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cute story... studied it in one go... awesome... add me to ur pm list...
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oh i sooo luved it sweety...
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aww love how maan ask geet if it was awkward and she replied no 😊
age is just a number😍
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Part 20

geet was sitting in maan's embrace.they are on their house.it's raining outside.today is the last day of geet's exam and maan promised her earlier that after her exam he took her to their house.rano called her.but geet managed her by saying she will be little late bcoz it's her last day of exam.she blushed thinking about their closeness which taken place sometime earlier.

flashback


when they stopped the car near their house suddenly it's started raining.geet jumped up with excitement.she loves rain.she instantly held maans hand and said,

chalo angel barish me bhig te hai..


no way...mujhe barish bilkul nahi pasand aur tumhe thand lag jayegi..chalo ander chalo...he said with frown.

pls angel chalo na..mere lie pls...she made a cute baby face.

maan melt instantly.geet held his hand and took him outside.she started playing in the rain.dancing,jumping enjoying every drop of rain.maan just stood beside her and stared at her lovingly.admiring her every gesture her cute antics.

the rain was falling hard now, both of them were wet.her dress stick in her beautiful feature making her every curve more prominent.she was oblivious of that.maan try to avoid looking at her but his attempt failed miserably.he stared at her without blinking his eyes.suddenly geet threw a handful of water in his face that broke his gaze.he frowned at her and geet ran from their.maan smiled and ran behind to catch her.

geet went to the wooden platform and maan grabbed her.both were
laughing and panting from running. maan asked her for dance.geet happily gave her hand he smiled, and slowly started moving.he twireled her making her giggle.suddenly their slow dance turn into passionate one.he let her hand go and put his arm around her waist, pulled her closer to him.geet shivered when maan kissed her ear and slowly nuzzle in her jawline then in the side of her lips.geet closed her eyes.

he slowly let his lips brush her before he kissed them softly.then took them in a passionate kiss.he kissed her deeply making her knee weak.

maan just lost in her sweetness.he just want to feel her,taste her.taste the water which became sweet touching her white silky skin.he freed her lips and kissed her neck clutching her hair softly backward to have enough access of her neck.he was kissing her thoroughly going down to her collarbone.he sucked hungrily every inch of there throwing her dupatta somewhere.

geet just held him tightly giving in his passion.she felt she is in heaven.she clutched his shirt and pierced his shoulder with her nail.maan groaned and his hand roamed all around her body.he went a little down and traced her cleavage with his tongue.geet's mind went blank and she melt with the touch.she moaned loudly don't able to suppress her emotion.

maan
didn't know what he is doing.he just need to feel her.he kissed her cleavage and sucked her making her squirm.they were in their own world when thunders loud sound bring back their sense.

both were panting and breathing heavily. maan freed her by control himself with much effort and took her dupatta and help her to wear it..geet blushed and hide herself in him

Present

geet came back from her thought and blushed hard.maan became more bold day by day.he didn't miss a single chance to love her,teased her.this side of maan is new for her but she loved it.

maan was thinking how he talk about their relation towards elders.now geet's exam is over so he have to told them before they knew it themselves.he don't want anyone think bad about his mishty or their relation.he is not fear about anyone nor ashamed about their relation.so he made his mind to tell everyone about themselves today.
geet saw maan was thinking something deeply.she snuggled closer in his hug and asked,

kya soch rahi ho angel...?

maan's thought broke by her question.he thought it's better if he discuss about his decision with her.

main humar rishtey k bare main soch raha tha...maan said.


matlab..main kuch samjhi nahi...?

i was thinking to inform elders about our relation today mishty.mujhe tum puri rasmo rewajo k saath chahie.aur islie mujhe maa papaji se baat karna hoga.mujhe unhe dukh nahi dena mishty.mujhe unsaab ki manjuri chahie...
he said with determination.

geet now became scared.she don't know what happened after their revelation.if her parents didn't accept.if they told her to forget maan.all these bad thought started to come in her mind.she can't control her tears.

angel agar wo log nahi mane to...wo mujhe aap se dur karde to...?aap mujhe chorke to nahi jaoge...?she asked with tears in her eyes.

maan 's heart bleed seeing his misht, his pari crying.how can she think he will leave her.she is his life.

aisa kabhi soch na bhi maat mishty...main tumhe chodh ke kabhi nahi jaounga..aapni jindegi ko kaise chor du jaan..i can't able to think a single moment of my life without u.pls rowo maat.pls shona...he wiped her tears with his thumb and kissed her forehead
.

then again said,

maa papaji jarur manenge..tumhe mujhper bharosa hai na geet..?main un saab ko jarur mana lunga...

geet nodded her head and hugged him more.maan also hugged her lovingly.


Love
Saki


pls give ur lovely comment dear...

updating next part...
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Oh wow lovd it
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beautiful and romantic!!luved the rains scene and how maan is so responsible abt them two,geet is the sweetest thing ever,knt wait for maan to tell the parents!thanks a lovely update
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hayeee
thats so sweet...
awesome update!!!!!!!!!!!!!
maan becomes bold day by day!!!!!!!!! haha
waiting 4 next
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Baarish main dance...hmm...😳
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awesum...
i hope evry1 accept deir relnship..
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Part 21

maan hugged her closer.then for made her smile he teased her,

aab puredin aise hi mri baho me rehna chahti ho mishty...?waise i don't have any problem..i love this..but aise tumhe bhuka jo rehna hoga...

geet blushed and try to free herself but maan held her tightly.

aab koun mujhe pakar k rakkha hai...,hmm...fir mujhe hi tease kart ho aap...she pouted.

maan laughed at her cute talk and pulled her cheek.

accha chalo nahi chirata..aab kuch cook kar lete hai khane ka lie..bolo tumhe kya khana hai...

