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Posted: 13 years ago
You sure are right to say to hold our breathes! coz it sure was breathless rollercoaster ride of emotions and expolsion of passion!! woww.. Thank you
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Posted: 13 years ago
😳.. That was .. that was.. No words for what it is.

Her sheer ferocity at finding that it was her, and that from all of it, all she hears , all she gets is, he belongs to her !

Muskan , the tidal wave of love , and relief and the pain of the last few days or even from the day she first felt for him, .. GOD!! Her uncontrollable fierce love for him, I could feel the radiating heat and pain on Maan's body , her every scratch and pull and bite rendering stings and burns , yet they would bleed of love for her, after so long find an escape from his heart ! and as if she wanted to get herself into his very veins ! ,, Oh yess, thats the kind of love he needed to bring him back to life.. unbound, feral, and tempestuous !..

It almost felt like the most beautiful cleansing of his body, his soul ..! I know anger is considered(and even is) a vice and an undesirable emotion.. but somehow I find its most cathartic in its essence, stubborn in its dubious logic yet the most vulnerable in its truth.

Tormentingly beautiful ! I am going to have to read it again and again..


Edit:

God! his body must be writhing .. Hot , pained, on flames, from her violence , blood throbbing through him ,while his heart and soul in raptures ! I could feel every single sensation in them , with your words..

and then her gentle consuming love, and he, finally free from restraints, expressing his all to her. ..
Edited by ninand - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
kya update tha..
awesome..fabulous...
loved it to core..
i have no words to describe the emotions...
just out of thia world..their immense love and pain and longing...
everything was beautifully interwoven...
waiting for more..
plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
This is real Geet n so i love her
Loved her way of removing anger😉😆😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
wov...finally they r together👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome...
geet is angry as maan haven't reveled that she is his wife for so many days...
first time when they made love then maan is angry...now geet is angry...someone is angry every time...😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ninand

😳.. That was .. that was.. No words for what it is.


Her sheer ferocity at finding that it was her, and that from all of it, all she hears , all she gets is, he belongs to her !

Muskan , the tidal wave of love , and relief and the pain of the last few days or even from the day she first felt for him, .. GOD!! Her uncontrollable fierce love for him, I could feel the radiating heat and pain on Maan's body , her every scratch and pull and bite rendering stings and burns , yet they would bleed of love for her, after so long find an escape from his heart ! and as if she wanted to get herself into his very veins ! ,, Oh yess, thats the kind of love he needed to bring him back to life.. unbound, feral, and tempestuous !..

It almost felt like the most beautiful cleansing of his body, his soul ..! I know anger is considered(and even is) a vice and an undesirable emotion.. but somehow I find its most cathartic in its essence, stubborn in its dubious logic yet the most vulnerable in its truth.

Tormentingly beautiful ! I am going to have to read it again and again..


Edit:

God! his body must be writhing .. Hot , pained, on flames, from her violence , blood throbbing through him ,while his heart and soul in raptures ! I could feel every single sensation in them , with your words..




lovely interpretation..
awesome word of appreciation..
i felt elated reading your comment..
just the same string of thoughts...
Edited by libra25 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
CAN V HAVE ONE MORE DIDI... PLZZZ
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome!!!!
they are together again...
oh they forgot Garv...lol
Cont soon
Luv
TC
Atiffa

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