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Posted: 13 years ago
hi aniee!!
omg. what a transformation of maan. he does want to give up. geet cant understand him because maan cant talk the way geet can understand. he remains evil to her.

superb update. the multifaced maan who takes no "NO" for an answer.
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi guys...
wlcm 2 the clan...(waiting family)

keep on waiting!!!!!!!!!😍
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Posted: 13 years ago

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Edited by anshra - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yippeee...me first...


OMG!!!!!! i m loving d devil...


awesome update ...

why is geet doing dis with maan


he is ready to change only for her...hw can she do dis with him...
she is accusing him to be heartless but she is doing d same wid maan.

he always maintained d distance never crossed his limits n wht he gets in return??
she calling him rapist... 😲 😡


doesn't she knw...her refusal will make him go insane...
just for her acceptance he was trying to change him self ...doesnt she realises wht he will do if she will refuse...

she is provoking maan...😡

oh...god...cant even imagine wht he will do wid her...



plzzz...di update d next part soon...m dying 2 knw wht will happen next...

Edited by soniyasharma90 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow didi , you updated so soon today ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow want an exhibition of evilness i love this maan of ur 's dare u change him if geet would love him anytime it should be in this condition i dont want him to change i love u maan and would love to see how he stops this marriage
now geet is fixed in her own trap trying to threaten THE MSK now the ball in in his court he would not think twice before finishing her loved ones

do contiue soon waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 27

"You hurt me more then I deserve.. Is it just because I loved you more then what you deserve...?????" so much pain in his heart

Now just listen to me carefully.. I won't let you die..

I won't allow you to commit suicide.. I simply won't allow you.. yeah i knw my devil will not do like this to her coz of her oly he is living but wt he is up to now???

You may not care about your life.. but I think you very much care about the life whom you love.. like Meera.. yash.. pinky.. rishi.. brij veer jee.. and yeah last but not least your maa.. hai na? he mocked at her..OMG i dint expect this kind of reaction from him yaar see devil so evilish in thinking

And who is exactly going to stop me from doing that.. ?

Haan.. bolo geet..jawab do..!

If you tried to kill yourself away.. if you tried to snatch your life.. I would snatch life of everyone you love.. even after you are dead.. I will make sure to kill each and every person you love.. UNDERSTAND.. he roared.. or should I give you a demo..OMG so much venom in his words poor geet u should have thought a lot before sayin any word at him

If I ever find you in less than perfect condition, don't blame me for the consequences they might have to bear.. I won't take anything for an excuse.. I don't care if meteor hit you from sky.. or you are hurt in car accident.. or you even merely trip.. Did I make my self clear..? poor geet even a small sctrach on ur body ur family members are gone ... now i don who is mistake is this poor geet u have bear all this coz of ur mistake ...but wt will u dear ur situation was like tat...

me feeling sorry for u dear

You wanted me to trust you.. you cheater ..! you rapist..! she threw harsh words at him without realizing what she was saying in her own frustration.. O Gosh again she did a mistake man i don knw wt he is gonna do right now GRRR geet cant u keep qiute for a while uh???

Her words slashed him into millions pieces.. poor devil so much pain again by words

You said I am rapist.. ! he thundered..

Haan.. what I did with you? hey geet run some were before he cud burn u by eyes itself yaar so much anger now he is burning like anything yaar

Today first time in life Maan Singh Khurana wanted to change..

Wanted to try .. But I was wrong. I was utterly wrong.. no no pls pls maan forgive her once pls

I loved you.. I preferred to have you hate me for telling you the truth than adore me for telling you the lies.."

But you people.. this world.. this cruel world..

I was a fool to think you would be different

I was wrong...

I was willing to try...

How wrong I was...

Its good to be evil...There is no feeling of guilt..There is no fear of loosing

At least I can get whatever I want..I can do what ever I want

Now I will show you .. how bad I am..OMG OMG wt will i do he becoming more evilish than before an feelin he is correct no yaar try to undersatn maan plz...

see geet u try to trow ur words but see how it can back to u to spoil ur life

Finally I should teach you what this word really means.. I should give you a little demonstration of what rape is.. Maan plz plz forgive her for her mistake don do tha yaar .. she is ur love give her love yaar not pain plz me crying here

Shut up just leave me..! fear was gripping her more with each passing minute.. no no geet don shout at him it is more dangerous to u oly dear plz try to ask forgivness frm him yaar

Oh you are ordering me.. you are ordering Maan Singh Khurana

Beg...!

What...? What do you mean? She asked in disbelief

I mean beg me to leave you... Then I might give it a consideration...

k beg him plz plz beg him dear u ll be free plz use this time yaar

Plzz.. leave me I beg you.. she pleaded...

He left her with a jerk...

That's better...he chuckled..uff great escape geet me happy now

But on second thoughts.. I changed my mind.. he chuckled.. I am not going to leave you no... just now i was happy see wt happen how i belive this devil see he proved himself devil tat he is devil again to me

you should have thought about it before accusing me of being rapist..

so I think we should start from there...
what...?
What do you mean..?
Should I explain you what does that mean'? Haan?
OMG again he is gonna show wt thats mean poor geet i don wt is gonna happen to u me bitibg nails here sombody help me head is spinning for me ...
DIDI wt an update didi so shocking... didi ur devil is too much OMG i really afraid of him now ...
didi pls no more shock for a while now itself i am ufff ... i cant breath after reading this .. u always rock with ur update didi i think one but u giv totally diff but always super duper update me totally surrender to ur writings didi u r always cute didi plz update next part soon plz... and this is for u didi
Edited by poongs123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg I'm totally out of words rite now!!! I don't know what to say!!! Who's at fault?? Who is right?? I just don't know!!

Well geet has been way too harsh to him but still she doesn't deserve this!!! She called him r-word (the word is jinxed! You should never say that word out loud or else something bad will happen to you! A friend told me once!!!) because she was mad, angry, shocked, helpless... But she didn't mean it! I'm sure maan is not gonna do anything because no matter what he still loves her!!! He is mad at her but still he loves her!!!

But I'm happy that the devil is back!!!!

Plz continue soon...
Edited by jazz07_dh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hai

this is awesome
great update
update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
dear i knew u want to give the twist
but in this way
no dear
we cant take this much evilness pls make geet to to say that she ll be
with him for the support
pls dear
i cant see maan like this much devil
pls dear
he asked to change
pls make him to that
pls dear

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