Luv Never Dies (gonna b continued for arsha ) - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago
Angel ok sorry i dun knw how but i didnt read ur previous part😛...but i read it 2day...haayyye charlie ka gussa made my day😃😆...lolz aww dat was sooo cute Amar dropping Shakti nd admiring her sleeping 😳awww dat was really adorable😍😍
now cuming to dis part luv d way he says bestfrnds more important😳 choo chweet😳
OMG faint...he picks her up till 8th floor aahhh dat is sooo AMAZING...luv it☺️
but hahaha luv d way he teases her wid SHAKU BAI🤣🤣...how cute😳😆
and anoder thing i very much LUVD is d way u xplained Shakti's feelings😳...it was beautiful😍
(shakti have understud her feeling but never faced it...she wanted to preserve those feeling inside a small corner of her heart ...her luv was unconditional...her luv was like no complaints and no demands...she never complaint that her luv was 1 sided and neither she demanded that amar also luves her...she didn't wanted to loose a true frnd like amar...and tried to b as normal...masti wid frnds and usual with every1 that no 1 knew that there is so pain inside her lil heart...)😳
AAHH Europe trip YAYYY update sooon cnt wait to read dat😃 hahahaah Charlie has no idea I SOO LUV DAT😈😆😆
AWSUM update👏AWSUM writing👍🏼...sooo LUVD it😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow...im trying to imagine how long it must have took for him to take her up to the 8th floor, now im thinking if we had gotten a kriyansh scene like that it would at least have to be 8 to 9 minutes long THATS TOOO AWESOME!!! HHAHAH LOVED THE UPDATE 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it yaaar!!! cutieee update😍
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Posted: 13 years ago

lol!! charlie ka phone unreachable,..loved it pariii!!

thanxxx yaar sry maine pehele nhi pada tha,...has read ol d prts now,...thanxx angel dr!!


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetshine

Angel ok sorry i dun knw how but i didnt read ur previous part😛...but i read it 2day...haayyye charlie ka gussa made my day😃😆...lolz aww dat was sooo cute Amar dropping Shakti nd admiring her sleeping 😳awww dat was really adorable😍😍

now cuming to dis part luv d way he says bestfrnds more important😳 choo chweet😳
OMG faint...he picks her up till 8th floor aahhh dat is sooo AMAZING...luv it☺️
but hahaha luv d way he teases her wid SHAKU BAI🤣🤣...how cute😳😆
and anoder thing i very much LUVD is d way u xplained Shakti's feelings😳...it was beautiful😍
(shakti have understud her feeling but never faced it...she wanted to preserve those feeling inside a small corner of her heart ...her luv was unconditional...her luv was like no complaints and no demands...she never complaint that her luv was 1 sided and neither she demanded that amar also luves her...she didn't wanted to loose a true frnd like amar...and tried to b as normal...masti wid frnds and usual with every1 that no 1 knew that there is so pain inside her lil heart...)😳
AAHH Europe trip YAYYY update sooon cnt wait to read dat😃 hahahaah Charlie has no idea I SOO LUV DAT😈😆😆
AWSUM update👏AWSUM writing👍🏼...sooo LUVD it😳

thank u so much
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Posted: 13 years ago
i am so confused! when you were writing the dialogues, who was A?
but its good!(:
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Posted: 13 years ago
A was amar ...i'll make sure this dont confused u next time
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey y u dint update yet??? welll u mite b busy i gues! but plzzz update sooon😭
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Posted: 13 years ago

here ur next update sorry for the late just sum pc prob

both reached europe were very excited about their performace both performrd on a latin american dance style SALSA ...the audience went made when ARSHA came together to perform ...the performance went awsum...both were very happy about their performace ...they visited the europe together ...

Amar tries to call charlie but no 1 was picking up the phone...he was confused phone kyun nahi lagraha...

