Maya my love (completed)l MG//FF - Page 27

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
i hope maan scolds sasha infront of all
as i know maan know that all this is done by sasha
i want u to do this plz
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome update
i hope maan scolds sasha infront of all
as i know maan know that all this is done by sasha
i want u to do this plz


for your surprise going to post next part today evening😉
but it will be not as you expected...so sorry for that.
My story will fully revolve around maan and geet and no one else...other characters are just to add spice to there love...
so i think scolding shasa is not necessary...

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part dear
but where from maya came
i knew they make love but when
and pls make close this MU
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Posted: 13 years ago
fabuluos updates...
loved it😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abisamratgunjan

nice part dear

but where from maya came
i knew they make love but when
and pls make close this MU


yeah this MU will end soon...May be with in 3 or more parts...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Fabuluos updates...
loved it. Thanx 4 PM dear.🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
NICE NISHA ...SAME GEET EFFECT BUT WE NEED IT BADLY👏
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 19

Part 20

MK I came to ask geet that every thing is prepared and ready of there side for tomorrow presentation and unknowingly I kept my hand on the table which make the coffee mug to fell down and it spoiled there entire work I ask sorry too for that..But she is shouting at me that I did every thing intensely to spoil her work' she completes complaining before geet opens her mouth'

Don't act too smart shasa I know why you did this and don't say it's a mistake I know what's your intension..She pored all her anger on her with an angry tone '

Sanjay who is entering khurana office that time hearing geet's voice came soon there and went near geet and asked her

How all this happen geet..?with a soft and polite tone with a caring eyes before geet say any thing maan shouts again seeing sanjay and geet there'.

If there is no concentration in the work then this only happen..With a angry voice he say this..

After that no one speaks...he continues...

If you people are not interested in work then why you coming here and wasting time...now geet's anger is some what cool and she try to explain maan..

Vo vo ..shasha mam did it intensly..you are not a kid geet an immediate reply from him

And its not time to complain about Shasa... She is the chief architect in KC and what's the need for her to spoil your work...Before pin pointing others you should keep your self clean why you kept coffee cup near your papers...You don't know the importance of this papers...You should be very careful enough about this' its your mistake and don't try to hide it with complaining others. I know very well about you girls who acts very well and'saying that he bite his tongue...I don't want to see any thamasa before clients' adi cancel tomorrow appointment with clients and call Mr.varma and cancel this deal with them saying that he left with anger seeing the tears on her eyes which is ready to flow down on her cheeks' which he can't bear any more..

He went to his room with anger and removed his tie and collar button and last remove his coat and throw it in chair with anger'. He finally rest him self peacefully on the chair and said out loudly

what they think about themselves while am near her how can sanjay go near her and touch her..

His anger is not on the mess instead of there closeness because of which he said every thing to geet in anger where after some time he cool down him self and thought'

#What happen to you maan if they love each other and you too decided to be away from them but what is making you anger on them now#' adi entered into his room and said

Sir I called Mr.varma and he told no need to cancel appointment now ..Let we make clients understand and try to postpone appointment tomorrow'

Ok adi do as per that'and you can leave now ..

Good night sir'

Hmm..

After remaining in the same state for some time.. maan decided to leave and came out putting his over coat on his shoulders by holding it with his index figure of his left hand...

When he came down through its seems to be dark and peace he thought that every one has left and latter found that there is a lights in geet's cabin...If she is not here then why light is on in her room he went to her cabin and found that she is sleeping by sitting in the chair her chubby face and cheeks were bulky which says that she is crying badly till now and slept in tired.. Were her loose hairs are covering her face slightly hiding her pink cheeks. He bent down slowly try to move her hair and put it in stands but some thing stopped him..And at last tap her shoulder in the process of walking her...She wake up with a jerk and stand as soon as she found maan in front of her he asked her in polite voice with out seeing her'

You didn't go home yet...

No, I thought to redo this work which got spoiled..Before client has come...

What, you think you can do it before meeting?

Yes, its all not got spoilt only certain parts if I work whole night I will able to finish before client arrive...

