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sehrish79

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: mishty..sakii

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">i promise i will update soon and that also long part...

pls mujhe maat marna...lo</font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">l</font>

Hmm sochti hu...
Hmmm chor diya 😆 Hehehe
Thank u so much mishty
Love u so Muchhh xxx
Update soon and that very long part hehe
Muahhh xxx 😃

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srilu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#402

hai

thi s is awesome and great

and nice one

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sweet scorpio

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Posted: 13 years ago

#403

awesome!

so maan knew that raj was just acting!...nice!...

can't wait 2 see maan's surprise!

continue soon!

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keenu_kk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#404

great dear

so maan teasing her

and waiting for the update soon

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maaneetsangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#405

part 17 ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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renjini263

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Posted: 13 years ago

#406

Awesome update luvd it...ohh geet ka prank aha laga... plz continue ssoonn

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Angel..Drashti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#407

Part 18

geet went to her house with a bad mood.in her anger she forgot completely that last night maan wished her and gave her the best gift of her life.how can he forget her birthday now...geet is geet...she don't try to think logically once.all just she remembered what maan said.

entering the hall she saw raj talking with her father and mohinder listening his word very seriously.geet made a confused face.when she went near they both became silent.geet just stared at them with narrowing her eyes and asked,

what happend..?why r u all serious...?

raj smiled innocently and said,

nothing sweeto..ek jaruri kam hai so u will have to go with me...now...

geet's face worried now..

kya hua papa...?kaisi kaam...?

mohinder said nothing.raaj held her hand and took her to her room silently...

jaldi se taiyar ho jao sweeto...

geet didn't understand anything and just went to get ready.

raaj smiled at himself and praised him..

wah..wah...kya dimag hai teri raj...u r great...how smoothly u took the situation under control...wah..

raj told mohinder that he and maan had arrange surprise for geet.so they took her with them.mohinder had no problem bcoz he believed both of them..and that's way raj also don't tell lie to him.raj was feeling bad for the fact that he had to told lie mohinder, so he told half truth.

geet came out from the room wearing the dress which maan choose for her from that mall.she don't know why she wear it but she feel like wearing it.raj smiled seeing her looking so beautiful even in her simple attaire.he held her hand and took her to the car and drove away.

meanwhile in the car geet try to contact with maan.she want to inform him.but maan's phone coming switch off.geet is now more furious on maan.she pouted her lip and try to think why raj took her away..

raj stopped the car a little distance from geets house.maan was waiting for him there already.geet looked first at raj then to maan.she didn't understand anything.why maan here,why raj went to talk with him nothing.she came out from the car and went to both of them.maan looked at geet and saw she wearing his choosen dress and looking beautiful.he smiled.

thank u raj...u made my day...maan said with humbleness.

its my pleasure maan ji...now geet is all yours...he winked.

geet interfered their talk..
what's happening here...?why angel is here and why he talk with u like nothing happened between u two...?she asked raj.

raj smiled naughtily...

maan ji is here to kidnap u and why would anything happened with us...we are good friends..hai na..?he asked maan.

maan immediately nodded innocently.

geet's eyes getting big with wonder.she looked at them with suspicious eyes.something is fishy.ye dono me kuch to baat hui hai jo ye mujhe bata nahi rahe hai..she thought.

main aab jata hu...took your mishty with u and pls wapas ane se pehle pls inform me.kya hai na agar main aap dono k sath wapas nahi gaya to uncle will kill me.aap dono k chakkar main khamkha meri Gf shadi se pehle bidhwa ho jayegi...he said dramatically.

maan just laughed at his antic.he is just like geet.that's why the bond well together...he thought.

ok...i will inform u...and thank u again...

