SS: Khushis New Clothes!!! Completed Page 12!!! - Page 10

Created

Last reply

Replies

108

Views

51.8k

Users

67

Likes

941

Frequent Posters

uniquebluerose thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#91
Wow a typical fish...and they kissed!!!!!!!!!
I just love the way you have made it short and sweet and its so wonderfula nd sweet...
..Anita.. thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#92
Nice ending
thanks for the pm
iramtheegr8 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#93

over 18-- why?????

when its about sanaya/barun especially?????
654772 thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: iamtheebest

over 18-- why?????

when its about sanaya/barun especially?????



Hahaha haha funny story. When I started writing I had every intention of making it as naughty as it was in my head but when I write the first chapter I just couldnt bring myself to ruin the moment by rushing them in to some thing their not ready for. Sigh!!! I've been meaning to edit that out!
rsk16 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#95
wonderful story.really different n sweet
--Nargis-- thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
#96
Superb!!!!! Loved it. I truly love your writing...its phenomenal!!! 👏
RiyaDutta thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#97
WOW, Minimuffin, u are fabulous hon!!! 👏⭐️ superb SS and updates yaar! 👍🏼 u rocked!!⭐️
U made me sit on the edge of my seat in excitement!!😉😛😃 Gosh I could feel the oozing and crackling chemistry between Arshi while reading it!!!❤️😳
cmileyfreaky thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#98
best. short story. EVER.
oh my god, you write so well! i'm ditching exam preparations to read EVERYthing you've written!
please, NEVER stop wring! arnav khushi all the way! :D

Marybarton thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 13 years ago
#99
I have been reading some of your stuff and I have to say this is the most innocent, beautiful piece I have read in this forum. In my humble opinion, you are the best writer here 😳
udaymanyata07 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
👏👏amazing work..lov it...great job...please update sooon...👏👏

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 17 days ago

A shy young artist pours her soul into hidden sketches, never suspecting they reach an unexpected admirer. Trapped in webs of deception that...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 17 days ago

Inspired by the timeless Bollywood tale "Raja Hindustani", this story unfolds in the snowy embrace of Manali, a free-spirited taxi driver and a...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 1 months ago

In Every Birth, Find Me The night air in Mathura was thick with monsoon rains. In her small room lit only by a flickering diya, Radhika drifted...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 17 days ago

Written on the lines of the film Punjabi House, this story follows a young man burdened by debt who fakes his death and hides in a Punjabi...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 1 months ago

Whispers of Maya The glass towers of Delhi glittered under the cold moonlight, but inside the corner office of Ruan Publications, darkness...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".