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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
Congratz on the new thread dear

i really hope Geet realises that she loves Maan
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Book And Rose Congratulations

On the new thread
Edited by shrutheAjay - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 26

Geet was shocked to see the man in front of her..

Was he same Maan Singh khurana..? the evil.. the monster..

Is he really willing to change..?

Or is it an another trap..?

Does she loves him.. ?

yeah geet he is changing alot for u dear But she was blinded by her hatred to see anything beyond that..

May be it was too early .. she never had time to think about her own feelings.. Her life has been roller coaster ride from the time she met him.. lot of roller coaster ride happen in geet life with short period

She sat on her knees right next to him.. she was still unsure..

Do you know what love is..? she asked him in polite tone.. y this ques now geet uh???

He looked up with his teary eyes.. O god he is crying so much

Love is not a charity that I can give it away to anyone who ask for it.. Its not in my power to love some one yeah correct but u can try to understand him an

I DON'T love you and I cant help it even If I want to.. Sorry.. this is all I can answer.. no no u can geet plz try once please

I can't evoke this feelings artificially. I simply can't.. I can't force my heart to love you.. she continued without realizing how her each word was tearing him apart.. How she was pushing him back into that hell.. i knw geet wt u asid my god she hurted him so much i cant believe it

Love has nothing to do with what you are expecting to get, it's what you are expected to give ... which is everything OMG wt is this

Her each word was diminishing his every hope.. He gripped her shoulders tightly to jerk her.. he wanted her to change her answer.. he shook her hard.. in attempt to shook off the answer.. but that was not possible..

No geet..! don't do that.. no.. he said unable to endure the pain..

I love you.. he begged again gripping her shoulders more tightly.. no no maan u r begging so much i cant take this

No...! he said it more to himself..

Please don't push me back into that darkness..

Please save me from myself..

Please... ! OMG how he is struggling yaar pls geet help him please

He hugged her tightly and started kissing her all over her face..

You are mine..! please don't do this.. he said again while kissing her madly.. he is really becoming mad for her

Shut up... just shut up.. ! she yelled and pushed him back..

I don't trust you .. I don't believe you. You can't love anyone but yourself.. you are selfish..I wont give in to this new drama of yours.

You can't have me..

Never...!

Never...!

I am not yours.. I will never be yours..

You will always repent..You will always desire me..

But you won't have me...! wt happen to u geet y r u doing like this killing him wit each word of urs

The devil.. the evil himself was ready to surrender.. all he needed was just one chance.. but she was not ready to believe him.. see geet the devil is rady give him one chance plzzz

You don't belong to me.. you don't belong to my world..

Just go back to your immoral world.. you filthy world..

You are better suited there.. Your nature can't be changed.. She freed herself and got up.. no no pls don make him to go back plz geet try to understand him yaar

Don't love me back.. I can even do it without your love.. just don't marry him.. just be with me as my support.. that is sufficient for me.. that is everything for me.. That is enough to for me to try.. I won't touch you.. I won't force you.. OMG how he is trying to prove his love to her

Please geet atleast hate me.. all I can see is indifference.. this indifference is killing me.. hate is also an emotion.. at least let me have slight satisfaction that you have one emotion entirely for me.. YOUR HATE..

Please don't be indifferent.. I am begging you for your hate.. wt he is begging her to atleast to hate him this really horrible yaar y geet is doing like this uh???

She turned her face..

It was me who was heartless.. it was me who was cruel.. but I never knew you could also be so cruel.. he accused y geet became like this eventhough he spoke so much

He was not even given chance to redeem himself..

He was denied the chance to even try to change himself..

He was not even allowed to try once.. this really bad atleast a chance has to be given to him this unfair geet

This cruel word once again gave its verdict without granting him a single chance.. he was again pushed into darkness.. and that too again by the person whom he loved most.. very bad yaar i think he'll boecome even more worst than before

He looked at her with hope for one last time.. but his last hope was also shattered the moment his eyes fell on her face.. che last chance also gone wt will he do now

So is it your final decision..? he asked in changed tone.. y he is changing his tone now ????