BACK TO MUMBAI...(on the sets)

amar was confused k y charlie is not picking up his phone ...he decided that he'll go to her home to check evrything is ok...shakti smelled sum prob on amar's face ...

she asked him :amar sab theek to hai...

AMAR:haaan sab theek hai kyun kya hua...

SHAKTI:kuch nahi wo bus aise hi...

amar went to charlie home ...he wnt inside a party was going on in charlie's house...amar got inside...what he saw he couldn't believe...he saw charlie some 1 arms and both were very much close...he went to charlie and said :charlie yeh sab...

charlie was shocked to see amar: ah bah amar tum yahan ...wo actually...meet my bf ...

Amar: wat kya bf ...oh bus ...(he had tears in his eyes but he controled himself)ok ...to main kya hun???

Charlis:amar wo ...its ok na ...

Amar:ITS OK...wat do u mean by this ...

Charlie:amar i think u shud leave maine apne frndz k liye part di hai so plz yahan tamasha create mat karo...

Amar:tamasha ...i .i.i...i.main ...just leave it ...(he was in real anger k how can she do this but he tried to control ...suddenly he had call of palki amar tum kahan ho jaldi aao tumhara scene reh gaya hai ...amar said:haan main main ata hun...he was really sad but he tried to b proffesional...but he was in real anger)

amar shooted for the scene but he was luking kind of depressed ...at the end of the day the whole cast of d3 .. boys start teasing amar by sayinh haye amar teri charlie kahan hai ...amar was getting angry n angry but the guys kept on saying amar ki gf charlie...suddenly amar shouted ...BUS CHARLIE MERI GF NAHI SAMJHE TUM LOG ...and went offf...all get tensed ..shakti goes after him as he was very angry...shakti holds his hand and said...

Shakti:amar hua kya hai...

Amar:shakti mujhe jaane do ...

Shakti: Amar gadi main betho...

Amar:shouted...shakti mujhe jaane do..

Shakti :shouted ...amar maine kaha gadi main betho...


amar at end sat in car ...shakti drived the car...both were silent...suddenly holds shakti's hand and said stop...shakti stoped the car ...(it was the sea side )amar got off the car ..while shakti parked the car...(shakti haven't seen amar in such a pain before...

Amar was standing luking at sea while shakti came from back and put her hand on amar's shoulder and then moved in front of him...she saw tears in amar's eyes...

Shakti: hey kunwar ...put both her hand on his face...(she also had tears in her eyes while luking amar like this ...)

suddenly amar hugged her tightly and kept on saying i really luved her ...main use kitna pyaar larta hai par ...shakti said amar bas...both broke hug...shakti wipes out mar tears ...

Shakti:hey amy yeh kya tum mere best frnd ho main apne best frnd ko aise nahi dekh sakti(she also had tears but tried to comfort amar)plz ...tum donon k beech main jo b hua par aise main main us charlie ko ...

Amar:shakti choro..

Shakti: choron ..tum ne apni halat dekhi hai ...said crying ...main apne frnd ki ankh main ansu nahi dekh sakti...

Amar hugged her and wiped her tears: (he tried to control his sadness becuz he dont want k shakti becum tensed cuz of him) aey shaku bai rona band kar chal tujhe pao bhaji khilata hun...

Shakti: kunwar yeh naatak kisi aur k saamne karna theek hai ...mujhse kuch chupane ki zarrorat nhi...

Amar: shakti chor yaar usko ...bhool ja ...

Shakti: main to bhool jaon gi par tu ...and promise me 1 thing tum kisi b larki k liye apne itne precious ansu nahi ganwao ge ...

Amar: theeek hai meri maaan chalen...both went to wards home but both were in pain kyun dil hai maanta nhi ...

just like this vm plz watch it ...a big big thanks to chetna(crazysky)for her support and this vm ...thank u chetna ...thank u so much

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rsBnNknxdWk&feature=channel_video_title

in this vm imagine sharon as charlie and rey as amar and kria as shakti ...

Edited by Angel56 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
anything 4 u dear n this part was


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