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Posted: 13 years ago
heyy read ur ff in one go
its really awesome
mind blowing
too good
pls add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
iniya puthandu vazhthukkal



those who have read muskans dreams through fb,would have read my cmnt there...
but ,i think i want to share here also...
meri kahaani...
mei yek middle class ki hoon..
jahaan beta aur beti ki fark hota hai..
mei tho sirf schooling ki hain...
mein apne bhaiyaon se zyadha padai pe topper hoon..
fir bhi..muje upper padne nehi diya...
meri naniki aakri kwaish thi muje shadhi karke dekna..
meri shadhi hogayi..jab mein attara saal ki thi...
muje shadhi ki barein mein koi kwaab nehi thi na koi expectations..
meri pati ka umar tees tha jab humari shaadhi hui..
par such kahoon..wo heera hai meraliye..
muje meri maikake zyaadha pyaar karthi hai..
shadhi ki teen mehi ne baadh mei pregnant hui..
jab mei 7 mahine ki ti meri nani margayi..
wo bohut shock tha..ek week ke baath mei checking keliye gayi thi..
meri bp upper tha 160/200
muje hospital mei admit karwaya..
uske baad kya hua muje nehi patha...
i was always drowzy..
15days baad jab koi improvement nehi hui.meri maa..unki sheher lekar gayi..
wahaan ki dr..bathayi..bohut zyadha medicines di hui muje..aur scan bi ki..
aurpatha chala mera bacha mera ped mei mari hui..aur muje wahaan admit kargayi..
muje sari medicines lene mein mana kardi..n i got my concious after 20 days..
drs..ne ye bhi kahaa muje zinda rehne ki chances bi kam hein..
aur bacha ka bahaar nikalek liye operation ki tayaari bi shuru kardi...
it was a miracle...muje dard hogayi..aur mei normal delivery bi ki..
that made my life out of danger..
muje ye nehi patha tha meri baby was no more..
all kept me in illusion that my baby is in icu..as it is preborn.
i saw my hubby crying near me..mard ko rothei hui hum ne dekha hai kya..jab meine poocha ..
he said he was scared of losing me..it is still in my mind as a clear photo.
phir i came to know..the truth..
the other reasons was i was under age ,not yet healthy to carry a baby
n was affected by jaundice..that i lost my baby..
uske baad agar meine koi bache ko dekh loon aur bahon mei loon..meri peeche aurat ye baathe karne lagi usei bacha math dho...uska boori nasaar lagegi..
do u know how bad it feels...our heart will be bleeding inside..
i can understand ur pain..
after 3 years i got conceived again..
now ,i cant enjoy it..
muje har pal dar tha..ye bacha teek ho..
at 9th month i was totally in depression..
dr.ne shout ki thi..bp.is 120/160..ur baby is under weight..
kya kaugi muje nehi patha..gain weight
15days i ate icecream,nuts whatever i could,n filled my tummy..
i gave birth to a girl...she vwas 2,2kg..
that was the sweetest moment i felt relief...meri sari kasht door hogayi..now i have 2 girls..
i never feel i have a boy..all of them now to say y dont u try for boy...
mei maa bani wahi mereliye kaafi hai..
boy r girl kya fark padtha...
U made me cry n i think i made others also like that ...
dont worry u will also be blessed by a baby soon...
this year will be ur precious year...
u will give me the gud news...
i'll pray for u...
un veetil intha aandu mazhalai kural nichayam ketkum...
dont lose hope...have trust in god..
HAPPY NEW YEAR...
..
THANKS VALLI FOR UR WISHES N PRAYER
WHERE U FROM (RU A TAMILIAN B'CAZ UR HINDI WRITTING N VERY GOOD )
attara saal MEANS HOW MANY YRS DEAR (I CAN UNDERSTAND HINDI VERY WELL BUT NOT GOOD WITH NUMBERS DA 😊)
IN THE END OF THE YR U MADE ME CRY😭 BUT U GAVE ME STRENGTH ALSO
THANX DEAR ,ME N MY HUBBY ALSO HAVE 8 YRS DIFFERECE BUT MUST SAY HE IS THE BEST HUBBY IN THE WORLD ,I THINK I GOT A GOOD FRIEND IN U ,THANU VERY MUCH FOR UR FRIENDSHIP
GIVE MY WISHES N BLESSING (KISSES ALSO) TO UR KUTTIES
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Posted: 13 years ago
really feel sorry for meera. firstly maan does not love her n now she is going to die.
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow lovely parts !!!!
valls akka ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
very heart-warming...loving this ff...u write really well...Thanks😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART-19

Hai friends,

Thank you all for your support .Special thanks for my friends who clicked like buttons and commented my updates.. Please encouraging me in the same way'😊I love you all.😉

Maan made his tent n arranged his stuffs in a jungle near a river far away from delhi...he laid his back on the shore.the place looked greeny n peaceful.the sun was setting down'it was a lovely sight..he sighed..for the past few weeks,he is not his ownself..He thought the past incidents with geet n meera..