He laughed loudly this time shaking his head.. omg how he is laughing see

hmm.. so you want me to be a devil..? haan geet,..? bolo.. jawab do? he wiped his tears rudely from his face.. wt again devil???

So let it be..!

If I cant make you love me.. I will make sure you hate me.. but I won't take your indifference,. NEVER..! He roared..

I will give you ample reasons to hate me.. Do you understand Miss Geet Handa..! he thundered making her shiver in fear..

I always said that I am devil.. I am evil.. but now I will show you what does real monster do.. OMG he has become the devil again worst than before

He wanted to change for her.. but she discarded him.. Geet u made ablunder mistake now wt will i do ????

Now I would always be a devil.. and whatever I do I make sure to do it right.. I make sure to excel in it.. now I will show what real devil is.. I will make sure that you suffer Geet Handa ..you will suffer.. you will repent.. he barked.. OMG he is gonna make geet suffer now poor geet y did u did like that see how he has turned

I have told you before if you forced me I would kill myself.. You won't have me in any case.. so don't you dare cross any limit.. its my sangeet.. just leave,. Or I would kill myself.. she told him determinately.. O u r treathing geet but he is devil...

Go ahead...! he answered

What..? she was shocked.. see i told u na he has become worst than before

I ... SAID ...Go ...AHEAD... ! he repeated stressing each and every word..

OMG litreally became worst devil

Yeah Go ahead.. you want to commit suicide na.. Ok I will help you..

Let me think.. which way is more feasible..?

Hmm.. you want medicines.. nah.. too old..

Or you want to jump from building.. he paused.. I think too risky.. you may survive..

He rubbed his chin pretending to be in deep thought..

She wanted to shut him up.. she hated his every word..

Oh yeah how about cutting your wrists.. oh but its has already been attempted.. see how he is behaving now giving all sorts of idea to u to commit suicide

Shut up.. just shut up..! she fumed..

Love .. you said few minutes ago you love me..

You were begging for redemption.. for forgiveness.. and now you are... Planning my own suicide.. what kind of shameless person you are..?

What is your problem..? are you mad..? how can you even think like that.. you oly became mad geet its coz u now he has changed like this y did u do that ???

Why is it any of concern that a person who claimed to love you madly is behaving like this.. you didn't believe in my love in first place.. then why does it matters that I don't love you anymore..?

Haan geet.. jawab do..? why is it hurting you..? why is it affecting you..?

You hypocrite.. you want to have satisfaction that some one Is mad after you.. but you can't love him in return.. is it so..? he banged his hand on the near by wall.. very true y she is doing like that pls geet atleast now u change na ...

Let me make it easy for u.. he dragged her towards window.. jump from here.. you want to kill yourself.. do it right now.. he thundered.. NOOO i dint expect this

"You hurt me more then I deserve.. Is it just because I loved you more then what you deserve...?????"

Flawless lines these are me so worried no do no wt will happen
lets wait and see wt happens in upcoming update
DIDI superb update u make us to involve so much in each an every update of ur superbbb didi hats off to ur work didi... i coudn comment since no current in my home i just came to browsing center to comment on ur update didi plz bare with me next time ill comment properly ...
Luv u sooo much
Edited by poongs123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
Mindblowing update...

Expect always the unexpected... totally suits your updates...

Abhi abhi i just started to change my opinion about devil and here again he is back to his devlish form!!!!!

Poor Geet... ab koi bharosa nahi hai devil ka... He will just go to any extent as the chance he asked has been snatched away!!!!!!!!!!

Loved the update... continue soon!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
Congrats On The New Thread
Amazing Update
Cont Soon
Thanks 4 The PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!!!!


I m actually feeling bad 4r maan hope she love him back first cancel her wedding...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
i hate dis geet...grrr hw cn she be so heartls huh
lvd d updt con asap
thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
congrats on d new thread...
wonderful updt...loved it
so again d devil is back
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update dr,
happy that our real devil is back again, mised him so much ,
dying for the next part dr,
continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
congrts fr da new thread !!!!👏
awesome awesome update 😉
loved it !!! 😃

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