In this whole time geet just gaped at two of them.her head was spinning...what was that...

maan took geet's hand and sat her in the car and started driving.
geet took sometime to recover from the shock.then she started to asked all her question to him.

what was that angel...what was happening there...why raj behaved with u like a friend...and where are u taking me now...she inhaled sharply.
maan chuckle at her constant question.

geet take a break jaan...i will answer all ur question after sometime.till then just forgot all this and talk about us...he said lovingly.

geet just feel happy hearing 'jaan'.she melted instantly.she forgot everything except his love.she looked at him with so much love and trust in her eyes.maan also looked at her and their eyes locked for a minut.then maan break the eyelock and concentrate on the road.they talked sometime and then geet fell asleep.maan caressed her hair with love.

it was sweet 3 hours ride when maan reached in the place where he planned his surprise.it was a beautiful floating house in tne riverside situated in the side of empty road.the entire place full with some trees and lots of small big stone...

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geet wake up from her sleep and looked outside through the window.she just stunned seeing the beautiful nature around her and the beautiful house.she kept staring at it without blinking.maan went out and held her one hand and took her out from the car.they walk towards the place.he stopped her in one of the big stone and facing her towards the house.he whispered in her ear...

it's for u jaan...your birthday gift...and hand over her a key.

geet just stood numb.she couldn't believe he just give her a whole house and also that's so amazing.she looked at him with full of emotion in her eye and gaped at him thoroughly.

maan smiled seeing her condition.he asked naughtily...

kya hua mishty aise kya dekh rahi ho...?pasand nahi aya gift...?kuch aur chahie thi...

geet instantly nodded her head negetively...

yeh aap kya keh rahi ho...yeh kitni sundar ghar hai...i was very surprised so couldn't able say anything..

maan hugged her dearly...

yeh humara ghar hai...khas karke tumhari...jaab chahe yeha chale ana per akele nahi mujhe bhi saath lana..nahi to i will miss u na...he said naughtily.

geet smiled and hugged him tight.her eyes filled up seeing his love,careness for her.

she asked him curiously..
aap itni jaldi ye ghar kayse kharidi...?u confessed me only last night na..
maan smiled at her innocence..

tum bhi na..mana ki main maan singh khurana hu i can do anything but itna bhi nahi..ekdin me ghar kaise kharid sakta...he teased her.

she pouted her lip.maan pulled her cheek and said,
aab muh maat fulao..yeh ghar mera first architecture hai.. i kept it's blueprint for me and then i made it later when i m capable of doing it.it's like my first baby and today i gift u that.

geet felt blessed seeing his affection and intension to share his most loveble things to her.she kissed his cheek and said lovingly...

i will take care of it as like u did..i promise angel.

maan hugged her more closer.then said,

chalo ander chalte hai...

both walked together and geet opened the lock and pushed the door.she stepped her one foot and a bunch of rose petal fell on her.she again surprised and feel very happy.maan take her inside and geet saw the decoration of the house.it's simple but elegant.everything was perfect.there was bright light in the room whish make the home bright and charming.geet roamed all the room.everything was perfectly organaized.

she opened the window and cold wind filled the room.they sat sometimes togather then maan told about his planning,talking with raj,ignoring her all.she put fake anger in her face for not telling her then smiled.
sometimes later maan asked geet,

mishty tumhe bhook nahi lagi...mujhe to bohot bhook lag raha hai...

geet nodded positively,

bhook to lagi per cooking koun karega...muje to cooking nahi aati...she pouted.

maan pulled her cheek,
awww meri jaan don't be upset.i will cook for u bcoz aaj tumhari birthday hai na...

geet's eyes grew big..

aap ko cooking bhi aata hai...aap ko to saab ata hai...u r a super man..she teased him.

maan rolled his eyes and went to kichen make food.he was cooking indian dish which geet's favourite.she stood in the one side and see him cooking.how perfectly he is cooking.she just stood their admiring him.her gaze broke at maan's voice..

kya dekh rahi ho jaan...?aise maat dekho i feel like eating u...he said in a husky voice.

geet blushed deeply.maan touch her cheek which is red due to blushing.he loved that color in her cheek.geet shivered with his touch.

she changed the topic,

angel i want to cook chocolate cake...i know how to cook that...she demanded.