I have never behaved rude with meera.then why I shouted at her like that..meera is a gud girl.she has been always supportive..she never questioned at my behavior..even,when I married her,it was devs decision..she did not oppose it..or questioned it. In every ways,she fulfilled her duty as bahu n bhabhi..n my wife..when I kept her away from me after marriage also,she did not question me..when I accepted her near me also she did not question me'its always our decision'its always dev n me ,who dumped our decision n she went on with us'but,now'..whats happening to me'.why I'm not peaceful..why I'm having that urge of touching geet..why I want her to be with me..this type of feeling I have never had before'why I'm missing geet now too..why I'm always looking for her'

Why I'm always thinking about her..whats this feeling,that's attracting me to her..what type of lust is this'

He took the axe n stated to cut the wood near by with full force.he thought his anger would drain .but his anger grew wild.he cannot stop thinking geet..he kneeled on the floor,when his body gave up'he was breathing heavily.his body was sweaty like he has taken a bath..he went to the river n started to swim'this went on for two days..he could not name his new found feeling for geet'He took more two days to calm himself..He decided to stay away from geet for some more time'once he reached delhi,he will make an excuse n go away somewhere else for few more days..i will take meera with me..so,we will spend time with each other..if meera is with me I'll forget geet..i'll apologize to meera for what I did..n I'll take my promise back'.my promise will make more distance between us..

Delhi.

Geet was also fighting with her inner turmoil..At the same time,she thought of meer..who is married to maan who doesn't love her'they are behaving like husband n wife in sake of others..n keeping the relation as duty.. when geet was back to her regular works n studies,she temperorily forgot maan

Meera dev n.. geet went to office daily.they attended the meetings that maan had to attend..geet made the presentations n files prepared perfect for them..it was very easy for them to handle the clients. After knowing about the truth from meera,geet moved more friendly with meera n dev also..she now no more think him as a flirt.she assisted him in official works.

Meera was waiting for maans return. She knew maan will return only when he gets out of his confusions...But, geet was feeling better without maans presence..after that dance,she fel t shy n embarrassed to face him..

Meera ,geet n dev were in meeras cabin..

Geet was drinking water after the lengthy presentation given few minutes before.meera was in a deep thought.

Dev,

Yes meer..

How will you propose to the girl u love...so.now,act n show me.. i want u to be married soon i cant wait anymore..

Geet split all the water..n started to cough.

Geet..be careful..dev patted her.

She looked at them both..

What?

She nodded in no..but,the look said she is shocked..meera laughed..

I know why are u shocked..yehina'dev is in love..

Yes mam..dev sir aur love..i cant believe it..

He is a flirt,but not serious..that was fun,which wil not hurt others...but u know,he is not opening his mouth before his real love..till now he has not proposed her'what to do with this idiot..

Ha ha so funny'I'm trying'but,what to do'when she comes before me'I lose my words..

Dev sir..dont take much time'what if someother propose to her before u..

U too geet..u r also talking like bro'meer,help me na what should I do..

(geets st:how much I avoid thinking about maan sir..but he comes in words too.to remind me about him..)

Go n ask her for a date..

Kya..no.i cant..i'm saying na .I'm going speechless when she is before me..

Dev sir,who is that lucky girl?

You know her geet..Dr.naina..he said shyly..

Mam..see dev sir is blushing.like a girl..n dr. naina she is really sweet..u both will make a good pair..

Dev..first u go n get a ring..come n meet me at taj ..we will talk there'

Ok..he hugged meera tightly n went out jumping in joy..

Isko tho aaj propose karna hi padega'wait n see dev..

Mam..i think u r planning something..

Yes..n u will help me..

Anything for u mam..

Come lets go to taj..

They both went to taj n booked a hall'.they decorated with red roses ,ribbons ,heart shaped balloons n scented candles..they ordered dev n naina's favourite foods..

They decorated a table for them two with red roses..

They looked for the last time..every thing looked perfect..they hi5ed each other..

They msged dev to come to 2nd floor..

Mam..how will naina come here..

Wait..she took the phone n called naina..

Naina..please come soon to taj hotel hall 2nd floor..

She cut the phone..without letting her speak n switched off the phone..

Now we'll hide n wait for laila majnu..it will be fun..

