NEW FF- Mahsoos. THREAD 1 - Page 20

waiting for geet reaction on maan's blindness

"I hard your marriage is fixed. We are going around my new sister in laws house soon with all the cloths and jewelry."

"I care the least. I am still rather confused why she have agreed to merry a blind man."

"that's because she is a nice girl in heart. Why do you take everything negatively?"

"I don't. Everything is so negative about this wedding. I felt like I am about to ruin a girls life."

"this is not at all true. She is a beautiful girl, and we promise you she will keep you happy."

"wish I know the word beautiful!"

Dev keeps quit. He have spoken to one of the biggest eye doctor in the world in UK... try after try, yet no result. Nothing at all. "I am sure one day you will see the light" he smiled sadly... "and anyway, there are nothing great to see. It's selfish. The world is very selfish. Nothing special. Sometime I wish I was blind."
Maan slaps dev tight across the face. This man always have surprised him, how he exactly knew where his face would be and how perfectly it encountered with his cheek. "don't you ever talk like that."
"big brother is always a big brother" dev smiled.

The evening dinner table felt with tease and ear pulling of one another. Whole family, maan, anny, dev, avantika, grandma, along with many cousins of maan sat across the 30 chair table. It was feast and mostly everyone came around to help with the wedding preparation.

"maan, eat little more, you will be very bored later on and flowed by 5 days. We won't let you do anything."
One of maan aunty teased. Everyone was so exited, rather over welled with the fact geet have accepted the marriage.
"this geet avantika, I tell you she will only bring happiness!"
Maan ignored there talk. Acted like a defe that he can't here.
"don't ignore us maan" another aunty teased. "we know. How sharp is your hearing."
"I think I had enough of this dinner," maan eventually spat out. He pushed the chair back with a loud noise, stood up and made his way towards the room that laid next to the stair.
"I have her phone number, would you like to call?" aunty shouts across over the hall way. Every one started to giggle. Avantika nodes her head negatively, trying to be understanding towards her son, but it all fell in vain.w3q

3 days after...

"do you think he would like pink or blue?"
She pulls her leg up, hanging up in mid air while her body relaxed on the bed.
"blue, men loves blue." anjali told geet...
"blue it is..."

She have scanned over Internet, asking all her male mates what does men likes, even in some extent her grandpa. But most of the time he gave example of old boring things which she rather not do. It would never impress a modern men like maan.

"have you brought any lingers?" anjali opens her big mouth again,

"chi chi babaji, no! No. I don't were those types of cloths. They are for tatty people. Not maan. In photo he looks so mature and understanding."

"and handsome!" anjali distracts. "he is buff, seems like he works out. Oh go geet." she came and hoped on her bed, pulling geet up. Smiling mischievously.

"for your kind information, he happens to be my future husband, not yours. I would expect some respect for your brother in law" she finished her words in rather respectable manner. Claiming maan, even they have not seen one another.

"jealooouuusss!" anjali laughed, while charging a pillow towards her face.

The leg came as a hard blow on anjalis but. annoyance clearly visible with temptation to murder someone. She frustratingly rests her palm against the door, stopping it before it slides shut. Her foot kicked the soft light brown carpet like it's some sort of heavy material to be kicked towards anjali.
"stay there. Don't you dare come in to my room. My husband, my life what els can you expect me to be? A dreamer like you. It's geet Handa sweetie. I make my dreams." she twitches her eye brow up. A small smile sliding on her cheek with a victory.
"I was only joking..." anajali made a baby face. Rubbing her bum with a sorry face to let her in the room otherwise everyone in the house will force her to work and help on preparation.
"you deserve to be out there. Working. Talking about my husband like that. Let me tell you. I am the future mrs khurana." she smiled mischievously.

