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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update. Still not liking Geet being so so rude to everyone. I know it is not her real self but rather than shouting and being rude to everyone I would actually want her to sit and think about the situation. May be not even talk but not talk rudely. It is kind of destroying her character.

I hope Maan amazes her with what all he is able to do without even being able to see. Like she was saying that what is the use of looking beautiful in a saree when you have a husband who cannot see. I hope Maan shocks her by giving him details about her, like the fragrance she is wearing, about her hair, and things that she is wearing so precisely that she starts getting attracted to his words.

Please update soon. And no no, not just one update a date, we want more, please at leaset 2 a day, please please pretty please

Edited by anshimanshi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting for next part ... cant wait to read more of this lovely story ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
i have like 20 min free.. lol so supper update.. lucky i have all this part already typed...
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Posted: 13 years ago


I am loving this FF Safi...it is amazing...unique concept...

right now Geet is in shock ...first her husband is blind...second she was unaware of it...third her dreams are broken...fourth she was decieved by her own parents as if she was burden on them and to get rid of her they married her keeping her in dark...her reaction to whole situation is natural.
slowly she will realize that blind person also has right to live and to be loved...and in whole of this mess Maan is not at all faulty...
thanx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey
gr8 part..
cont.sooon
thanks for pm dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mahsoos
part 12





A small noise of the close door gave her the hint he have left. She quickly changes in to a pink sari, bringing out the beauty. Her eyes sadly looked at the mirror, what was the point? He can't see. She whispered to her self, hiding her tears. No matter what may happen, scar is always a scar...

Maan stood there for a while, feeling a box, his dad have send as his wedding gift. He wanted to ask geet, but was there any point?will she even listen? Geet walked in and he puts the box way. Geet looked at him curiously for a moment then the box then back at him, he was wearing a black suit with blue border, the hair pushed back, his m shape lips was looking prominent, the rough cheek gave her another image. Geet looked way. Annoyed how she was checking him out and more annoyed why he was looking so beautiful.
"I am ready!"
Geet walked out before Maan, she did not look at anyone, while everyone starred at her.
Anni, dev and vicky was already in the limo, waiting for maan & geet. Nun have expected geet to show up but they were more then happy when she had.

Geet came in and sat far corner of the limo, maan on the other side and other three sibling somewhere at the back.
"thanks bhavi. It means a lot that you have come" vicky smiled, waiting for an answer but there was no reply except a forceful uncomfortable smile. The 30 minute drive was dead silent. Barely any one spoke.

Eventually they arrived at the party. Mr John patiently waiting for his children, specially maan & geet, he was unaware about anything else. So there was exception of love between them.
"oh here is my children mr mehra" he laughed like a Santa, a very big over weight man, maan was the first one to get out and he gave him a big bear hug.
"how are you dad?"
"how are you?" he questions back, looking at his Daughter in law. "and this beautiful girl is my son maan wife. Mrs geet khurana. My daughter in law" he spoke proudly. Geet again forcefully smiled, keeping her self close to maan.

Anni dev and vicky flowed, dev supporting anni...

It was a grand party, beautiful from each direction. The class was clearly reflected from each details. John looked at geet and smiles... "he is all yours beta" he wanted see the couple enjoying there time, not the dad supporting the son when he have a beautiful wife.
Geet uncomfortably smiled and hesitated to put her hand around him. Her eyes stared at his long slim arm, which was rather inviting.




Maan did not expect her to be there, with him, so it was surprising enough that she is with him, and more then surprised when she slides her hand around his arm. Suppressing her warm body against his. He tiled her head to the left a bit, just few inch way from her face. He could feel the sweet hot air from her nose. He hard the plop noise of the lips parting to add the extra air. It was rather odd how each gash rushed through his body with an incredible speed. He stiffens the body in order to ignore the new found sensation and concentrate on the party, feel the atmosphere...

Geets puppy eyes gazed at his side, she was rather shocked, this is the 2nd time she have been this close. The lips closed it self again, drinking saliva then her gaze went to his non blinking eyes. She nearly freed him and backed way but kept her self suppressed. Close by seeing some people heading towards them.

"maan, what a pleasant surprise. And this beautiful lady must be your wife."

Maan looks at the direction of the voice. He reconsised it very well. "mr Patel."

"must say mam your husband have very good memory and ear. We only met once maan."
"yes " geet sighly looked down, hiding her self even more...party like this wasn't her this at all...

Geet just looked at him with surprise. A supper blind man. Her mouth fell little open while her brain was just thoughtless. Nun of there conversation was entering her ear. She just starred at him without giving the thought a second thought.
"geet... Geet..." maan gently whispered to catch her attention. He guessed she was lost somewhere, again in deep thought but didn't realize she was only staring at him..

