Five Words to a Stranger || MG ||ch.5 pg 18 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
UOHHH LA LA!
What a phast updater... and i thought i'd have to get a sugarcane for wacking ur ass!😳😆
Anywho.. Maan and Geet's talk actually made me have tears..😭
why? I don't know.. and don't ask...😆
anywho.. i love the way the story is progressing..
what a heart-broken geet! 🥺What a dumbass Maan!
I'm waiting for the confrontation eagarly.. which means u gotta update ... phast!
ohh.. I didn't get a pm... is it cuz ur lazzy😡
What would have happened if I didn't see that u updated
*Sigh* i forgive ff writers easily.. so i let u goo!
Anywho... update soon and send out pms!😳
~Jessica
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
wow awesome love it ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33


Its so different 😛
I'm loving it !! please don't stop updating . You really write Fab ⭐️
As I said its a quite unusual approach to the familiar Geet and Maan.

Loved it 👍🏼
Continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34


hey Faria...update was marvellous...I loved it...

Maan is now behaving rudely with Geet...and this is hurting Geet because she feels for him...

waiting for next part...continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
fab update dear...loved it 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: spvd

part 2
wow like the way its going...
Geet has always been taught by Maan...
and Maan was so curious to know who the guy was in her dreams...lol...
cont soon dear...


Thanks for liking and the comment.

Originally posted by: krati5

she is supposed to write to some stranger. nd she told all happenings WD NAMES...


awesome update


Oops. My mistake, I've edited it. But the italics are not part of the letter :)

Originally posted by: walkintomylifex

Woaaahh he was 4'3 & tall!
M&G are cute :) but they were like kids & having dreams of that kind? 😳
Help me out hereee I'm maha confused.


She was 11 in the dream scene. Kids these days!
But to be honest, I think 11 is the perfect age because really in England and most other countries you start having sex ed when you're nine. And don't tell me you were all innocent and 'pure' at that age 😆

Originally posted by: Lip-a-Licious

that was fab Faria ⭐️


Thanks Babe


Will do

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

awesome ... superb ...


thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

p.s. can u plzzz ... use a dark font ... it will be easy to read ... this grey font was very difficult to read ...

Thanks for the comment ad okay, I'll use a darker shade of grey :)

Originally posted by: kadydeep

U better finish the fic this time missy 😡


Fab start to the story...Man Geet seems super phaast 😆...
she kissed her prince when she was 5 , shared her wet dream at 11 and curious , hot and bothered about all the sexting Maan did 😲

Tara as in Naintara is his step-mom 😕

post soon 🤓


Chill Mum I will 😆
She didn't actually kiss him, he awoke 😆 11 is an okay age I guess :| Kids these days!
And she was 15 then. Most 15 year olds sext, even though it's technically illegal until you're 18 (I think)

Yes NT is step-mom.

Thanks for the comment :)


Originally posted by: _Jess_

UOHHH LA LA!

What a phast updater... and i thought i'd have to get a sugarcane for wacking ur ass!😳😆
Anywho.. Maan and Geet's talk actually made me have tears..😭
why? I don't know.. and don't ask...😆
anywho.. i love the way the story is progressing..
what a heart-broken geet! 🥺What a dumbass Maan!
I'm waiting for the confrontation eagarly.. which means u gotta update ... phast!
ohh.. I didn't get a pm... is it cuz ur lazzy😡
What would have happened if I didn't see that u updated
*Sigh* i forgive ff writers easily.. so i let u goo!
Anywho... update soon and send out pms!😳
~Jessica

I only updated because I had already written it before LOL. Do not expect it all the time.
LMAO, tears? You must cry easily.
She's not really heart-broken, more disgusted 😆
No, it's because I do't have you on this account and for the next few updates I'm sending them on this until i get enough people on my new one.

Originally posted by: monikaseth

wow awesome love it ...

Thank you

Originally posted by: drashsree100



Its so different 😛
I'm loving it !! please don't stop updating . You really write Fab ⭐️
As I said its a quite unusual approach to the familiar Geet and Maan.

Loved it 👍🏼
Continue soon ...


Thank you. Glad you liked it.
My writing style is absolutely appalling in my P.OV 😆
Trying to get into a mind of today;s teenagers.


Originally posted by: tushti-kiran



hey Faria...update was marvellous...I loved it...

Maan is now behaving rudely with Geet...and this is hurting Geet because she feels for him...

waiting for next part...continue soon


Thank you.
I haven't actually explored their relationship yet, I wouldn't she's hurt because of that. She's just disgusted and hurt because he shouted at her.


Originally posted by: honeygrape

fab update dear...loved it 😊


Thank you :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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HEY GREAT START
PLS DONT DISCONTINUE IN THE MIDDLE
PM WHEN YOU UPDATE
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
the story has some thing in it...which make me feel it's great
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: punam2712

HEY GREAT START

PLS DONT DISCONTINUE IN THE MIDDLE
PM WHEN YOU UPDATE


Thanks Sweety, I will just add my username on the first pose :)

Originally posted by: shrutizlyf

the story has some thing in it...which make me feel it's great


Aww Thank you 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
Best friends in childhood...drifted apart as they grew older. Uff!!

How old are they now waise?


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