Geet only hard about dev khurana from there family along with there dad, John khurana, international business man. Although mr John khurana and mrs avantika khurana no longer live together, it's still a famous family. Mrs avantika khurana have came from a royal background. Understanding and loving with exception. There family is countlessly big. Every aspect about them is so special and loving yet so reserved. What media does not do to bring there truth out to the world, the secret yet no one ever managed to publish a single page.
Geet have been staying way from home for her education matter, in boarding school, she always used to here allot about there family from her dad and mother but never actually met personally. Geets mother always have mentioned it's an Horner to be a bride of there family. & she was all up to explore everything.

"why are you not getting married to dev?" anjali questioned as geet eventually let's her in.
"mama and papa have chose maan, and anyway I think he is far better looking then that dev and he is about to be my brother in law. Would you like to stop talking nonsense!"
"sorry, I was wondering as it ..."

There lips becomes Sealed as rano walks in with geets jewlary & cloths...

"maan would like to talk to you. I know I shouldn't let all this happening but he is such a gentle man, I could not refuge. Very persuasive I would suggest."

me first 👏
nice part
maan is really a gental man
don't want to ruin anyonlife
geet is also a girl with dreams in her eyes
what will happen when reallity appears in font of her
waiting for next one

Geet sighed looking down. Just few days back she wasn't even agreeing with this marriage fiasco and now she couldn't wait to be a house wife. Her heart beat increased rapidly with his name, she wondered what exactly will happen when he eventually sees him, which most likely will be there wedding night. She spines around as rano left a phone along with all the jewelry on the bed, waiting for her. Rano pulled anjali out leaving geet to talk. She twisted her leg, then arm, sitting next to the phone, anticipating for his call. She sighed how silly this must be sitting next to a phone and her red cheek evident that how she is feeling.
"hello..."
He kept quit for a while. Wondering how exactly to ask such a question. To wonder if she was alright with this marriage. Not that he doubt her intention but the fact he wanted to make sure to him self that she knows all the truth.
"hi..."
"elder say it's not good to talk before wedding!"
"I know."
"it's a bad luck!" she curled her toe, hiding her face on the pillow. Uff, she never knew this sight even- ever existed.
"It's a important question which I could not help my self to ask you."

Maan kept him self silent for while, listening to her rapid heartbeats. Understanding what was happening... What was happening to him???...

"do you know?" maan questioned but before he could ask any further anni stoles the phone.
"maan, not done. Why?" she cuts the call.
"I was talking anni! It's rude" he angrily shouts.
"no, it's bad luck to talk to bride before wedding. It's bad luck. I really don't want anything wrong."
Anni pulled her hand up in the mid air, slowly feeling the free space for any object to bump in. Her feet felt the wooden object of the coffee table where the phone laid.
Maan made a frustration face cursing the old thought about this idea.
"let's go, everyone is waiting for us downstair."
"yea! Sure!"
Maan walked in a step without any help, he was rather over confident about where exactly was his step. "hold my hand." he suggest to anni.

Geet listens to the dead phone. Wondering what happen there. She lost the memory of how exactly her body came to the floor, covered in duvet. Pillow around the room. If he have this effect on her now, what will happen after. She took a sigh breath, even more embarrassed with the wild thought. "geet, you are so naughty"
She stood up, looking at her mirror, taking the Dupata from the floor covering her long hair. "how will he look at you?" she made a face, smiling, hiding her face behind the cover, "like this?" she flew her hand up in the air, spinning her self. Laughing, giggling. Why did her life felt so complete? Geet question, almost like maan ki geet fits on so well. She curled her lips, looking at her eyes to look for the reflection. A unknown glow appeared that she never existed. The thought was beautiful, her life felt beyond complete.

Rano walked in, seeing her daughter so happy, lost to be precise... "NT coming soon, and with her husband."
Geet jumped with her mother unexpected voice, she smiled uncomfortable, rather embarrassed at her own act. Her hand twist to fix the duppata, looking down in shame. Then slowly whispered "really." she was more then happy that NT was coming. Her mind & world...lit up with happiness. Her one and only best sister. It's been almost 6 months to her marriage, and here she is, back again, oh she missed her so much.
"she will be up any moment..."