umm...mujhe na pakoda khane ki maan ho rahi hai...banado na angel..pls..she made a cute baby face.

pakoda no way...ek to oily hai health k lie thik nahi hai aur dusri baat mujhe pakoda banana nahi aata...he made a stern face.

pls angel...hum net pe search karke recipe le lenge...pls banado na..she pleaded making more cute face.

now how can maan ignored her.he had to agree.they took the recipe and started to m
ake pakoda.after too much effort(bcoz they are busy in romance)they made their pakoda.they both sit in the window side.maan sitting pressing his back on wall and geet in between his leg.they both fed each other lovingly and watching the rain.geet snuggled closer to him and he nuzzled her face in her neck.they both felt like sitting their all life like that.
they fell asleep there togather.both looking like angels made for each other.

after sometime maan wake up from sleep and saw his mishty sleep on him looking like a cute doll.he caressed her face lovingly and kissed her cheek.geet wake up feeling his touch.she opened her eyes and smiled at him.

mishty chalo ghar chalte hai..it's getting late...maan said lovingly.

umm..mujhe nahi jana..mujhe yehi mere ghar me rehna hai aap ke saath..she pouted.

he pulled her closer.then said,

jana to hoga na jaan..sab pareshan ho jayenge and aaj saab ko humare bare me baatana bhi hai na...so jaldi se tayar ho jao...tumhare kapre sukh gaye honge abtaak...


geet get up making a worrid face.don't know what's gonna happen today.she got ready and both drive back towards delhi hoping that everything will be fine after their confession.

evening

in the evening maan first talk with dadima.he told her everything and ask her consent.dadima became more happy.she always wants that and today it's fulfilled.she hugged him and give him her blessing.she told her that she talked about them to geet's parents.they both went to geet's home.

dadi called both rano and mohinder to sit with them and listened to her without any question.maan sat their with a calm face.rano didn't understood what happened suddenly.

kya hua maa ji..?koi problem hui hai kya..?aap itne serious kyu hai..?

dadi took a long breath and told them about maan and geet.rano and mohinder both became surprised.they just became numb.then rano smiled.she always want them togather in her mind.but didn't talk about it fearing about mohinder.she looked at mohinder.he looked worried.

mohinder look directly towards maan then asked,

maan kya maa ji jo keh rahi hai wo sach hai...?


maan nodded gently then said,

papaji i know u will be angry at me.aap ne humesha mujhe apne bete jaise dekha hai.mujhe kabhi mere mamma papa ki kami nahi mehsoos hone dia.aaj shayad maine aap ka varosa tora hai.per mera aise bilkul irada nahi tha.
i don't know when i started to fall in love with geet.it's just happened.per main aapke baat ke khilaf nahi jaunga.agar aap ko main pasand nahi hu to aap mujhe reject kar sakte hai.main geet se aap k biruddh jakar shadi nahi karunga per ye bhi sach hai k main kabhi shadi hi nahi karunga.i can't forget geet.i will always love her.

rano and daima had tears in their eyes hearing his confession.geet who was hearing their talk from upstairs also have tears in her eyes.maan loved her that much...mohinder just felt glad that his daughter had a person like maan who loved her so much.he have no problem with their relation.but still he is little reluctant for their age difference.

maan bete maine aapko humesha apna bete mana hai aur aaj bhi maanta hu.mujhe aap se koi shikayat nahi hai.har baap apni beti ko aap jaise jimmeder hato me soupna chahega.per mera ek dubidha hai.don't take me wrong beta your age difference is a fact which can create problem later.geet abhi bhi na samajh hai agar baad me jake usse tumse problem hui to...mujhe mere kisi bhi bacche ko dukhi nahi dekhna hai.


maan understood his thought.yes it's a fact.he just kept silent.don't know what to say.then dadima helped him,

mohinder agar tumhe is rishte se koi prblem nahi hai to tum ekbar geet se baat karlo.taab tum samaj sakoge wo kitni serious hai..

mohinder thought about it.then think maa ji was right. he should ask her.mohinder went to geet.she stood in front of him bending her head low.mohinder said softly,

geet beta tum to sab kuch sun chuki ho.mujhe lagta hai ki tum abhi tak sab kuch ache se nahi samaj ti.mujhe dar hai k kal agar tum dono k bich me koi problem ho tumhare age ki wajaise ya tumhari mind change ho jai taab kya hoga.mujhe tum dono ko dard me nahi dekhna beta.

geet understood what her father meant.she said in a determined voice,

papa main samajh rahi hu aap kya bol rahi ho.i know it could be happened.but mujhe angel se pyar achanak se nahi hua.jaab s mujhe payar shab ke matlab pata chala hai main tab se sirf unse pyar karti hu.maine kabhi ye ummid bhi nahi ki main unhe pa sakti hu.main sirf unse pyar ki.bina koi sharth k.bina koi wajai ke...

mohinder amused seeing her daughter's maturity.when her little daughthr became this much sensible...!!! he just looking at her with surprised eyes.he hugged her and said lovingly,

kab mera baccha itni bari ho gayi mujhe pata hi nahi chala...now i have no problem with this relation.

geet hugged him tightly.

thank u papa...i love u so much...u are great...

mohinder went to hall with geet.here everyone sat with worried face.he slowly came towards maan and said,

maan beta mujhe is rishtey se aab koi problem nahi hai...i am haapy that u are with my geet to take care of her always.

maan became happy.his face glow with contentment.he took blessings from all the elders and hugged papaji.

he winked at geet when no one was noticing them.geet blushed and hide behind rano.


Love
Saki


precap
😳 wedding masti😳

next update...umm...on 15th nov...😉
Edited by mishty..sakii - 13 years ago

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