NEW FF- Mahsoos. THREAD 1 - Page 3

ohh i luvd it Keyama... 🤗 ❤️ it was soft n smooth like the music that maan played... the story swayed in its breeze... beautiful... 😊 😃 👏 ❤️
i luvd d way u used Muski di's poem... 👏
den i luv d tenderness in Maan... its refreshin to see him tender... 😃 😳

loving it already😳

Originally posted by: angili

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This is the best opening of an ff i have ever read it is simple marvelous
So geet Will Marty maan and maan is blind good i would love to see how is this short Will debelop
Calling the music pice geet was just awesome
I love you sari and tour writings tank you

that was sooo lovely comment... now i havent done anything like this before.. so bit scared expressing a blind mans feeling now thats a tuffy.. me gn try my best... thank you so much...

do you know a blind man from birth cant dream like us... me so exited as i am doing research on it hehe
xxx

Originally posted by: Abreshmina

ohh i luvd it Keyama... 🤗 ❤️ it was soft n smooth like the music that maan played... the story swayed in its breeze... beautiful... ❤️
i luvd d way u used Muski di's poem... 👏
den i luv d tenderness in Maan... its refreshin to see him tender... 😃 😳

:D ty sweety.. the poem was amazing.. me can't read that well but i loved the meaning once understood.. you just feel for it

LOVE YOU MUSKI for that and love you abre 2 :D
xx

Awesome start ... Can't wait to see how story progress
One question: does geet family know abt maan condition just wondering?

Nice beginning. Can't wait to read more!

Originally posted by: komlika

Awesome start ... Can't wait to see how story progress
One question: does geet family know abt maan condition just wondering?

thank you :D

& you have to wait and find out :)

Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE

thank you :D

& you have to wait and find out :)

Nahi ( total drama queen style) how could you keya... U know now I won't able to concentrate on my reading 😭 chalo no problem will wait after all do I have any other choice

Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE

that was sooo lovely comment... now i havent done anything like this before.. so bit scared expressing a blind mans feeling now thats a tuffy.. me gn try my best... thank you so much...

do you know a blind man from birth cant dream like us... me so exited as i am doing research on it hehe
xxx

Well it is logical he doesn't have a graphical conscious or subconscious so he can't form images like us in his dreams

Originally posted by: komlika

Nahi ( total drama queen style) how could you keya... U know now I won't able to concentrate on my reading 😭 chalo no problem will wait after all do I have any other choice

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sorry.. but surly will try to update everyday :)