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loved d story
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superb dear
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family honeymoon 🤣
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It was awesome dear…

Love it………

Wah.. it was nice to see geet understand maan

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finally geet realised how much he loved her
what will happen at the honeymoon
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loved the update...
thank god she finally realized that maan is in his guilt and thats y he is not able to get closer o her
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family honey moon...will dadi accompany them
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sorry for late comment
its Amezing part
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update.
Atlast geet understood maan's feelings n what he is going through.
Continue soon.
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Part 23

The trip to Shimla..

In the next half an hour they were sitting inside our car and on the way to Shimla..

Maan was cursing dadi for her plan to send them to a family honeymoon.

Seriously,what was the need for that?he thought.

Through the corner of his eyes he saw Geet and Dia playing with her mobile.

How was he to control himself with her so close beside him?

What if he did something that she regretted later?

He was confused.

~*~

It was three hours since they were driving.Geet was getting bored.

He didn't talk with her atleast a word.

She desperately wanted to tell him that she now trusted him-more than herself!

He had regained her trust and she was ready to go to any extent to prove her love for him..

She looked at him who was concentrating on driving.

Obviously he was tired.She told him,"mm...Maan,can we stop at a nearby tea shop?"

"hmm"came the reply.

~*~

They paused near a tea shop that was on their way.

Dia had fallen asleep and before geet could wake her up Maan came towards her and opened the door.

He gently took Dia from her hand.

"Dia...baby?"Maan called.

Dia rubbed her eyes and woke up.

Knowing that she was secure in her father's arms,she said,"papa..me feeling sleepy"

Maan smiled and told her,"You want tea?"

She nodded and Maan kissed Dia's forehead and said,"chalo..utho"

~*~

Maan gave Dia to Geet and went to order tea for them.

"bhai saab..theen chai"he said as he fished his pocket to open his wallet.

"Maan?"Geet called out.

He turned around and said,"haan Jaan?"

She told him,"Dia wants green tea"

Maan smiled knowing that Dia was a fan of Naintara's green tea.

He nodded and changed the order.

The man asked him,"aapki biwi hai kya?"

Maan turned red and said,"hmm."

"bahuth pyari hai"

"Thanks kaka"Maan said.

"bhagvan humesha aap theenon ko kush rakiye"the man blessed them as Maan got the tea cups and walked towards Geet and Dia.

~*~

They were all done with the tea and were ready to resume the journey.

Dia was washing her face and she asked Maan for his hankie.

He gave her his and Maan proceeded to wash his face.

Dia was so involved in wiping her face that she dropped his hankie!

"Oops!Sorry papa"she said looking at Maan.

He glared at her and then said,"koi baat nahi"

Water droplets were dripping from his face and then suddenly,Maan felt her hand wipe his face!!

He looked at geet shocked who was wiping his face with her dupatta.

Geet's touches did something to him.

He slowly encircled his hand around her waist and she rested her head against his chest.

Maan couldn't believe himself..

"iska matlab...GEET TRUSTS ME!!!"he thought jubilantly.

He kissed the top of her forehead and lifted Dia in his arms and walked towards the car..

~*~

Dia wanted to sleep on the backseat and so it was left to Maan and Geet to occupy the front seat.

Maan held out his hand starting the car.

Geet smiled and gave her hand in his.

Maan looked at geet and said,"I can't wait to reach Shimla"

She blushed knowing what he actually meant.

Even she was desperate to speak with him,to clear their issues and start life afresh.

Their moment was disturbed by a phonecall.

Geet glared at him and Maan made a baby face taking out the phone.

She crossed her arms across her chest and turned her face away.

Maan looked at the caller ID.

"Adi?"he asked as he attended the phone.

"Gggoood mmmornning ssir"Adi said as maan simply said "mm"

"Sir..uss case tha na?humari Vishal Mall case?"

"Yes?"

"sir Chandigarh court ne aaj hearing mein kaha ki humari Khurana Constructions ki Government approved Certificate chahiye!"

"Very Good...We have that right?so jeet humari hi hogi haina Adi?"

"Nahi sir..problem ye hai ki..The Certificate is missing!"

Maan applied the brakes and geet quicly turned to look at Maan who had a shocked expression on his face.

After few seconds he yelled,"KYA?"

To BE CONTINUED...

Preview-Last part of Revenge is sweet..😭😭

Guys I actually want to thank u so much for the ENORMOUSLY HUGE support u had given me for this SS.

Thank u all..

Love u guys!!!

Sally..

Edited by SallyAmanda - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum dear
so finally he knew she trust him great dear
is gng end
no deear
a great ff it is
we miss this
ll be waiitng fr next part

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