maan hesitate a little,

nahi mishty uski koi jarurat nahi...agar haat jal gaya to...he said worridly...

aap bhi na angel..main cake bana rahi hu parathe nahi sek rahi...she gigled and took the ingredients to make it.

she mixed all item and put it on the oven.then licked the better which was on her finger.maan is finished already.he stared at her without blinking his
eye.he felt dazed.his control slowly breaking just seeing her antics.he silently went behind her and pulled her towards his chest with a jerk.his one hand is on her waist and by the other hand he caught her hand and licked the rest of the finger carnally giving her pleasure.she first shocked at his pull then feel heavenly at his closeness.when he licked her hand she shuddered with pleasure.maan then remove her hair from her neck and started giving millions of kisses on her neck.his slow kisses turned into passionate.he licked her neck with the tip of his tongue and then then bite gently.geet's knee was already numb.she just melted in his arm.he supported her clauching her waist tightly.he just can't control his wild desire.he felt he is going to die if he is not taste her.he bite again and geet couldn't able to take that much pleasure.she moaned loudly...ohhh..and that fueled his desire.he sucked thoroughly where he bite and other areas.he groaned with pleasure.they both lost in their passionate romance when sound of oven get them back in their sense.he slowly leave her and give her a peck on the cheek and went in the room.

geet's whole face flushed.she tried to regain her breath.then after sometime she maintain herself and took the cake to the table.maan smiled seeing her.they both sat togather and eat their lunch.when they finished lunch it's already 4 pm.they went out for sometime and saw the beautiful place.geet lost in the beautiful nature.she became very excited.

when they back their home it's already 6 pm.sun was setting.the whole area look like heaven.maan make coffiee for him and tea for her and they both sat on the riverside wooden platform which facing the river.

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they sat closely.geet sat on the side leaning her back to maan's chest and maan held her tightly.they silently watching the sunset and capturing the beautiful sight in their mind.

then suddenly geet looked towards maan with so much desore in her eyes.maan's eyes also refect the same.maan can't hold back.he cupped geet's face and and kissed her gently.he slowly nibbled her lip then lick it with his tongue.he tried to being gentle bcoz it's her first kiss.geet felt her all sense lost.she forgot everything around her.she did the same.but all his control lost and maan now became more passionate feeling her response.he sucked her lips passionately and then parted her lips with his tongue.his tongue probed inside and taste her ravishingly.he just lost all his sense.he never taste anything like that.geet first felt conscious.then when he started to play with her tongue she felt she is on fire.her body react with need.she do the same as maan and maan groaned in her mouth.they don't know how long they kissed but when they broke it's already dark outside.

he released her with a peck on lips and she blushed deeply.her breathing ragged.maan held her closer to felt her better.

it's already late so both went inside and lock their house and went back to car.geet looked back lovingly last time at their home.it's now have important part of her life. a lot of sweet memory related to it.maan smiled at her letting her know that he is thinking the same and drove away towards delhi.

LOVE
SAKI

i feel like pulling my hair and breaking my stupid com...😡

thank u all for loving my ff.dear i will not able to updat till 10th nov. i will be little busy becoz of HOLY EID.so please be with me till then and forgive me for my late update...😊

EID MUBARAK
to all

Edited by mishty..sakii - 13 years ago

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sehrish79

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Posted: 13 years ago

#408

Wowww loved it amazing hot superb cute sweet excellent update misty u r amazing loved it dear
Lol computer ko kill mat karna warna update Kese karogi lolzz
Truly amazing update xxx
Their romance was really really good so cute and sweet
Loved it awesome and lol raj is very naughty and cute
Do continue soonnn!!!! Waiting eagerly for next update plz update tomorrow with loads of maneet moments
Muahhh love u xxx
EID MUBARAK TO YOU TOO SWEETY
Hope it brings loads and loads of happiness for u and for everyone
Lots of love
Sehrish

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blue24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#409

Awesome
It was so romantic just loved it
Maan had planned every thing so perfect..
Thanks for the pm
Thanks for long updates
Happy Eid to u too dear..