Maan tried to feel her close body that was glued to him. He wasn't sure was it because of the new people or was it because she want to be close.

"hu?"
"they saying by!"
Geet looks at the couple then maan again, rather confused where exactly in conversation they were.
"goodby" she looked at them with big eyes, clearly showed how confusing she is.

Later on the evening both walked in silent, only thing maan could feel was the oddness between them, everyone was busy while geet waged to walk out have some fresh air. He could possibly not leave her alone so he staid with her.

"ham ghar kab jaenge?"
She silently asked. Looking down. The evening every couple only made her feel shame and depressed, specially how they were lost in one another eyes, so much love. She was jealousy and it was opening the horrible wound.
"if you wane we can go home now."
Geet nodes with tears , "can we?..."

Somewhere the party was good thing, gave her some fresh air to think little about the recent situation. She hated her family, and she hated her husband more for tolerating her rude behavior. Coming in to the party just open her mind a little that how isolated she have been at the same time pain covered her body how rude she have been...

Maan called the driver to take the limo out and come and collect them.

Khurana house was filled with family gathering, mostly everyone busy with different activity.

Maan walks in glowed by geet, avantika more then happy that she actually went somewhere.

Geet again walked upstairs without talking to anyone ... maan clearly felt the tense again. He flowed her in to the bedroom and after freshen up maan stood by the balcony arm crossed. Geet went straight to bed with tears rolling down, wimping. It worried maan. His heart felt restless along with geet. He wasn't sure how to comfort or how to ease this situation. He could feel the torment along with the tense and the silent building up between them.
The chili air touched his warm skin, reacting to create a sooth. His heart felt heavy, something he did not like, or something he rather not want to think about. He closed his eyes, adding more darkness to the dark eyes, making no different, it was senseless in some extent. It was senseless in either way.

Maan walked back in, taking few file and started to read and analyze. Geet was sitting right opposite. She have came earlier, observing him from the sofa to the balcony. She made no movement sat there like a statue, observing him. He looked straight at her, even knowing he can't see threw those eyes and it only made her feel he wasn't removing his gaze from his beautiful wife.
His long hand analyzed Brail which was alien to geet. The long puppy Hazel brown eyes observed with immense concentration. It oddly felt normal but she didn't want to think it was.
It wasn't until about 30 minute later when maans voice broke which made geet fall out of the sofa.
"geet!"
The payel bashed against the floor, dropping from her hand, while her frightening eyes looked at him with shock. How did he know she was there?
"may I ask why you sitting there like a ghost?"
"I thought you can only here me by payel!" she made a baby face



she picked it up from the floor thenl looking at him fearfully.
"do you need anything?"
"no! I was going."
Geet felt embarrassed she have been sitting there for past 30 minute thinking ... God knows what she was thinking. She takes her lazy body up and walks out, leaving maan wonder. She was weird.
His face turned to the door direction, he could still feel how her gaze was on him, it was a guess, 50: 50


"you sure you don't need anything?"
Geet was indeed looking at him and was running towards the exit. Her eyes widens further and she decided to run...
"be careful with that door stand!" geet spines around to look for a stand and she bumped right ahead, smacked her head hard, the whole room started to spine and thumped on the floor...

maan panicky stood up and hurried towards her...


well... i know how many people hating geet...
but its only 4th day in... and you have to bare with her...
it won't be easy to fall for someone...
you have to bare with me...🤢
the rudness... we can see its not her but let her time to calm down..
its not easy when you here your husband is blind and no one bothered to tell you... even when you know its no one fault its natural to bring out your frustration

again... emm... well.. more scared and not sure how that went
please comment and tell me how yu finding it...
and do press the little like button😳
love safi...

Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
me first
well... i know how many people hating geet...
but its only 4th day in... and you have to bare with her...
it won't be easy to fall for someone...
that is not geets fault
anyone can react like this
who is having dreams for life
and have to face this situation will definately go mad
but now she is trying to understand maan
she is definately attracted towards him
maan is dam good in his each skill
but i think unaware of important ralation in marriage 😉




for new concept
Edited by pritm - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hyyy rabba..me second...love it alot.i just love ur ff...OH..im IN LOVE WITH THIS MAAN😳.😳...hhaayyii..hhaayii..looking forward...and wow..here maan is blind but...but geet is acting like a blind person.lol...😆😆
Edited by RukhluvMaan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
haai


this is great
geet pain is vulnerable
great one
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear loved it

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