You sure geet' she started to explain him that how she planed to work and what all the parts she need to work and how she going to handle...

Which is really impressive for maan' yeah you are right if you work in this way it will be finished 'ok let me too help you in that...

No, Maan I can manage.. She said it with week tone

Maan didn't say any thing and simply put his coat on the chair and drag that near her and sit' and also made her sit who is still watching his action...

Let me help geet 'say what all should be done now and you take care of those file and documents in computer as you are well verse in it... I will see that designs part Is it ok?'

Both worked seriously for some time and at last geet finished her part by making print outs and rearranging files by replacing the spoil papers with the new fresh print outs'where as design get spoil completely maan not able to complete the design part so soon.. But he is well trained in that so he try to complete nearly half part of it which is very soon for geet'

She now sit quietly near him and explaining him about the design which he is not aware off'after a few minutes there is no sound from her side he turned and see her who is sleeping peace fully keeping her head on the table.. He lost him self in that sight for some time and afterwards continued to work...

There is a heavy rain and storm outside which cause a huge thunder...Due to that thunder sound geet wakes up with a jerk at the same time she wakes up lights go off which made to fear and she unknowingly cuddle maan' s right hand close to her..Maan who watch all her activities understood she is afraid and said

Geet it's all fine... now generator will be on by security with in few mins..

maan you here near me na??' am very afraid..

Am here only geet... Saying that he hold her hands with his left hand the heavy lightening made very bright light into there room and through that they are able to see each others face very closely and clearly..They lost in each others eyes for a while..

When lights came due to generators is on they found that they are near each other cuddling there hands so they slightly moved away from each other' with out a wish to move..

Geet it's very late and I think you need rest so go and sleep in that couch'

But this design..??

I will finish that with in few mins..he said with a smile..

She didn't say anything further and simply go to couch and lie-down by seeing him working with out a blink she dozed to slept...

As he promised maan finished the work with in few mins 'And lost himself in seeing her innocent face for a while and after that notice that she is shivering when ever she hears thunder sound and grinding her teeth due to heavy cold... he put his over coat on her and closed all the windows and door of the room and sit on the chair before her by seeing her innocent face he closed his eyes but didn't sleep' when again the lights off she wakes up and shouts

maaan..

As he didn't sleep with out opening his eyes he says don't worry geet light will come with in few sec...Before he finish lights came'.

She found that he is closing his eyes and sitting comfortably in the chair putting his head back wards...she find his over coat on her...Thinking that he slept she slowly whispered...

Maan..

Haan geet,,

You didn't sleep yet..?

No, now trying to sleep..

Did the design is ready..? whith out opening his mouth he just showed his figures pointing towards that chart..Which is on the table..

Thank you Maan'

Its ok geet'now sleep for some time...Else tomorrow we will not able to present properly...

Can I ask you one question maan?

Umm..he say this as yes..

Did you really think that am acting before you..?maan slightly opened his eyes and see in to her eyes which is wet now.. He didn't say any thing further simply lost in her eyes...He get up from his chair and came near her were she already get up and sit near her in couch...He sit next to her move his fingers towards her cheeks and took the droplet of tears on his index finger and said

Is some one in this world can say these tears as false..?? she started sobbing and placed her head on his shoulder where he too patted her with out a words were she too felt little bit relaxed and both slept in the same position..

Both slept for a very long time as its there dream come true they forget the whole world in front of them and didn't wake up until they hear the giggling of all staff.. When they wake up they found shasa is standing with fuming eyes and adi in confused state..Both get up at the same time and correct themselves were geet give him his over coat he took it from her hand with out looking her' with the embarrassment and anger he shouted at all

Why you all here there is no work for you?

Sir, with in 1 hour clients will be here with sanjay sir who already went to pick them up..

Ok adi, Saying that he went out...


Precap:Maan jealous on feelings as per the kuruban hua seq😍

part 21

sorry for the grammatical and spelling mistakes due to my limited knowledge...plzzz comment me with your negative comments too which will help me to improve...

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Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
TanuDDian thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part dear...
lovely...
don't make maan to scold &blame on geet
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome upadte
loved it
jealousy is going to come continue soon

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