But mam..it will not be nice to hide n see their privacy..

Privacy'u know nothing about dev..when u will see u will know..

They heared the door opening..it was naina..

She was breathing heavily..(she thought meera is in pain n she needs help..poor na..meera made her think that way..and it worked..she came running there)

Naina..stood shocked at the decorations..

Next came Dev'he too was shocked .then he realized it is meeras plan..

Naina turned ..seeing dev she rooted at her place..

The arrangements said everything..

Dev..

Naina..wo..wo..mein mein..

Haan..

Wo..mein.mein..

Meera said to geet..geet see this is him'a goat..mei mein k kar aaj raath kaatdengi..

Both were suppressing their laughter..

Dev..

Haan naina..wo mein..what I was saying..

U did not say anything..u r telling only mei mei..i'm listening. tell me..

Wo mein..

He took the box from his packet..

Naina was extremely happy..atlast he got the willpower to say his love.. she was longing for it.

Wo ..mein..ye,..mein..(omg..y I'm stammering..y my words r not coming out)

Naina decided..if he has put a step forward then y should not she take the next step..

Dev..

Haan..

Dev..

Haan..

do u want to propose me..

Haan.

Then y r u waiting..she gave her hand to him..

Dev was blank..he told her he is here to propose her..n when she gave her hand..he went totally blank in joy.he took the ring n slipped in it..their eyes were enough to tell their love..but naina wants to hear it..

Dev..now also u will not say anything..

Haan wo mein..

Geet n meera came out from their place giggling n clapping their hands..

They left their hands n kept distance..they both were blushing badly.

Haan wo mein mein..kya kehrahi thi..haan..

Dev loves you naina..n don't expect him to say.darpok kahika...he can only say mein mei..bakhri ki thara..

Meer.stop mimicking me.dev hid himself behind her in shy..

Naina..he will never say how much he loves u..this fool is loving u for a long time n he did not say it to u..i think u too..

Naina nodded yes..

Then ok..lets go geet ..humara kam hogaya..we are giving u space..but don't take long time..

N u both will propose each other..then only u both will get out of this room.

Congrats both of u..geet winked n they both turned red.

After meera n geet left too'they both were looking at each other..n dev said only mei..mei..

When naina got angry with his mei mei..she shouted'

Dev,will u say I love u r I will say that I love u'

She blushed at what she said'n dev was shocked the way she proposed n was taken by her anger also.hesaid..

I..i..i.. love u naina..

She hugged him..

I love u too..

He looked at her lips..she looked at the floor..he lifted her chin n made her see him..

He neared her to kiss.but stopped..what will she think..its our first day..what if she goes mad at me...

naina was disappointed..

there was a melodious song playing behind..they both danced together

They went to the table.. '..they had their candle light dinner..

Dev hold her hands'he have gained some courage to talk to naina after spending time with her..

he took the rose n gave it to her

Naina..I love u .I want to spend the rest of the life with u..will u b there with me..

Yes dev..from day 1 when I saw u ,I'm in love with u..i was expecting this day daily..u made it today.

Thanks to meera..she has done all this..

Matlab..u did not do this?

Nope..

u..u..u..coward'she started to chase him to hit n he escaped from her..naina was about to fall,dev grabbed her by her waist n she landed on him..

both were panting..their breathe tickled their senses..naina neared him n closed her eyes..it was an invitation for him..he took her lips with his..he kissed her gently with full of passion n she responded him with equal passion..they broke their kiss to get oxygen..i love u dev

I love u 2 naina..

cant propose to ur love..went behind ur bhabhi. To help u...she hit him lovingly.

she is not only my bhabhi'but my best friend..so only she helped in my love..

ya..i agree..i want to say u about meera'I don't know whether she has said this to u or not..

nainas cell rang..that was an emergency..she left.him without saying meera was sick..

(I know guys u all are angry at me as ,there was less maneet part..but,I want to lighten the situation after meera's flashback..i cant give maneet soon. at this time.so made dev naina part..this is also necessary to move the story..hope u enjoyed this too).

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Edited by valli22 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

NO MAANEET

MAINE SOCHA THA LONGGG COMMENT KARUGI LAKIN AB KIS PE KARU CHALO THODI BASHING HI KAR LETE HAI MAAN IS STUPID JAB DEKHO BHAAG JATA HAI BHUT HO GAYI MEER KI MHANTA WE WANT HOT HOT SCENES OF MAANEET
Edited by muraadlovesdd - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved meera n devs bonding.
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely dear
ossum parts
waiting for maneet dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part dear
and its k wecan understand for taking story forward u added this part
will wait for maneet
cont soon

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