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aishwarya

@aish_punk

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

nice OS

the story was really romantic! it was their anniversay, and both surprised each other with awesome gifts

he came home early for her, and they made love that night.

thanks for the pm

do write more

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Champion Dude

@snazzychamp

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: aish_punk
nice OS

the story was really romantic! it was their anniversay, and both surprised each other with awesome gifts

he came home early for her, and they made love that night.

thanks for the pm

do write more

Thank u so much. Am really glad tat u liked it.😊

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Joseph

@Joseph_A

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Very Nice OS.Short but very sweet. Thanks for the PM.

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RoohPay

@RoohPay

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

edited my comment on first page. !!

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Champion Dude

@snazzychamp

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: pearl10
res!!! 😃

ll edit tomoro... defiantly u must write more..😊

EDITED!!!!!

well...it was awesome..!! loved their naughty and cutee talks...!!

loved the last line...nupur's point of view abt love..!! beauiful os...loved it!! and u should write more..plsss...ll be waiting for ur next mayur os -ff..!!! pls next tym , pm me..!!

Thank u so much...😃

And yeah sure I'll PM u again wen I publish anothr OS...but 1st I hav to write one. U c em a lil too lazy so I rarely write cz my mind rarely cooks up something.😆