AR FF ~Undercover Honeymoon~ Updt part10 - pg40

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applepie

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Trailblazer

Posted: 14 years ago

#41

that was an awesome update

loved their cute little cat fights

gr8 part

continue soon

impatient to read next part

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Parneet

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Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

it was nice part..:)
woww love their arguements...they seriously hate e.o...lol
but hope to see sum gud moments of AR soon..:)
cont soon..:)

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annihilation

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Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

Mona 🤗 Read both the parts, and must say I liked the concept.The story line seems interesting, and your writing shows the effort you're putting in.You given the story a good start, and I'm sure you'll do a great job with the rest of the parts too.Even though English is your third language (as you mentioned in the note), must say it doesnt seem so given the way you write.The whole of translation part has been done quite nicely.AR bickering, nok-jhoks are always cute :)

Looking forward to the next update :) All the best! 👍🏼

Edited by herms_angel - 14 years ago

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a.vaishnavi

@SankiPagal

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Hey just read your fic.. its quite interesting.. please send me a pm whenever u update next...

Thanx,

Vaish😃

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fri42911

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Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#45

loving it!!!!!fighting b/w AR was so hilarious.

please continue soon.

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Nice one.
Realy like it.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.

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Arushi Saxena

@..Ashi..

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

hey...sorry for the late comment
but im lvoing this FF
do continue soon...
AR on honeymoon...and unmarried..waaahhh waahhh

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danny0072

@danny0072

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#48

great ff new concept plz add ,e to ur pm list

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Sameen

@..SaM-DeSiRe..

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Hey Mona!! i am Sameen!!and i just read ur FF in one go! its REALLY interesting so far! and great concept as well!! i'll send u a buddy request so that its easier for you to PM me :D i'll be looking forward to the next part!! continue soon! :D