life me bi meri update read ki aur use badi baat comment bhi kiya😛...love u di muahhh
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks u dear for ur precious comment
-knirwal- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks guys for ur all encourage,comments and like button but this time i dont receive good responce.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part
ha ha geet teasing maan

past
MK ko zor ka jhatka laga n usne MSK ki band bajane ka plan bana liya
waiting to see what happens next????
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: hinal_maaneet

awesome part

ha ha geet teasing maan

past
MK ko zor ka jhatka laga n usne MSK ki band bajane ka plan bana liya
waiting to see what happens next????

Thanks alot dear for ur precious comment😊...ya ur right mk ne msk ki band bajai ab dekhte hai msk kya karta hai...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part-11
Thanks alot friends for ur encourage.It mean alot to me but in last update i receive very bad response
Note:Plz give me quick feedbacks and i give u quick update.

Mk:Wase apko pata hai in dono ki jodi bilkul Pataka hai ji.

Geet:Pataka?

Mk:Ah means Heer Ranjha type.

Geet:Oh heer ranjha type.

MSK:Ye bhai behen kaha se a rahe hai?

Teji:Tum hi puch lo.

Geet:Hi MSK

MSK:Hello ji

MK and MSK change glares to each other.

Geet:MSK It is not fair.

MSK:Konsa fair ji?

Geet:Apne apni aur Mk ki dosti ke bare me muje sab kuch bata diya but Pinky ke bare me kuch nahi bataya?

MSK:Kon Pinky ji?

Mk[intrupt]:Ab itna bi bolla mat bano.Pinky humari bhabi MOGE wali.[with a swirk]

MSk left shocked after lisening to it.He try to protest

MSK:Par

Mk cut off him.

MK:Par kya tumne geet ji ko humari dosti ke bare me bata diya toh mane bi iinhe tumhare aur pinky ke bare me bata diya.

MSK give angry glare to MK.While mk ignore his glares caryy on about msk and pinky with geet.

MSk phone start ringing.Mk take advantage of it.

MK:Chaleya geet ji lagta hai Pinky ka phone a gaya hai isse hum kyu khamkha beech me kaab me hadi bane.

Geet:Ya right chaleya.

Mk and geet go away.

Teji:Yaar ye PINKY kon hai?

MSK:Abe muje kya pata ye pinky kon hai.Ab kya kare ye pinky ka naya sayapa pad gaya.

MSK go to meet Lucky and narrate him entire story.

Lucky:Hm adi bajji toh bahot achi maar gaya,Pinky moge wali hmm.

MSK:Ustaad ji ye Pinky MOGE wali cheej kya hai kon hai ye?

Lucky:Pinky moge wali sabar rakho waqt ane pe pata chal jayega sabar rakho.

Lucky:Tum muje ek baat bato kya tum geet ko hug karna chahte ho.

MSk;kon nahi chahega.

Lucky:Toh theek hai tum kuch din college mat jana.

MSK:Ye kase ho sakta hai.Agar me colage nahi gaya toh mk aur koi chaal chal dega..

Lucky:Tumhe geet ko hug karni hai na?

MSK:Ha par ek taraf toh ap muje college jane se mana kar rahi hai.

Lucky:Us ke bad jis din tum college jaoge us din jakar geet ko hug karna.

MSK:Ustaad ji apka dimaag karab ho gaya hai kya Ladki athri hai hug ki jagah tapad degi.

Lucky:Oh asa kuch nahi hoga meri baat deyan se sun.

Lucky tell him something to do the day he go to college.

After few days

Mk see geet alone coming from other side.He go and park his car in front of her.

Mk:Hi geet.

Geet:Oh hi MK.Kya baat hai ajj ap akele hi apke students kaha hai?

MK:Unhe ji abi pada kar aya ho vo toh pad rahe hai.

Geet:Aur apke best friend MSK ji?

MK:Vo ji uske pass kaha time hai humare liye vo toh apni pinky ke saath hoga.

Geet:Oh soo sad.Chalo me apke Dost MSk ki barabri toh nahi kar sakti hai but apko company jaroor de sakti ho.

MK: KITTE POORI KITTE PARANTHA[kaha poori aur kaha parantha]Khol bari behja baliya[open the door and sit.]

At canteen

Geet:Toh ap kya lege

MK:Bus coffee mat magana aur kuch bi chalega.

Geet:Kyu?

MK:Vo darsal jitni bi ladkio ne mere saath coffee pe hai,coffee ke katam hote hi vo muje propose kar deti hai.

Geet:Oh acha ji.Hm wase isme ladkiyo ki kya galati hai,ap hai hi handsome.

Mk:Bus handsome hi ho?

Geet:Nahi stylish ho

MK:Sirf stylish?

Geet:Hmm nahi educated bi ho.

Mk:Sirf educated?

Geet:Nahi dil ke bi ache ho.

Mk:Sird dil ka acha?

Geet:Bus sab kuch ho muje nahi pata.Sach me tumse bato me koi nahi jeet sakta

At the same time geet see MSK coming towards them.

Geet:MK dekho MSK

Mk turn to see MSk coming towards them.

Mk[mumer]:Lo a gayi kabaab me hadi

Geet:Hi MSK

No reply

GEEt:MSK

Geet:Mk inhe kya hua hai pucho na.

MSK come and sit on another chair silently.

Geet:MSK ap bol kyu nahi rahe?

MSK start crying.

Mk[mumer]:Ab ye kya drama karne lag gaya?

Geet get realy concerned and go near msk chair.She keep her hand on his shoulder.

Geet:Kya hua MSk?

MSk get up from his seat crying and hug geet immediately.Mk get shocked.He seprate them.

Mk:Kya hua tume kyu ladkio ki tarah ro rahe ho?

Msk again hud her.Geet was in shock,she unable to think anything.Mk again seprate them.

MK:kya tum booto ki tarah chip rahe ho batao toh sahi kya hua.

MSK:Chod gayi yaar.

GeetKon:?

MSK:Pinky

Mk:KOn pinky?

MSK[in stern tone to mk]:MOGE wali.

Msk again start crying fakely

Geet:But why?

MSK;Vo usse koi foreigner mil gaya ji.

Geet:Disgusting.

Msk:Fir mane bi keh diya usse TERE BINA KEHRA JATT MARJO GA[i dont die without u]

Geet:Chalo left it,jo ho gaya vo ho gaya apko usse bhi jyada acha ladki milegi.

Geet:Ajj hum lunch ke liya chale?

MSK[excitely held geet hand in his hiand]:Hum?

MK [interuppt]:Hum means hum.

Msk:Oh hum.

Geet:Ok lets go.

Precap:New twist[so guys their is 2 twist coming.One is in next update and one after some update.So ready for it]

Waiting for ur feedbacks😛
Edited by -knirwal- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
msk bhi kam nahi hai...lol..

continue soon,...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update👏
Continue soon😊

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