Just as rano walked out NT ran in. She wore a bright red dress that brought out her innocent beauty... "GUdy"
"bebo..."
They bashed in to one another, with a huge hug. "bebo... Bebo... Bebo.. Bebo..."
"oh my god I can't believe my little GUdy getting married at last."
"why are you late? Big katti."
"sorry baba. You know au kitni busy hi... We barely get time to spend some time alone."
"is jijazi here? I want to see him, what's my gift bebo?"
Geet with excitement ran out to discover her gifts, after long time she have seen the big hall way which was decorated with only beauty and love. Everything was breathtaking, so sweet and siren. Big long red Rose brace hanged from top to bottom along with yellow in the middle. Crowds of people traveling from one end to another with immense work but still she could do nothing to help. Her heart wasn't sure what to feel, the guilt that how hard each one of them was working for her or happy with the little child inside with excitement...
"well you lucky girl, you have to do nothing." a small voice whispered from the back, making geet jump out of the spot... "jijaji.." she jumped higher from the ground with a huge hug...

"calm down, calm down sali saiba. Agar apki future pati ne dehk lia... Consider me as a ded man. Then what will happen to your sister." shoria mocked with little laughter. While geet frowned.
"let him come first then we will see how everything works out with only my permission."
"that's a big truth."

Geet giggled with shoria, laughing as he passed a big box with pink rapper. Her red cheek became even brighter with excitement...
"aww-aww, only after your wedding night." geet made a baby face.
"per wedding is 7 hours way."
"then 7 hours be it"

NT walked down with big plate full of jewelry that was send by khurana, each more expensive then another, gold, diamond, expensive perl and most importantly there engagement ring. His one plain silver, filled with small dots which NT found rather odd. It looked like a language that she didn't understand.
"mama, why there are dots in maans ring. It looks familiar."
Rano uncomfortably smiled, "it's nothing, you don't worry"
"per.. Geets name should be curved, not dots."
"how do you know that's not geets name?"
"a dott?"
NT twitched her eye brow up with a curious look, she could easily guess when her mother lying.
"are you all hiding something from me? I will ask geet." NT was about to take her exit when rano holds her hand in a tight grip, dragging he way from the crowed.


Part 2

Part 5

me first again
nice update
so maan want to confirm she know about his blindness
geet is unaware of every thing
her family is hiding truth from her but why
hope will get ans in next update

so NT is nice sister here

ok!!
i think now i got whats happening!!
geet marries maan!!
maan is blind!!
maans family says that geet knows about him being blind!!
he tries to talk to geet and make sure she knows, but any cuts the call!!
geet is exited to geeting married to hot hot maan!!
she thinks how he will look at her, that means that she doesnt know about him being blind and thinks everything is ok, as she is also looking for a color which he will like, but maan is blind from birth and he doesnt know any color so that doesnt matter at all!!
rano is hiding it from nt and geet and god knows who. that means she doesnt want them to know that. but geet is marrying maan. maybe in the ceremony she wont find it out, but after it for sure!!
so why are they hiding it??
because she could say no?!?!?
but arent they taking the right of taking a free decision from geet so??
maybe she would have still said yes (even if myself dont believe that this geet will at this stage of the story, relationship, etc will accept it) or at least met man to know him better and make a decision later.
but so they are just hurting geet by hiding that maan is blind.
when she will know it, she will be shattered and will feel betrayed. she will think that her life is over and that her parents have ruined it.
maan will suffer a lot.
he was from the beginning agaist the wedding as he didnt wanted to ruin a girls life.
he also tried to talk to geet, as he wanted to make sure that she knows everything.
they told him that she knows it, and he will be shattered and blame himself when he will get to know geet breaking down and blaming him for ruining her life and they both will suffer.
i just hope everything goes well dear.
maybe they will dhere dhere fall in love and geets love will also make him see the lights.
well written and great concept dear.
loved both the updates!!
continue soon dear!!

Aww I Think Geet Should Marry Him And If She Knowws He's Blindd Then She Should Support Him 😊 I Think Geet Should Be Happy And She Should Stay With Maan... 😆 And Well Maan Is Maan x

cant w8 for the wedding