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saba

@luv_DD

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#701

wow. .
Beautifuly writen . .
Lets c wats maan up 2. .

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sakshi

@tanvi04

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#702

i don't know want to comment because jaisa tumne pahle kaha tha ki maan ko bhi realise hoga main ab usi ka itazaar kar arhi hoon aur precape dekh kar lag raha hai ki maan ne ab had puri tarah se paar kar li hai but jaha tak hum sab maan ke chrachter ko jante hai ki geet to tut hi gayi hai par jab maan tutega to uska geet se bhi bura haal hoga kyuki vo ye khud bardaas nahi kar payega ki usne sirf ego ki vajah se kya kya kiya hai i m eagerly waiting for next part pls update soon

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SONU_29

@SONU_29

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#703

awesomee part👏

thank god k geet having such wonderfull frend with whom's company see can forget her all worries😊

bt feelin veryyy bad abt geet😭😭🥺

i want to punch dis maan😡😡😡

geet aur kitna sahegi????????????🥺

precap is scaryyy😭😭😭

i think nw maan's payback time shoud start😡

continue soon

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roopali

@rsroopali

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#704

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Shruti_0505

@Shruti_0505

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#705

very painful update

actually im glad that geet will breakdown

once a person breaks down they rebuild themselves harder n stronger

when geet will do that maan will realise his mistake

i know in this ff it will not be too late but in real life had such a situation taken place maybe maan would have been too late to ask for forgiveness from geet

im glad she has good frnds but even they dont know anything

i hope yash becomes a support for geet after her breakdown

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Amiiish

@Amiiish

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#706

I really feel sorry for geet, hope Maan repents soon. Keep up the good work

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Tinu

@007jindal

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#707

super great
want more updates sooner

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Onir

@Onir

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#708

Hey just read ur ff... interesting concept... different Maan... as well as Geet...

some updates where very painful... but u potrayed them well...

Geet also is now becoming numb... Maan will surely regret his each deed..

would like to see how this story progresses

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590865

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#709

Awww poor geet!!!
I was feeling so sad as I was reading it but ur little comment "jhootha kahin ka" brought smile to my face!!!

I just loved it... I'm sure geet is so close to breaking down n once she'll break down, then she'll stand for herself too...

Loved it
plz continue soon