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Posted: 13 years ago
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aha Geet is sooo spoiled
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats !!!!!!! 4 d new ff ...

thnx 4 d pm ...


interesting start ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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another addition in our maaneets family ff. loved it. loved the start... spoiled girl... now wnats to see how our sweetheart will deal with her... waiting for stroy to go head
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nyc intro nd interesting...well lets c hw maan will handle her😃
Plz continue it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ ytanuja

thanx dear😃 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: kirti_fiji

nice one dear, love the style of writing, please continue😛


thanx dear .But I always think I m jst at learning stage😃 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: t_areeb

seems she only thinks about herself

cant wait for their meeting



This is a story bout two opposite shores..how destiny binds them ...n they balance their extreme opposite personalities thanx 😳 😃
Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Dearies meet directly our Sherni Geet Handa n Biba Munda (good guy) Maan Singh Khuraana

I hop u ll lik .plz do comment n hit lik .U want more tell me .

Khuraana Mension

About 8:30 am

Charcters to b introduced

Maan Singh Khuraana

Savitri Devi (Daddi Maa)

Nakul (servant )

Daddi Maan entered in Maan's room .He was still sleeping

Daddi Maa: I think I shouldn't disturb Maan'even last nite he came back late'kitni saari meetings thi..n he is dealing every thing single handedly ."

She was about to leave when she found something .

Daddi Maa: oh to yeh baat hai ..Maan aap jag rahhe hai..but making me fool.Hum bhi apki Daddi hai '(she thought n slowly moved toward bad ).

Daddi Maa : I should let him sleep.My boy was so tired.I ll ask Addi to postpone meeting .But he was saying Client want to prepone meeting now.Abb kya karre hum .If deal goes from our hand let it go'Aaram bhi jaroori hai (She said this aloud)

Maan : Daddi Maa main so nahi rahha .I m ready When I saw u coming to my room.to maine socha kyo na Daddi Maa k sath thoda mazaak kar lu .I m ready n was jst going downstairs when I saw u .But what u r saying clients want to prepone. I should go ? (Maan said in one breathe)

Daddi Maa:Calm down beta. If u made fool out of ur Daddi .Hum bhi aap hi ki Daddi Hai.I observed u sleeping with ur shoes .n this was jst a prank.no body calls to prepone meeting .( Daddi Maa laughed)

Maan(he gav his killer smile): Ya Daddi Maa 'U always caught me

Daddi Maa(put her hand on his head): ok dear let us go downstairs .Breakfast is ready to serve

Maan: Ji Daddi Maa

N both went to dinning area.Where Nakul was arranging plates on table

Daddi Maa: Nakul I want tea not coffee .

Nakul : Ji Daddi Maa

But at the moment plumber came to repair some water tank pipes.So Nakul was needed there.House keeping department was given to him.

Daddi Maa: Nakul tum jayo Vinod banna degga ..tea for me

Nakul: Per Daddi Maa Vinod Market gaya hai..n other servants r doing house cleaning coz Diwali is coming .(Nakul made confused face what to do now?)

Maan: Nakul tum jayo'I ll prepare tea for Daddi Maa .

Nakul : Maan Sir aap ?

But Maan sent him with plumber coz there he was much needed .

Daddi Maa: Beta I manage.Hum banna laytay hai ?(she got up from her chair)

Maan: Daddi Maa .Let me do .U always care for us But give a chance'(He held Daddi Maa's hand forced her to sit back)

Daddi Maa : Ok beta (she smiled)

Maan prepared tea for Daddi Maa n after breakfast left for his office.A hectic day ahead

Handa House

Randeep went to her girl's room.Geet was rubbing her eyes sitting on bed .Her new tab was on floor Under her one sleeper.Costly mobile phone broken near the door. Comforter hanging down from bed to floor. For Randeep this was not a new thing ..an everyday affair.

Rano : Baby what is this ? All things here n there.n why u threw phone on Preeto.She was injured .(she said softly )

Geet: Mom that dumbo Preeto.I always ask her .knock my door before coming.But she never follows.Aur patta hai apko I requested my HOD (head of department )to postpone my training schedule for 2 weeks. But he refused. There ll b a great nite out at Diwali.We friends have great plans .So mom tell me how can I take that phone in my hand ..jiss se my HOD gave me such a bad news ." (She shouted n started to cry)

Rano : Oh dear this is the reason. But u know baby ur whole assessment depends upon ur work as a trainee.Ya I know u came home after three months u are also rite.OK let it go.Get up a take ur bath .(She took her girl in arms n kissed her on forehead)

Geet: No mom let me sleep'.stupid HOD n Preeto ..mujhe sonne bhi nahi diya( n without listening to Rano she again slipped in comfortable)

Rano : Iska kush nahi ho sakta (she took deep breath n left room )



how is this ..plz dearies comment n hit lik plz


Lov


Jass😳

Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ohhh thats so so nice, loved it

thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nyc part...Luvd it...nd thanx 4 pm...😊
Continue soon...

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